Vivah - Ka Safar - FF- P13 - Pg5

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Character Depiction:

Basu Family:
Rajeev Basu - Ronit Roy
Moved to Mumbai after his wife's death from Calcutta. He is a loving father of two angles Gauri and Kaya, for him family time is more important than work, but is best friend Mahen believes that work comes first.

Vikas Basu - Hussain
Lives with his older brother Rajeev and married to Kesar. He also works in the business with Rajeev. Poonam is his life, but he also gives the same equal love to Gauri and Kaya and can't stand their pain.

Kesar Vikas Basu - Juhi Pammar
Married to Vikas and a housewife. She loves her daughter Poonam also her another daughters Gauri and Kaya. Gives all three the same amount of love, but can't forget what had happened to Riya that she only knows.

Gauri Basu - Pallavi Subhash
Age - 18
Daughter of Rajeev and Riya is a loving person and perfect ideal bahu. She loves her Choti Ma than Poonam and not but least Kaya her kid sister. Amit Tondon is her love of her life they know each other from Calcutta.

Kaya Basu
Age - 15
Daughter of Rajeev and Riya laughter of the house and loves her sisters than Choti Ma.

Poonam Basu - Reema Kapoor
Age - 18
Daughter of Vikas and Kesar believes that love happens after friendship. She is a Papa's darling daughter and her Bari Papa. Gauri is more like her best friend than sister also loves Kaya and her Mummy.

Kapoor Family:
Mahen Kapoor
Most famous businessman with a lot of respect for his best friends Rajeev. His family comes after his work but can't stand lies also is proud of his son Shiv and Prem.

Nikhila Kapoor
Married to Mahen also loves her son Shiv and Prem, but also can't forget her past that involved a lot of twist.

Dalash Kapoor
Married to Shyala has two sons Anumpa and Vivan, but mostly stays out of country for business trip.

Shyala Kapoor
Married to Dalash has two sons she loves a lot, but her insecurity made her think all the times that her husband is cheating on her with someone.

Ayush Rai
He is married to Maya also is known as a ghar jamai. As on daughter named Palak and she are part two of his wife.

Maya Rai - Geetanjali Khan
Married to Ayush and lives with her brother in his house.

Palak Rai
Age - 17
Daughter of Ayush and Maya gives trouble like her mother. That's why she knows second Maya of the house.

Shiv Kapoor - Iqbal Khan
Age - 20
Son of Mahen and Nikhila he loves both of his parents, but mostly his mom. His life style is to party all night with girls. He is the most legible un-married person.

Prem Kapoor - Aamir Ali
Age - 19
Son of Mahen and Nikhila he also loves his parents, but his older brother more. He studies in the same college as his brother Shiv, and Anumpa, but Pia is his love but sometimes her insecurity makes him more apart from her.

Anumpa Kapoor - Hiten Tejwani
Age - 21
Son of Dalash and Shyala he loves his mom a lot and can't she her tears that sometimes create a big fright between him and Vivan. He loves to write poetry and good friend of Amit Tondon.

Vivan Kapoor
Age - 16
Son of Dalash and Shyala he can't see his mom always says that his Papa is cheating on her. That sometimes creates big misunderstanding between him and Anumpa.

Part One


Good Morning Papa, Vikas Chachu and Choti Ma

Good Morning Papa, Bari Papa and Mummy
Very good morning to both of you

Gauri, Poonam sat down for breakfast while Rajeev announced that in the evening they have to go to his friend and business partner's house for this party.
Poonam- Bari Papa not again parties, they are so different from Kolkata
Gauri- Papa Poonam is right
Rajeev- Come on Beta this party is going to be special.
Oh no!
Kesar- Kya hua Poonam?
Poonam- Mummy I forgot that we are getting late for college
Gauri- Oh yeah and before we go there we need to go Ma Durga's mandir.
Vikas, Rajeev and Kesar smiled at them than said bye while Gauri and Poonam ran out the door.



After a while the girls reach mandir because on their way they helped two old people cross the street than help few kids at the park.

Ma Durga always keep my family away from evil things and where Kaya is studying make sure she past her exams and not but least my Prince charming have to be a little like my Papa and give Gauri the strength to tell Bari Papa about her and Amit.

Ma Durga when I was little I loss Mummy, but Choti Ma gave me a lot of love that I don't miss mummy. Ma I am so thankful for a loving family mostly Papa without him I'm nothing, but Ma please give me the strength to tell Papa about Amit and me today before it's too late. And one thing teach that Shiv Kapoor some lesson not to mess with me because if Amit finds out that he is bugging me in all my classes than I don't know what will happen to him.
AT ST. MARTIN COLLEGE

Oh shit Bhaiyya is going to kill me!
Karan- Prem what happened?
Prem- I was suppose to write this essay for him because he is busy with girls.
Karan- Man you must be wishing that Pia was here.
Prem- actually not because whenever she is here and see me with any other girls she gets so insecure.
Karan- so you don't miss her
Prem- Of course I do but not that much Karan.


Poonam I'll see you after this lecture with Professor Singh and don't forget we have to go home early today.
Poonam- don't worry Gauri
They both go on their own ways to class, but someone stops Gauri half way while Poonam is long gone.

Hey you!
Gauri- Mr. who can't stop acting cool.
Shiv- That's me and know listen sweetly
Gauri- For your kind information I'm not you're sweetly or like your cheap girlfriend who is standing with you.
Shiv- Oh you think my girlfriends are cheap than look at yourself in the mirror.
Gauri- I'm way better than you are at least I don't show off with last name or my Dad's money like you Shiv Kapoor. And one more think I feel sorry for the girl who marries you because they don't know that you are nothing without your Dad's last name or his money so move out of my way.

Man you just cool down!
Shiv- Shut up Rohit I won't spare Gauri Basu for insulting Shiv Kapoor like this she will have to pay for it until she says sorry to me.


I hope you all will love this fanfic it's new and different. Enjoy!





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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey really nice 👏
i like the idea of being college mates n then hatred b/w them ......................it reminds me of kutumb serial 😃
do continue soon 😳
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yeah it reminded me of kutumb but the whole concept is gr8 go ahead write more!
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really it was nice 😃 😃 😃
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nice please continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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its good 👏 👏 continue if possible
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its awesome.. love the mixture of characters!!

please do continue soon!
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😊 Well thank you for liking this fanfic so much and once again thanks for the lovly feedback. Enjoy the next part.



Part Two
Recap- Rajeev told everyone that they have go to a party. At Gauri and Poonam's college Gauri insult Shiv for stopping her.



Poonam was going to her class when Omi stopped her and started making fun of her and Khushi couldn't see this so she went running all the way to Muskaan and Gauri's class.
Gauri....
Gauri stood up and went up to Khushi saying what's wrong.
Khushi- Woh Poo...
Gauri holds Khushi saying what happened to Poonam
Khushi- Woh Omi is bugging Poonam in the canteen
Muskaan- What?
They all went to running to the canteen where Poonam was crying like hell when Poonam saw Gauri she went running in her arms.

How dare you talk to Poonam like that Mr. Omi?
Omi- I'm scared!
Gauri walked up to Omi, but Prem came in between saying why do you have a problem.
Gauri- It is my problem because she is my cousin and no one dare's to touch Rajeev Basu's nieces got it whatever your name is.

How dare you talk to my brother like that Gauri Basu?
They all turn around and Shiv walks up to the circle saying who are you to talk my brother like that.
Muskaan- Gauri let's go?
Gauri- No Muskaan let me tell Mr. Shiv Kapoor to not to mess with me if he forgot what happened few minutes ago his insult.

Shiv was about to say something but Prem stopped him and Gauri took Poonam while Shiv and Prem just watched them go.

AT THE KAPOOR HOUSE IN THE HALL

Hi mom

Hi mom
Nikhila walked up to them saying why are they so late when there is a party tonight, Shiv hugged his mom saying well actually it's along story, but where is dad.

Nikhila- You know your father pretty well than why ask?
Prem- You mean to say offices
THE BASU OFFICES

Rajeev did you ask your daughters about this rishta?

Rajeev- Mahen they are my daughters and they won't have any problem?
Vikas- So bhaiyya in today's party we are going to announces Gauri and Poonam engagements with Mahen's sons.
All three of them hugged while at home Kesar was trying to find out Poonam's sadness because when they lefted they were happy, but she know Poonam only tell Vikas everything.

Hello Kesar

Kesar- Vikas come home right know because Poonam is so upset even Gauri
Vikas- Okay Kesar, but let me inform bhaiyya that I am going home.
Vikas- Sorry bhaiyya, but I have to go home right know because Poonam and Gauri both are so upset since they came back from college.
Rajeev- Wait I'll come to
Vikas- Bhaiyya you finish this meeting and don't worry they always share every thing with me like I'm their friend.

AT BASU HOUSE IN THE GIRL'S ROOM

Meri pyari Poonam aur Gauri what happened apna dost ko bhi nahiin kahiin.
Poonam just hugged Vikas while crying

Chachu I'm sorry to say but Poonam is week
Vikas- What do you mean Gauri?
Gauri- Chachu today in college these boys were bugging Poonam and she just stood there like a statue. If Khushi did come and tell me than I wouldn't know anything and if I was Poonam I wouldn't listen to him just slapped him twice.
Vikas- Poonam in life there will be many chance in life where me or Gauri won't be there you have to fight your own case.
Poonam- Papa I'm sorry, but they were so many I just didn't understand what to do.

Kesar watched all this and smiled because it's true all girls are close to their father. Kesar comes in saying Rajeev Bhaiyya said Poonam and Gauri have to wear this for the night.
IN SHIV'S BEDROOM WITH PREM

Bhaiyya what are you going to do about your insult that was done by those girls.

I don't know but for sure Gauri will have to pay the price for insulting Shiv Kapoor.
Prem- Anyways Bhaiyya I'll talk to you later got to get ready for the night because Papa said there is a surprises for us tonight.
Shiv- I hope Papa is giving us a ticket to London for vacation.
Prem- Every funny Bhaiyya.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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very interesting please continue the next part soon 👏
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very interesting 😛 can't wait 4 the party
mahen is about to announce shiv-gauri's engagement 😆 😆 😆
poor guyz what r they going to do now 😭 😕 😆
continue soon

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