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Posted: 12 years ago

KAAALIBILLI - is that u RB - I saw ur index attached there - may I know how many accounts u have yaar 😆

waititng for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read all the chapters at a go. A totally different one from you, RB!
Its really interesting and I really appreciate the kind of research you've put in.
Shyam really does hold a grudge against Arnav and I wouldlove to knowwhy he hates Arnavso much.
Payal is trying to adjudt into her new family and building new relationships.
But then her other relationships are suffering.
Shashi is one of my favourite characters here.
Love his intellect and the fact that this priest who deals in astrology and rituals, is equally interested in science. I love his discussions with Arnav.
Love the relationship Arnav, Aman and Khushi share.
Their interactions are exhilarating.
I'vebookmarked this story.
Now I can follow it as and when you update.
Get well soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Guru dasha for Arnav???
It is very irteresting to read about Arnav through Aman's eyes, the perspective is refreshingly different. There is something about Khushi and everyone seems to be taken in by her, Shyam and Arnav...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi
i like this story very much...

Your writing style reminds me of Thyme (Vertigo)

Are you Sookie?

LovelyArnav
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi,

I see more and more people swallowing your tweeter bait and see you for what you are, you un-sparkling vampire! 😆

I bet you missed my sense of humour.

So... I haven't read North and South. All I know of astrology is through early morning telly where they tell you waste a load of money and feed somebody to cancel out your bad luck or something and a little bit of reading.(Sidenote - i haven't watched TV in what seems like a year now. *creys* so even early morning telly is welcome. Provided I get to watch something. Anything.)

but this is your story. And I enjoy reading your stories. So I shall try and keep up. Payal and K are the classic case of drifting apart... Why does it seem like Payal married into this elitist bunch of snobs, the Victoria and Conrad Grayson kind?

Shashi is fascinating. So is the equation b/w A, Am and K. It's so... Light hearted. I guess times have picked up now a little for the Gupta's haven't they?

Stay beautiful, RB.

-Vee/V323
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Posted: 12 years ago
RB... Caught this one while perusing through my bookmarks on you.

I love how Sashi is an integral part of the play here. Normally you read him as just an influence to Khushi or someone in the back ground, but I love how his character is integral to this, love how relaxed Arnav is around a priest.

Thank you
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely writing i enjoyed each line
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter X: Farad

Payal's laughter trilled on the other side of the phone.

"It's not even funny Payal. Arnav can be really immature when he wants to be especially when he is in this mood to irritate the hell out of me. And finally he accepted that Aman and I don't have a thing going on between us." Khushi grumbled.

Payal dissolved into giggles once more. "Oh? What changed his mind?"

"Aman finally, very sternly mind you, told him that he isn't interested in me. I think Arnav already knows that but he is just messing around with the two of us – me in particular. Since I didn't rise to the usual bait, he started a new tactic to fluster me, asshole that he is."

"Language, Khushi!" Payal exclaimed scandalized trying to control giggles.

"My skin is thickening and mouth refuses to be polite when Arnav's douchebag-ness is being discussed," Khushi replied amicably. "Believe me Payal, it's how I have been programmed." She added seriously.

"But you are having a good time at work, don't you?" Payal asked after all giggles were out of her system. Khushi hummed.

"These moments with Arnav and Aman are the few times when the three of us forget the stress surrounding us or the pressure for Arnav to get the work done. I have seen how Arnav works Payal – he is relentless and pours everything he has to his job. There are times I wonder I am being immature with my point of view by failing to see a bigger picture than he does as he tells me that I lack holistic approach to a given situation. However his ego walks into the room from time to time and his stubbornness drives me up the wall." Khushi ranted.

"You called me to rant on your boss?" Payal asked.

Khushi bristled at that. "I am sorry Payal…" she trailed. "I didn't realize…" she couldn't complete.

Payal chuckled softly. "What are you apologizing for Khushi? I am your big sister and I am sure listening to little sisters' crib on their bosses is pretty much in our job description," Payal said smoothing the wrinkles ruffled by Khushi's entrenchment.

Khushi sighed softly and allowed herself a small smile happy with the familiarity flowing between the two. Payal however wasn't done. "And I also know that the main reason for you to call me wasn't rant on Arnav but talk to ma and papa about Shyam, isn't it?"

Khushi exhaled loudly. "Am I being…snooty about this Payal? Shyam hasn't officially proposed or anything but he is subtly making his intentions clear." Khushi's fingers were drumming on the table and her knees were bobbing one after the other. She was jittery and there was an inexplicable need to fix the train of thoughts running rampant on her mind and she had called Payal when she believed she would go to a panic attack of she isn't talked out of the situation with Shyam.

"Khushi, if you don't like him then you don't like him. There is nothing more to it." Payal said gently. "Can you take a deep breath for me sweet heart?" Payal asked knowing the reason behind Khushi's panic ridden voice. She had eased up into the crux of the problem by raking up Arnav who successfully managed to sidetrack Khushi from path of confusion to a path of annoyance.

Khushi took a deep breath following Payal's order. "Follow my voice Khushi…Inhale" Five seconds later, Payal's voice breezed. "Now slowly exhale. Repeat this again for me," Payal's voice was soothing and Khushi found herself closing her eyes and following Payal's breathing instructions. Five minutes of breathing exercises later, Khushi opened her eyes and thanked Payal.

"I'll tell ma and papa about your inhibition towards his advancements. I'll tell them that you aren't very keen in pursuing him and see him as a man who helped our family in need and you respect and appreciate all the help and advices he has given to you. I'll ask them to stay away from the 'friend' bit too," She said insisting on the word 'friend', "Lest they give him hope. As you don't harbor any special feelings towards him except for amicable respect, they should decline any sort of proposal from him if or when he makes."

"Thanks a million, Payal." Khushi said softly.

Payal chuckled. "Don't be silly little sister. It's the least I can do." She said gently. "Now tell me how you came to lose keys to your desk for the seventh time since you joined this job." Humor laced her words making Khushi groan loudly.

"I don't know why it happens to me." Khushi whined. "I dropped my keys into a small rain trench which was covered by serrated iron bars. How do you know this anyway?" Khushi asked suspiciously.

"Ma told me last week and I completely forgot to follow it up with you. However she didn't tell me how you recovered them though."

"Superman came and helped me." Khushi deadpanned.

"Come on Khushi, don't be like that." It was Payal's turn to whine.

"Alright, I'll tell you." Khushi said defeated by her sister's gentility. It was a fond memory and she didn't mind sharing with her dear sister anyway. "Well, I was crouching on the ground and trying to get my hand in and I couldn't reach the keys. I could slip my palm after flattening it between to bars but I couldn't reach the keys. So this guy, who was watching me from afar, came in and did this neat trick – he picked a thin wire from sidewalk, hooked one of the end, dropped it into the groove and picked the keys out. It was awesome." Khushi gushed.

"Did you thank the young man properly?" Payal asked amused.

"I never mentioned if he was young or old Payal. I said 'a man'." Khushi argued.

"If it was an old man, you wouldn't be gushing as if you were talking about your crush. You sound like a fourteen year old girl seeing a teen heartthrob face to face." Payal chuckled.

Khushi swallowed. "Well…." She trailed.

Payal barked out a laugh. "Oh my God! You are totally crushing on him!"

"I am not," Khushi said stubbornly.

"Are too."

"Am not."

"Khushi."

"Payal."

"Oh come on Khushi. I hope you got a name, address, phone number, email id, twitter-"

"Payal!" Khushi interjected, scandalized.

Payal giggled. "So, name."

Khushi said breathily, "His name is Akash Sampat. And since you were being mean to me, I am not going to tell anymore about him. So boo."

Payal grumbled. "Play nice Khushi. I am-"

"Got to go Payal! We are invited to attend havan at Raizadas. Bye!"

Khushi hung up and fell on her bed, face first. She could hear her heart beating wildly in her chest. Yes, she had a teeny-weeny crush on Akash who worked in a cooperative society formed by small scale workshops which were subcontracted by bigger industries.

They hadn't talked much but just exchanged their name and where they worked. She didn't understand why he had smiled when she told him her job title.

She was hoping she would run to him again but that hadn't happened yet.

She could only hope.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Arnav and Khushi share this sizzling chemistry at work..somehow that has not yet spilled over into their personal lives😃
What with Khushi crushing on Akash and Arnav being Arnav😉
Looking forward to the next few updates...🤗
Edited by tvpal007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
😃

Khushi takes her office frustration out on Payal for a change ...
and can't talk of anything but Arnav this and Arnav that ... 😆
and for a change like a good elder sister Payal offers her ears patiently ...
Khushi also requests her to tell their parents that she is not interested in Shyam
for marriage ...
Payal maybe married but she has all knowledge of what goes on in their house ...
like Khushi's office keys ... which she is supposed to have lost seven times ... 😆
and our little girl has a crush on the guy who helped her get her keys out of the drain ...
Aakash Sampat !!!

Thanks RB ...
Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago

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