MG FF-Winter Sonata-Thread 8 - Page 31

Originally posted by: Shruthe

mein bhi waiting re

hieee diii..
geet khatam hua?

really??

jaldi milega... is so i will wait... nahi tho sone jaathi hoo

Badal bijli chandan pani

Jaisa apna pyaar

Waiting 😃

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Thank you friends for your lovely comments. I guess last part was predictive and hence less comments but I understand. For me this is as much about dedication to original GHSP as much my own FF.

But this part is something very romantic which I have written after a long time. It was quite a challenge to switch gears from dramatic to romantic but thanks to people like Avi and Mona who write such updates effortlessly that I managed some inspiration. I hope you all will enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it….

Also, loads of you had question on Vicky's going away and did have NT/Dev had a hand in it. It is exactly as I mentioned in Daadima's narrative. They involved him in drugs and gambling like themselves and Maan slapped him because of which he left. I hope it is clear now.

Some of you caught on Daadaji and his son...yes Maan can not and will not call such a person dad because I as a writer myself can not digest it.

One more thing guys. I am taking a break and travelling next weekend. So very busy at work and office. Will do one more update on Wed/Thur but next update may be then only after mid of next week.

Avi – Sling for few more days...but abhi toh same day chal raha hai...dunno worry, there will be no compromise in romance...

Ash – Update chotu nahi tha sweety...tujhe bas laga. Incident you shared was very touching. I will also wish her all the best and a very loving family.

Heytal – Thanks dear. Vicky's return is kind of again predictive but I will try to make it as interesting as possible though it is quite a way away in the story. Those family moments are exactly what I miss from my childhood and one thing about being in India...

Krati5 – Thank you dear for your dedication. You won't believe it but I was thinking of using this very song for one of the upcoming updates. Still typing so will see if it fits and will use it definitely if it does as it is one of my favourite too.

Hinal – Thanks dear. Yes, this part which is continuation is all about bringing all those things back which made life beautiful for Maan in his young age.

Niveditha – Thank you dear. Yes, Geet will be bubbly and will get bold as well with him as their relationship progresses. For her his happiness brings smile to her face.

Madhuri53 – Thanks dear...you are are absolutely right. For me best part was too when he connects his misfortune to meeting Geet and change of life...thanks for liking it...

Shruthe – Thanks dear. Yes it was about Geet being the right girl who will be completely contrast to his past except for his mom...

Twilightsparkle – What is your name dear? Thanks a lot. First I was wondering, yeh comments ke liye itni shakti kyon chahiye and then I was like chap 1...thank you so much for reading this story and appreciating it so much. Readers like you just make my day and motivate me to always stay connected. Btw if you want you can also read 'Till death do us part" which is my first FF.

Yes I had written the starting poems on the spur of moment. I am glad you liked it.

Also, I always wanted a strong Geet. In GHSP they never showed any growth in her character and I was quite disappointed when they didn't show her working or her education after marriage.

Rituja – Thank you dear...yes it was all about Geet's entry in his life more than his past and I am glad you liked it so much...

Maaneetpuneet – Thanks dear...rightly said, more than anything it was his expectations and trust which Samira broke.

-Lakshmi- Thanks dear...yes it is my dedication to original GHSP and what all I missed there along with a slightly different story. But I wanted to keep same essence...glad you like it.

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Chapter 53 - Phoolon Ke Rang Se

Sweet melody filled the room as they just stared at each other. Very slowly he lifted her hand in his right hand. Turning it, he placed a kiss gingerly in smack middle of her palm. Her fingers curled as thousands of emotions touched her heart with his one gesture.

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Phoolon Ke Rang Se Dil Ki Kalam Se Tujhko Likhi Roz Paati
Kaise Bataaoon Kis Kis Tarah Se Pal Pal Mujhe Tu Sataati

Tere Hi Sapne Lekar Ke Soya Teri Hi Yaadon Mein Jaaga
Tere Khayaalon Mein Uljha Raha Yoon Jaise Ki Maala Mein Dhaaga

His breath still fanning her palm, he looked at her with eyes drunk in love. Intoxicated, he whispered those words which he just wanted to repeat again and again

"I love you Mishty"

Colour of her cheeks told story of her thudding heart. Trying to calm her senses, all she could do was look down.

"Idhar dekho Mishty"

Haan Badal Bijli Chandan Pani Jaisa Apna Pyar
Lena Hoga Janam Humein Kayi Kayi Baar

Haan Itna Madir Itna Madhur Tera Mera Pyar
Lena Hoga Janam Hamein Kayi Kayi Baar

Pulled by an unknown force she mutely followed his command as they twirled and danced slowly to the lovely song. He was so close and she had to so something, anything to compose herself. Swaying in his love, she almost gave away when she asked the only question which came to her mind.

"Mera naam Geet hai na…phir aap mujhe Mishty kyon bulate hain."

Maan could clearly see through her vain efforts to control her erratic heartbeats. Today he was in no mood to relent. Caressing her red cheeks lightly with his fingertips, he answered huskily in her ears.

"Bachpan se hi mujhe meethi makhane ki kheer bahut pasand hai….I call it Mishty. Jab tumhein dekha to laga ki tum us se bhi zayda meethi ho toh maine tumhein meri, sirf meri…Mishty bana liya."

(Since childhood I love the sweet pudding and used to call it Mishty. When I saw you then I realised that you are even sweeter than that so I made you mine...just mine Mishty.)

Oh dear. His words sent tremors inside her heart. Her entire body tingled and her face darkened like never before.

"Haye marjawan, jab tum aise sharmati ho na toh meri saansein ruk jaati haain Mishty"

(I'll die with happiness...when you blush like this then my breathing gets stuck Mishty.)

Blood rushed to her head and she felt dizzy. Not able to comprehend anything around her anymore she just squeaked "Ji"

Maan cupped her red cheeks. Caressing her jaw line with his thumbs he got lost in those apple coloured buttery soft cheeks. Leaning forward so that he could examine every line of her dimple and every pore of her skin, his breath fell on her plum quivering lips

"Aur jab tum aise "Ji" keh kar bulati ho toh yeh dil aane wale kal ke sapne dekhne lagta hai."

(And when you say "Ji" to me then this heart starts weaving dreams of tomorrow.)

Not able to control his whirring emotions, he bent just a little bit more tasting those soft sweet lips. The first touch of those petals fuelled an incomprehensible passion inside his veins and he was captured in the magic of those bewitching gates of heaven.

Sanson Ki Sargam Dharkan Ki Veena Sapnon Ki Geetanjali Tu
Man Ki Gali Mein Mehke Jo Hardum Aisi Juhi Ki Kali Tu

Chhota Safar Ho Lamba Safar Ho Sooni Dagar Ho Ya Mela
Yaad Tu Aaye Man Ho Jaaye Bheed Ke Beech Akela

Haan Badal Bijli Chandan Pani Jaisa Apna Pyar
Lena Hoga Janam Humein Kayi Kayi Baar

Haan Itna Madir Itna Madhur Tera Mera Pyar
Lena Hoga Janam Hamein Kayi Kayi Baar

At the beautiful first caress of ardour, he lost his entire control. Not able to take the sentiments brimming inside himself, he gave into his desire…his dream. Deepening the kiss he started suckling on her upper lip.

Geet's heart drummed and she was jolted by the sensation of his wet moist lips quenching her own dry lips. She had been startled when he had placed his lips on her but she completely lost any sense of sanity as he took her to an entirely different world.

After caressing her upper lips he motioned towards its lower counterpart and then not able to control anymore, just engulfed her entire mouth between his wet one.

Yearning of so many days broke through the dam and he darted his tongue to outline her petals which were still inside his mouth. Geet lost the capability of her knees and completely leaned onto his chest as her one hand tightened its hold on his neck and one around his waist.

She was frozen by the sensations over sensations hitting her in waves. Not knowing how to react she just submitted herself to his sweet assault. Maan kept on caressing her lips with his tongue as he sucked and moved his mouth over hers coaxing her to give him entry whereas she just stood in his arms soaking under his wet touches.

She was overwhelmed with his love as she felt his softest touch expressing his deep emotions for her. Tears automatically came and slid down her cheeks as she was washed in the rain of his affection.

Maan was lost in feeling her when her pearls touched his cheek. He stilled and came to his senses realising how abruptly he had started kissing her. He turned away cursing himself for letting go of his control. What the hell was he thinking? Just now she accepted her feelings for him and he has probably scared her with his act. God, please don't let her think I had wrong intentions. She is my love and I could not just control myself. But why is she crying. Did I hurt her?

Meanwhile Geet was equally surprised when he let go off her just like that and more so when she saw him turning away from her. She looked at his back and then leaned side wards to see his face. She was confused as a look of concern and then guilt shadowed across his face.

Maan gathered his courage and turned to look at her.

"I am sorry Geet…I just…I didn't think anything just…somehow my feelings overcame me. Please tum bura mat mano and please don't cry. I am sorry…so sorry for forcing myself on you. I promise this won't repeat again. Tumhari marzi ke khilaf mein kabhi…."

Geet's eyes widened at his words as she finally got what he was saying. She immediately stopped him by keeping her hand on his mouth.

Maan stilled feeling her soft palm against his lips. Their eyes burned into each other. Her wet ones gazed at him full of love while his were trying to read those same hazels filled with warmth and love.

Geet slowly brought her hand down as his raised to wipe her tears.

"Aap aisa mat kahiye…."

Colour of her cheeks was telling a different story. Maan was puzzled by conflicting emotions which her tears and now her cheeks and words were portraying. Slowly he lowered his gaze and noticed her rosy lips which had swelled just a tiny bit with the kiss he had showered on her.

He asked very slowly "Toh tum ro kyon rahi thi aur mujhe I mean…" he stopped not knowing how to ask her why she did not let him enter.

"Maan you have gone mad. How can you ask her this? Here she is crying and you are thinking about the kiss…just stop thinking about it. But it was my first kiss with her…shut up…just shut up and focus."

"Woh mein bas…I mean who toh khushi ke ansun the. Woh kabhi pehle aisa ehsaas hi nahi hua. Aap aisa sab bol ke us moment ko kharaab mat karo…woh bas…woh bas pyaar bhara ek lamha tha…meine pehle kabahi nahi…mera matlab I don't know all this and it was my first time. I had just read about it once but I didn't know how it feels and I got overwhelmed."

(That was just...I mean they were happy tears. I never felt like this before. Please don't say all that and spoil that moment...that was just a love filled instance...I have never before...I mean I don't know all this and it was my first time. I had just read about it once but I didn't know how it feels and I got overwhelmed.)

Not able to meet his eyes, shyness took over her and she hid her face in his chest.

Maan tried to process her words and his confusion just increased. "What did she mean? She doesn't know how to kiss? But how is it possible…I mean she was married."

After she has clamed a little bit, Maan got her out of embrace. She still looked down and a pretty blush adorned her full face. She truly looked loved and happy so Maan let out a sigh of relief. He put a finger under her chin and made her face him

"I should have understood. I just never realised…."

Maan left his words incomplete but she understood his unsaid question. Finally trying to make peace with her past she smiled sweetly and held his hand. Supporting her head on his bicep she whispered "He never had patience, time or sense to waste on such things."

Maan could not believe his ears. How could a man be such cold hearted to be not affected by a girl like Geet? He just had sex with her….forced her.

Maan stopped himself form thinking such thoughts but his shallow breath told Geet that he was getting troubled.

Still holding onto him, she rubbed his arm

"Aap pareshaan mat hoyiye. Acha hi hai…I am lucky to feel this with you only."

Maan just tightened his hold on her waist and nuzzled her hair.

"I hate this sling which is stopping me from taking you in my arms properly."

Geet smiled and left his arm and hugged him by waist

"Don't….don't be worried please…mein aaj bahut bahut khush hoon…yeh meri zindagi ka sabse khubsurat din hai. Sabse zayda."

Maan realised her efforts to bring back the normalcy and he finally smiled and pushed her more into himself with force.

She looked up surprisingly at him as he smirked

"Acha…lekin abhi toh din shuru hi hua hai Mishty"

Saying that he smartly bent and pecked her lips lightly

Purab Ho Paschim Uttar Ho Dakhin Tu Har Jagah Muskuraye
Jitna hi Jaoon Main Door Tujhse Utni Hi Tu Paas Aaye

Aandhi Ne Roka Pani Ne Toka Duniya Ne Hanskar Pukara
Tasveer Teri Lekin Liye Main Kar Aaya Sab Se Kinara

Haan Badal Bijli Chandan Pani Jaisa Apna Pyar
Lena Hoga Janam Humein Kayi Kayi Baar

Haan Itna Madir Itna Madhur Tera Mera Pyar
Lena Hoga Janam Hamein Kayi Kayi Baar

Geet blushed at his naughtiness and prised his arm away

"Chodiye..hatiye..aap bahut shaitan ho gaye hain. Kabse khade hain. You must be tired. Come sit down"

But Maan just hugged her form back keeping his chin on her shoulder.

"Dushat…shaitan….jaisa bhi hoon tumhara hoon…ab tumhein hi mera khayal rakhna hai bas…."

Geet smiled and held his hand, taking him to bed and settling him there. Placing sheet on his lower half, she tried to move away.

"Woh Daadima neeche akeli hain…I will go and help her."

She turned to walk away when she felt a strong tug to her dupatta. She turned around to find him smirking. She raised her eyebrows to ask what was wrong but he just smiled naughtily as he picked a remote and started changing the song.

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Abhi na jao chod kar

Ki dil abhi bhara nahi

Geet blushed and rolled her eyes at his mischief.

"Chodiye na…Daadima neeche akeli hain"

"Nahi toh…nakul and others are there with her"

"Par woh kya sochengi hum kab se yahan akele hain"

"She has only asked you stay with me…mera dhyan rakne ke liye kaha hai na tumhein..aur waise bhi"

He pulled her harder and she landed on him

"waise bhi abhi waqt hi kitna hua hai"

He looked at her red face and dared to lift his hand and curl her falling locks around his fingers. Removing them gently away to clear view of her eyes, he started singing soulfully.

Geet was pleasantly surprised as his deep rich voice hummed along with the song

Abhi abhi toh aayi ho…abhi abhi toh

Abhi abhi toh aayi ho...bahar banke chayi ho

Hawa zara mehek toh le...nazar zara behek toh le

Yeh shyam dhal to le zara...

Yeh shyam dhal to le zara ...Yeh dil sambhal toh le zara

Mein thodi der jee toh loon...Nashe ke ghunt pe toh loon

Nashe ke ghunt pe toh loon

Abhi toh kuch kaha nahi...Abhi toh kuch suna nahi

Bura na mano baat ka, Yeh pyaar hai, gila nahi...

Abhi na jao chod kar, Ki dil abhi bhara nahi

"Oh Mishty…what have you done to me. I still can't believe you are here in my arms and this is not a dream. I love you so much."

Love swelled in her heart seeing him express his feelings so arduously

They sat just looking into each other eyes, as Maan gently brushed his fingers on her forehead and cheeks.

He didn't know why but suddenly the urge to be with her pre-empted over everything else.

Conscious of her traitor heart, Geet finally managed to come closer and peck his forehead singing a line too

"Yahi kahoge tum sada ki dil abhi nahi bhara"

Maan smiled at her gesture to manaofy him and finally blinked his eyes giving her permission to go.

Geet got up to walking away when there was a knock at the door. She opened it to see Daadima outside

"Daadima…woh mein aa hi rahi thi"

"acha…woh hum jaante hain"

Maan just ignored his Daadima's teasing but Geet was still very new to all this and not fully aware of Daadima's this side and hence tried to explain "Nahi sach mein"

Daadima laughed out "I know beta…that I can make out from selection of the song."

Finally embarrassed by her comment, Maan closed the song.

"Nahi, rehne deejiya Maan. Dekhiye Geet, aapke kadam padne se hi yeh ghar khil sa gaya hai Aaj kitne dinon ke baad humne yahan gaane ki awaaz suni hai…thank you beta."

Geet just hugged the old lady who was getting emotional in spite being a strong pillar of this house.

"Maan yahan aaiye."

Maan stood next to Geet.

"Hum aapse kuch baat karna chate hain. I want to give name to this relationship beta. I promise after this I will not be stubborn for anything else. Engagement and marriage sab aap dono ke hisaab se hi hoga. Lekin aaj hum, roka karke is rishte ko ek pehchaan dena chahte hain. Are you both ok with it. Zayda kuch nahi bas ghar mein hi ek choti si ceremony kar lenge. I know that Dev and Naintara are not here but we really don't want to wait."

Maan looked at Geet's hooded eyes. They were teary but he could make out that though emotional she was happy with it. He smiled and nodded his head.

Dadaima teased "Oh abhi se ankon ankohn mein baatein..haan"

"Daadima"

"Waise hisaab se toh, we should ask your family about this Geet so I have already taken their yes."

Geet was confused and looked alarmingly at Daadima when Meera entered along with Anu.

Precap – Jaise Radha Ne

thanx for updating... i was so sleepy but reading ur updating status... neend ud gayi😆

such a lovely part... and yes after a long time from u... i mean poora ka poora romantic waala update... missing vivaah...

both the songs ... just classic ones... and so apt too...

"Aur jab tum aise "Ji" keh kar bulati ho toh yeh dil aane wale kal ke sapne dekhne lagta hai."⭐️ just loved this line

kiss was really hot... this maan is real fast... reading about him a couple of updates before, i havent even imagined he can do this... but am not at all coplaining but am loving this side of him...

i loved his incomplete question with regard to the kiss 😆

loved their singing together ... again what an apt song... u r gr8

so next is roka... will be waiting...

😊

Sweet and romantic!! that's all I can say...