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Crinklez

@Crinklez

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#181

I like the relationship between Arnav and Shashi and the mutual respect they have for the other.

Arnav's comment about Lavanya 😆OMG just like Khushi i spat out the tea i was drinking.

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pearl.b

@pearl.b

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Brilliant update...I'm in love with this witty Khushi...she gives as good as she gets.Hotel scene was awsome. Thanks for the update.

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#183

The are truly a unique piece. Even Aman has noticed that Arnav is a different man with Khushi.

So Arnav was checking out Lavanya to ease Khushi's mind off the impending media disaster...?

And the final tableau that illustrates how it can be when these two are in harmony of thought...

Lovely chapter!

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khushiiXOXO

@khushiiXOXO

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

*holding head in KKG style*RB, heading ur stories are never easy on my poor brain...now i have to go and Google Aham Bramhasmi & Daiva Sankalpa!! ...I m really amazed @ ur vast knowledge of things which u incorporate into ur stories so easily...(freak makes me sound like a giggly fan😳

i will have to reread to fully get d essence of this impromptu discourse..

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#185

i am reading your story...it is quite interesting...looking forward to read more

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Amazing and brilliant update,

Loved the way Arnav was questioning Aman about being interested in Khushi, with Khushi being present.

Loving the easy banter between the three, but Aman is eager to know if there is something happening between Arnav and Khushi.

Wow, Shashi and Arnav conversation as usual are very intriguing and amazing.

Loved the last part of the update, Arnav and Khushi just sitting alone together as it was just meant to be, perfect.

Loved the update, it was an awesome read.

Eagerly waiting to read the next part,

Continue soon please xx

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Vrinda

@vrindagupta

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#187

superb update

love how arnav n shashi debate on astrologyu

his theories are just amazing

even khushi joined them this time

also how arnav was teasing khushi

n how she is becoming immune to it

wonder if he will be able to prepare her for everything

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#188

What is Payal's role in this story? Is she bored or upset with her married life that she needs to call and praise Shyam like there is no tomorrow? I know your story has nothing to do with IPK besides the characters but how are Shyam and Arnav related? Is it simply business rivals with Shyam fighting against Arnav's company? Or since you introduce Anjali, is there a connection there? The impending doom, is it business or personal? Loved Sashi and Arnav's interaction as I said earlier a priest who can challenge younger people's thoughts is someone who can I instill new thinking about life and religion. I also loved the banter between the 3 in the restaurant. She must be a heck of an employee to have striker such a great relationship with the top 2 guys in the company. She feels completely at ease with them. The last scene in the temple between the 2 was also very nicely done, almost too peaceful in itself. I need to go check out those big words you used in that stimulating conversation between them at the end.

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sslmay11

@sslmay11

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#189

I'm simply amazed the way to tell a story and the characters that u create...eagely waiting to know more abt Adaptation...

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nsipkknd

@nsipkknd

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#190

BRILLIANT...

I think I must have told you many times you are a brilliant writer in so many words. But this chapter takes all the credit.

Its so subtle and yet intense from explicit innuendo from Arnav to Aham Bramhasmi..

Only you can write like this. You make me forget how to write a comment and I also end up reading your FF chapters n number of times during my travel and grinning stupidly to myself...

I have never used the L word for any authors in the forum. But I am using it I absolutely Love your work.

For me ur Kiran Rao of cinema...(I dont know if you like her work but she is one of a kind just like you)

This is my favorite chapter till now in this story.

Cheers
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Edited by nsipkknd - 12 years ago