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Kashish Patel

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Posted: 18 years ago

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[COROL=GREEN]Guys sorry for not updating for along time because I was busy in my exam, but know I'm back.

Part Three
Recap- Gauri told Vikas Chachu what happened at college while Shiv dosen't know who he will make pay for insulting him.

Poonam...
Gauri...
Poonam- Bari Papa just three more minutes.

Bari Papa I'm here
Rajeev notices how beautiful Poonam was dressed in light purple than wonder who will Gauri look.
Poonam- Bari Papa why are you crying?
Rajeev- Nothing anyways where is Gauri?

Papa I'm right here
Rajeev just stared at her when Vikas and Kesar came out saying save your tears when these girls get married bhaiyya.

Poonam- Papa and Bari Papa we aren't going to leave you got it.
Kesar- Poonam aur Gauri don't say like that because us girls are met to be paraaya dhan lekin
Vikas- Kyunki they are always now as ghar ki lakshmi
Gauri- Chachu yes we are known as ghar ki lakshmi lekin the fact is we aren't going to leave you guys, but aren't we getting late for the party.

AT THE KAPOOR HOUSE IN THE GARDEN
Garden was decorated properly, but Shiv and Prem found it so 50ish for the first time in there house.

Prem if Dad ask where am I just lie because I'm getting out of here
Nikhila comes up saying Shiv beta you aren't going anywhere today and you know your father's anger.
Shiv- Lekin mom
Nikhila- I don't want to hear another word got it
Prem and Shiv said yes mom
Gauri and Poonam stood in one concern saying the party is good, but not the ones we do at Kolkata.
Poonam- True so lets leave
Shiv, Prem and Gauri and Poonam both where finding away to leave when they bumped into each other

Tum...
Tum...
Tum...
Tum...
Shiv- What the hell are you doing here?
Gauri- If I knew this was your house than I wouldn't have came with Papa here first place.

Poonam- Gauri Bari Papa let's go
Gauri- Papa Kya?
Poonam- Bari Papa is calling us know
Shiv and Prem watch them go while Prem said Bhaiyya I have a feeling that something is not right.

ON THE STAGE MAHEN ANNOUNCEMENT

Ladies and Gentlemen's Today is a big day for the Kapoor Industrial and for my dears best friend Rajeev Basu's company. Rajeev can you come up on the stage?

Rajeev slowly walks up the stage, than Mahen announce that his son Shiv and Prem come up on the stage. Vikas brought Poonam and Gauri up as well than Mahen said his sons are getting engaged with these girls.
All four of them were shocked
and Gauri went running out towards the exit when she saw choti ma and ran in her arms.

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Kashish Patel

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Posted: 18 years ago

#12

Thank you Rock_star for reading the part and here are the next parts with a new twist in them.
Enjoy !

Part Four
Recap-At the party Shiv, Prem, Gauri and Poonam were getting board of the party when they all plan to leave they bump into each other. Gauri ran from the stage in to her Choti Ma's arm.

Kesar- What happened Gauri?
Gauri- Choti Ma I can't get married know
Before Kesar could say something Rajeev asked Gauri why.
Gauri- Papa first I want to finish Mummy's dream that she saw for me.

Rajeev, Vikas and Kesar were shocked to know that Gauri knew about it.
Gauri- Papa I know it's wrong to hear other people's talk, but one day I was coming back from college I heard all three of your talk that Mummy want me to become apart of the news channel BTN.

Mahen comes up to Gauri than put his hand on Gauri 's head than said that what you want to do than you can do it after your marriage with Shiv, but if want some time to think about it than take much day as you want.

Gauri- Thank you uncle because I do need some time to thing about it if its ok with you Papa.
Rajeev- Beta take all the time you want even you Poonam Beta

Poonam also went of the stage and both girls hugged Rajeev than Mahen said we will let you all know about the engagement when its time thanks for coming to all the people at the party. When everyone lefted after the Basu left too.
IN SHIV'S BEDROOM WITH PREM

Prem- Bhaiyya I can't marry that Poonam because you know I love Pia than how can I do this.

Shiv- Prem...
Prem...
Prem... How can you be so stupid because Papa gave us the best gift today.
Prem- Bhaiyya what do you mean?
Shiv- Prem don't you get it if we get married to those girls than we can humiliate them when ever we want.
Prem- Bhaiyya that's true, but what about Pia who is my life who is not even here.
Shiv- Prem don't worry I'll handle her so we will tell Dad that we don't have any problem with this marriage.
Prem- After giving it a second though I have decided about let's do it make those girl's life a living hell.
Shiv to himself- Yes Prem we will make their life a living hell, but this marriage will be a drum card for me because Gauri said who will marry me without my Dad's name and money well this marriage will be a biggest insult to Gauri Basu.

IN GAURI/POONAM'S BEDROOM

The bright sun shone in the girl's room, but Gauri sat by the window thinking what had happened last night at the party about her getting married to Shiv. Eek I can't marry that Shiv Kapoor who dosen't have nothing but his personally of being cool.
Poonam-Gauri how will you tell Bari papa that you love some one else?
Gauri- Poonam even I don't know how, but for sure I can't marry that idiot.

Poonam- Even I can't marry him because he is nothing like Papa.
Knock....
Knock....
Come in!
Girls what are you thinking about?
Poonam- Mummy you know what had happened yesterday party where Papa and Bari Papa announced our wedding with his friends son.
Kesar placed the tray on table than sat beside both of them and told them about their Papa's decide based on their marriage. This marriage is not based on two companies but on two families ours and there family. Gauri listened carefully to Choti Ma than went to take a shower while thing what Choti Ma said and what happened when she heard Choti Ma talk to some one.
After breakfast was done Shiv and Prem went to their way to college where Shiv had a plan to make Gauri say yes for the marriage. Both girls stopped on the way and went up to Ma Durga's Mandir and prayed to make the right decision about the proposal.
MA DURGA'S MANDIR THAN THE COLLEGE
Gauri- Ma I have decided what to do and I have excepted my kismat with that Shiv Kapoor who I can't stand but I'll do it for my father.
Poonam watched Gauri than also said to god if Gauri say yes for this marriage than I'm also ready to marry Prem Kapoor.
At the same time they both reached at the college, Gauri was trying not to look at Shiv when whole bunch of people came running there way Prem bhaiyya you can argue with her all your life but else go.
Shiv- Got it!
Gauri and Poonam looked at each other than said what to do
Shiv- Gauri like Prem said we have all our life to argue, but right know we all have to leave before they get to us, so please sit in my car.
Gauri looks back toward those people than she sat in the car while Poonam also sat in and Shiv drove off.

KAPOOR INDUSTRY
Mahen sat in his cabin thinking about what happened at the party where Gauri said she wants to accomplish her mother's dream by joining the BTN channel. BTN channel is the world biggest news channel in India that is also connected with Times of today a newspaper company.
Knock...
Knock...
Come in !
Sir you asked for these files?
Mahen- Oh yes Sonia just leave them here
Sonia- As you wish sir
Sonia leaves Mahen's cabin than goes to her desk thinking how she will tell Shiv her feeling she has for him after hearing that he will get married soon to Mr Basu's daughter.
AT THE PARK
Shiv parked his car and all of them came out when Gauri looked loss in her thought for the first time she had run away like this. Poonam snapped her fingers in front of Gauri to bring her back.
Gauri what are you thinking?
Gauri- Poonam nothing
Prem- Bhaiyya why were they chasing us like that.
Shiv- I don't have a clue why
Gauri heard some bells ringing so she followed the noise and all three of them watched Gauri go while Poonam tried to stop her for walking than they all follow her.

Part Five
Gauri listen carefully to Choti Ma, while Sonia has so feelings for Shiv. Three of them follow Gauri.

Rajeev sat in his cabin and looked at Riya's photo and cried a lot when Samay comes in saying Sir you asked for me
Rajeev- Yes Samay, Please take this file and give it to Vikas for his signature
Samay- Yes Sir
Vikas sitting in his cabin thinking about his brother in law Anurag Argawal when Samay came in with a file.
Samay- Sir Rajeev Sir want you to sign these papers
Vikas- Thank you Samay you may go
Samay went back to his cabin and saw Poonam's picture on his desk and picked it up saying I love you a lot Poonam.
FOLLOWING GAURI

Gauri please stop yaar
Shiv to himself- Is she gone crazy
Gauri kept on walking until she got to the place where she heard the bell ringing from Poonam was shock to find a old worn out building with a Krishna's Murti. Shiv just started at Gauri the way she was going a round the whole temple with out noticing them than Gauri faints right at Krishna's feet of the murti. Poonam went running towards Gauri trying to wake her up but than she looked at Prem and Shiv for help.

NEXT DAY AT THE KAPOOR HOUSE AT THE DINNING TABLE
Everyone gathered for breakfast while Shiv didn't felt like eating because he even felt weird at the place where Gauri fainted.
Beta why aren't you eating?
Shiv- Dad I don't get it why yesterday at college every one at college was chasseing us.
Nikhila- Beta who us?
Prem- Mom he means to say Shiv bhaiyya, Gauri, Poonam and me.
Mahen- That's so weird anyways my sons are you okay with marrying my friends daughter Gauri and Poonam.

Shiv- Dad I'm alright to marry Gauri
Prem- Even me
Everyone where happy for them but Shiv had a wicked smile same as Prem.
Mahen- I hope Rajeev's daughters say yes

GAURI SAT IN HER ROOM THINKING ABOUT WHAT HAPPENED TO HER YESTERDAY
Gauri sat in her room looking out the window towards the kids plays in the next door, Gauri smiled at them than thought about how she reached at that worn out mandir of Krishna. After a while Kesar comes and say that from the Kapoor house the answer is yes, so what 's your answer.
Gauri- Choti Ma I still need couple of more days to think
Kesar- Fine beta

After Poonam came she asked Gauri what's the matter
Gauri- Poonam I can't believe them they said yes to marry us when they hate us.
Poonam- Even I was thing about it than I thought of this why don't we personally go and meet them for answer.
Gauri- I think you are right

Both girls on their way, but Rajeev stop Poonam to ask her something so Poonam told Gauri to go while Gauri was going she was thinking about Amit and how he would feel if I told him that Papa has fixed her marriage.

AT THE KAPOOR HOUSE GAURI
When Gauri was about to enter she heard Shiv's talk with Prem so she when for a walk thinking about what she should do.

After she went and sat in the park thinking about what Shiv said than she got up went to the place rang the door bell.

Yes may I help you
Gauri- Yes you may could you call Shiv Kapoor

Shiv was walking down the stairs than saw Gauri he was about to invite her in but before he could Gauri said she is ready to marry you only if the wedding is done in Bengali style.
Shiv was shock because he was planning a Punjabi style, but Gauri's sharat broke it.

Part Six
Recap- Gauri said yes to marry Shiv only if the wedding is done in Bengali Style.

KAPOOR COMES TO THE BASU TO GIVE SHAGUN TO THE GIRLS
Nikhila, Shyala and Maya had give the girls shagun while Poonam and Gauri stared at each other than Choti Ma.

After all that was done Mahen, Rajeev and the rest sat down with Guruji and fix the wedding date but there was one problem engagement can be done on one day but the wedding had to be done separately on different month. If they want both wedding to be done on the same day than they will have to wait three years.
Nikhila- Guruji we will go with the first choice
Mahen- Nikhila let was talk about it
So Rajeev and Vikas what do you want to say
Both bothers at same time said we also think the same as Nikhila
Mahen- Than it's set both couples engagement will be done on same day but Shiv and Gauri's wedding will be in Bengali style than Prem and Poonam's will be in our style if it's ok with you guys.
Kesar- Yeah it's okay
DAY OF THE ENGAGEMENT WITH GAURI KNOW THE TRUTH
In the evening everyone started to arrive at the Basu while Kesar was helping the girls get ready when Vikas walked in.

Looks at both girls than he says soon my angles will leave me and go
Both girls went running in Vikas's arm than hugged him so tight than Gauri went to her mummy's picture hanging on the wall.
Gauri- Mummy today is your Gauri's engagement with Shiv Kapoor where ever you are give me your aishwaad today.
Poonam also goes up to Riya's picture than say Bari Ma also give me your aishwaad.
After all this both girls were token down when it was time, Kesar looked at Gauri's eyes searching for someone but who.

RING CEREMONY ONE SIDE SHIV AUR GAURI AND ANOTHER SIDE PREM AUR POONAM
First Shiv put his ring in Gauri's finger while thinking to himself
Shiv to himself- Gauri you will regret this day when you become my property but one you will be known as Gauri Shiv Kapoor after six days. I will laugh at you when you cry for saying yes to me

Gauri placed her ring on Shiv's finger than looked out the window while everyone were clapping for them.
Gauri to herself- Amit I'm sorry for breaking our dreams but I had to do this for teaching someone a lesson that girls feeling are not met to be played with like a toy.
Prem slipped his ring on Poonam's finger with a smile

same with Poonam but she saw the pain in Gauri's eyes today for getting engaged to Shiv.

DANCE DONE BY MEERA SINGH/ NOISE FROM OUTHOUSE AND RIYA'S DIARY
Lights are dim while greatest dance Ms. Meera was going to perform on Main Vari Vari

aa aa ...
tumhari adao pe main vari vari - 8
har ek baat hain jaise - 2
meethi karaari
tumhari adao pe main vari vari - 2
haa..
chalate ho jo naino ke baan tikhe
nishaana tumh aaisa kaha se ho sikhe
ke dil mein kasak ho magar pyari pyari
tumhari adao pe main vari vari - 2
Gauri didn't feel like staying for this song so she went out for a walk when she heard noise coming form the outhouse so decides to go there. Shiv stood by Prem saying this is the worst party ever.
Prem- It's our engagement party
Gauri tried hard tp listen but she couldn't hear anything after a while they were coming out so Gauri hide behind the bush when she saw Amit walking out with her Papa for a sec she was shock.
aaa...
kabhi ek chaman tha main jisko kali thi
ke phoolon ke sejo pe hi palegi
Than she decides to in and check out the place because her father always stopped everyone from going in there and today was her chance. Gauri went in and found many pics of her mother and someone else she had seen somewhere at someone's party. Gauri's feet automatically walked toward a picture where it was ripped and she placed her hand there a small diary falls out with her mothers name on it.
na bechain din thein na betaab raatein
na tumse mili thi main tab hi bhali thi
Gauri found her mother's diary - RIYA WALIA'S DIARY
Gauri sat down on the bed and open to the first page
People who dream are always want so much more but I never dreamed of having anything. During my college days I met Anurag Patel, Anurag was a good friend on mine than slow be became much more. When I tried to tell Papa he already fix my marriage with Rajeev Basu but at the same time I was pregnant with Anu's child. I know what I did was wrong but in love who can you control your self but that night even it wasn't our fault because someone had mixed something in our drink that made us do this. When the doctor told me I was three month's pregnant with twins I was so happy even Anurag, we felt our world was full lekin I was wrong.
While Gauri was reading the diary when a picture falls down she picked it up the picture facing backwards with written Riya loves Anurag she slowly flipped the picture

reads more.
Anurag said not to worry he will do something but the wedding day came closer and when the day came I called Anurag a lot but his cell kept on saying it was unreachable after Papa came and took me to the mandup. That moment I felt like killing myself than I thought about my kids next I notice I was at the Basu empire.
BACK TO THE PARTY / OUT HOUSE
Shiv was getting board so he decide to go look for Gauri because she didn't come back from the walk and he could argue with her for fun while Meera was dancing and looked at Kesar with a little tears than slowly saw Rajeev and her pain came back how she was separated for her family and her sister when she was a kid.
badi mehangi mujhko padi tumse yaari - 2
tumhari adaao pe main vari vari - 2
har ek baat hain jaise meethi karaari
tumhari adao pe main vari vari - 3
Kesar asked Poonam if she had seen Gauri than she also notice Shiv wasn't there so she thought they might be together and stayed enjoying the dance while Gauri reads on farther and Shiv walks around the garden with many flowers.
Rajeev had excepted my pregnancy on the first night and also told him that I still loved Anurag so I need time for this marriage after three days Rajeev went for a business trip out of country for one year. After I get a call from Anurag but he didn't sound to good so I asked him where he was before he could say a word I heard my father's voice. I knew Anu was in trouble than I traced Anu's call found him in a basement tied up.

Gauri shut her eyes than read more of the diary
Slowly my days were coming so close and Anu was always on my side even though I was married. Anu was about to go office when I screamed in pain next I woke up in the hospital with two twin girls. When Anu took me back to his house we named our babies Gauri and Siya, Anu had named Gauri and I named the youngest one Siya. Our life was filled than slowly the year was coming to a end and Rajeev was suppose to return Anurag had cried because he didn't want to leave me and his kids but I made him understood that I'll meet him with Gauri and Siya soon. It was Sunday a day before the girls birthday Rajeev came home he wasn't that happy to see the babies his attitude had changed for some reason. Next day it was the girls birthday I met Anu with them Anu put a locket on girls neck after I went back we kept a party that night I never knew it would change my life.

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@ching

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Posted: 18 years ago

#13

oh my god too good
con't soon 😛

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Roop

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Posted: 18 years ago

#14

awesome part 👏 👏
lots of suspense in it

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Mauli

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Posted: 18 years ago

#15

omgg... continue!!
too good! 👏

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prishika

@prishika

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Posted: 18 years ago

#16

omg..........ur good

i like ur ff...lots of twists>>>but as long as we get the answers toooo...thats' all that matters 😆

nice ff...continue soon

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zainab

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Posted: 18 years ago

#17

omg omg omg so finally deyr gonna marry to teach each other a lesson can't wait to see wat dey do 😳

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Kashish Patel

@Jai-Bani_Kasamh

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Posted: 18 years ago

#18

Guys I know I'm suppose to pose for this week but I was busy with schoolwork and one of my course I have to do it by myself so here are nine part enjoy them!
If I can't update each week than I'll mainly do them on Firdays to Saturday because one day with school work.
Here are thre parts 😊

Part seven
Recap- Gauri heard some kind of noise from the out house and saw Amit walking out with her father after Gauri started to read her Mummy's diary.

Gauri flipped the pages and found few of the pages missing than a picture falls out Gauri picked it up than was shock to she it after staring at it. Gauri than remembers when she bumped into Meera she saw the same pic and when I asked she said it was her childhood picture. Gauri looked at her self in the mirror sayings she is not Rajeev's daughter but Anurag's daughter who is still alive because she was told by her Papa that she died in accident.
main vari vari - 3
chalate ho jo naino ke baan tikhe
nishaana tum aaisa kaha se ho sikhe
ke dil mein kasak ho magar pyari pyari
vaari ..
main vaari vaari - 10
tumhari adao pe main vaari vaar
OUT HOUSE AND SHIV PUTS HIS ARMS ON GAURI'S WAIST
Gauri- That mean Meera is another than Siya Patel and she is alive.
Shiv- There you are?
Gauri turns back- Why do you care?

Shiv walks toward Gauri than say after all you are going to be my future wife in six days
Gauri removes Shiv's hands well I'm not your wife right know so please handle your hands until six days than she remembered Siya she when running toward the house by the door she hears a voice saying I want to tell you all something. Gauri was shock so she went to the light switch boxes outside and pulled out the tube and walked inside pulled Meera's hand and took her up the stairs because she knows the house pretty well in the dark.
GAURI TAKES MEERA/SIYA TO HER ROOM
Meera- Please leave me

Gauri than opens her room and took Meera in with her and the lights come on.
Meera- How dare you touch Ms. Meera Singh the dancer?
Gauri- I'm sorry for doing this but if I didn't than you would have told everyone the truth.
Meera shocked than says how do you know?
Gauri- Because I'm your older sister Siya

Meera- How do you know all this?
Gauri told her how she found out than she said it's risky to talk here we should meet tomorrow where no one can find us Siya because if Rajeev Papa sees me talking with you than he will know.
Siya- Fine Gauri just come to my place tomorrow by the river side of your college.
Gauri- Ok
They both hugged each other while Rajeev was walking up the stairs to Gauri's room he opened the door.
Gauri- Papa what's the matter?

Rajeev- I heard some voices that's why I came
Gauri- Papa I was on the phone
Rajeev than left the room Siya comes out of the bathroom than hugs Gauri for the last time than leaves her room after Gauri walk down the stairs and says by to her in laws. Poonam took Gauri with her up back to the room and she hugged her saying that she feels scared if they did the right thing.
Gauri- Yes Poonam we did the right thing because who we trust they aren't always right for us

Poonam- What Gauri?
Gauri- Nothing, let's change and go bed because tomorrow college than shopping for my wedding because of the dates.
Poonam- You know what Gauri at least I'll be welcomed by you
Both of them hug each other while Gauri to herself saying for the first time I'm hiding this from you Poonam because I don't want you to loose the trust you have on my Papa.
After Poonam went to change Gauri went up to the calendar and crossed of today's date January 25, 2007 than slowly walks toward the window and looks up the stars and talks to her Ma.
Talking to Mummy- Ma today I found out who I called Papa..
Papa it another than who stole you guys from me and kept a secrete that my twin sister is alive for that I can't forgive him. Mummy which Amit I trusted also have played with my emotions but I will also teach him a lesson. Please Mummy, Papa give me your aishwaad and the strength to find Anurag Patel my real father.

NEXT DAY IN SHIV'S ROOM WHILE GETTING READY FOR COLLEGE

Shiv looks for his white shirt than for his glass than he see his ring on the dresser that Gauri put on his finger he picked it up and was about to throw it when thought of a different plan.
To himself- Yesterday I saw the pain in Gauri's eyes when she place the ring on my finger why don't I make her do it again today in front of the whole college for sure Gauri will be in more pain.
After he went to Perm's room to ask him if he was coming but he said no so he lefted without having breakfast.
DURGA MA'S MANDIR

Gauri praying- Ma I always thought I would have to fight for my peachaan but today I'm willing to do it for my parents and Siya my sister. Kash Ma if my mummy was alive than today I wouldn't be this alone.

Beti even thought we fight for the truth always we have to give so many agni pareeksha to bring out the truth, even I know you will pass all these kasauti like that but it will also give you pain.
Gauri- What else to be in pain all my life who I have trusted they are the one to give me this pain.
Guruji- Beti zindagi ek safar hai and we have to find the truth hidden in a riddle and which path you have chosen will guide you to the truth also don't stop the happiness coming your way except it with a smile who know they might be able to help you.
After hearing the guruji Gauri turns around and takes blessing for Ma

after touch the guruji's feet for aishwaad he said Ma will always protect you in your path and will grate your wish to.

COLLEGE CANTEEN WITH SHIV
Muskaan and Khushi came hugged Gauri while Khushi was looking for Poonam.
Khushi- Gauri didn't Poonam come?
Gauri- Khushi actually Poonam wasn't feeling good so Chachu told her to stay home
Muskaan-let's go to the canteen know before the next class
Gauri- Muskaan will you give me the notes because I have to go some where important soon anyway let's go
All three of them go to the canteen where Shiv was waiting for Gauri to come, Gauri was about to sit when Shiv yells out aloud.

Hey sweet heart
Gauri turns back and walks up to Shiv saying how can you forget what I said to you yesterday.
Shiv- I know Gauri you said wait until six days after you become my legal wife, but you can put this ring back on my finger.
Gauri- What ring?
Shiv- The one you put on my finger yesterday
Gauri was about to say something then she notice Amit and remembered him coming out with her Papa who as always broke her vishaas so she placed her hand on Shiv's shoulder.
Gauri- You know your right that affair was only in front of our families and close friends, but not the entire college.
Shiv- True
Gauri takes the ring from him than puts it on Shiv's finger while looking at Amit with a smile. After Amit saw this and walked out with anger on his face and Gauri stood there with a fake smile than looked at the clock and leaves before Shiv could say a word.

Gauri walks toward the gate looking for a taxi when tears were rolling down her face Shiv touches her shoulder to ask her something but Gauri wipes her tear saying she was to go know and sits in the taxi.

Part eight
Recap- Gauri put the ring on Shiv's finger in front of the college to see Amit in pain because he have broken her trust.

Shiv stood by the gate and watch Gauri go in the taxi, but what he was planning nothing like that happened only Gauri did what he asked without any pain only with a smile.
AT SIYA'S FLAT
Gauri paid the taxi driver than walked up the stairs to Siya's flat but on the name plate it said Meera Singh.

Hi Gauri
Come in before anyone see you
Gauri walked in the flat up looked at Siya's place it was small and prefect according to her after Gauri hugged her and started to cry.
Siya- What happened?
Gauri- Who I trusted the most people in her life they are the one to break her apart like that
Siya- You mean to say Amit Tondon
Gauri shook her head than Siya wiped her tears saying do you some coffee or soft drink
Gauri- Soft drink because I don't drink coffee or Chai

Gauri- Tell me why you change your name to Meera Singh?
Siya- Actually Di according to the police records Siya Basu as died, but I knew the truth
Gauri- What kind of truth?
Siya closed her eyes than said how can I forget that day when Mummy took me to meet Anu Papa for his birthday on March 19. After a while we sat than he cut the cake with me we were missing you that day so much because you were gone for a camp out of Kolkata.
Gauri- And when I came back Rajeev Papa told me mummy and you died in accident.
Siya- That's all a lie because that night when Mummy put me to asleep at Anu Papa's place I woke up by the bell and went down stair because I heard some noise I saw Mummy running from Rajeev Papa than she grabbed me and we hided in the kitchen. I asked mummy what happened why Rajeev Papa is trying to hurt us.

FLASHBACK OF THE GIRLS BIRTHDAY WHERE RIYA TELLS SIYA WHAT HAPPENED

Gauri- What happened after Siya?
Siya- Mummy told me what to her on our birthday she said that Rajeev Papa called her to the outhouse for some reason she lefted us my Kesar Chachi.
Riya- Rajeev why you called me?
Rajeev locked the door behind her than said this one whole year I waited for you, but you always loved your lover Anurag Patel even I didn't want you to give birth to his child but I was hopeless than one day I asked for my family you ignored me and went to meet Anurag.
Riya- What are you taking about?
Rajeev- I'll show you what I'm talking about
Both girls closes their eyes than looked at each other they knew what had happen their Mummy was raped by Rajeev Papa and that's how Kaya was born, but both girls knew their Ma always loved their father, but she also loved Kaya even thought she was the symbol of that night.

Gauri- What happened at Anu Papa's place?

Siya- After I heard Anu Papa's voices coming from the outside so we ran to the window before he could see us Rajeev Papa stabbed Anu Papa with the knife Mummy ran out to Anu Papa than she was also stabbed. I was staring out the window than Rajeev Papa placed the whole house on fire but I wouldn't be alive today if Veena auntie saved me from that fire and grew me up as her own daughter.

Gauri walked up toward their parent's photo on Siya's wall she than remember she saw Anu Papa with Choti Ma at Daddy's party.

Siya- What are you doing?
Why are you taking the flower necklace (they put on the picture when people are dead)?
Gauri- Kyunki I seen him at Daddy's party
Siya- Daddy!
Gauri- I mean to say my in law's house party I went to and I saw him with Kesar Choti Ma.
Siya- That means we have to play our games with only Rajeev Basu because I also know that Vikas Chachu and Kesar Chachi are nice even Poonam.
Gauri- Why don't we tell Choti Ma about our mission
Siya- No Di we can't do that we will just have to find him alone if he is alive.
Gauri looked at her watch than said it's late I better go before my in laws get there and Shiv if he screws up than I'll be dead.
Siya- You go, but what will be our next step di
Gauri- Yesterday was my engagement, so today we all are going shopping for the menhdi than next day it will be my sangeet after it will be my last day at the Basu because on 31st Jan is my wedding so at my sangeet you will come as my friend than on my wedding you will also come but those two days we will give Rajeev Papa a small little treat. bye know Siya and take care of your self and call me only needed for these six days because right know I'm still at the Basu but after you are freely to call me.
Siya- Ok di bye know

They hugged each other, than Gauri went to college to pick her notes from Muskaan than went home.

Part Nine
Recap- Gauri went to meet Siya during college time while Siya told her the missing truth she was told by their mother Riya Basu.

It was dark when she reached home where Rajeev asked her why she was late, on the other hand Gauri wanted to yell at him but she controlled herself saying she was busy at Muskaan's place because I was catching up on notes.
Rajeev- Fine beta
Go up and freshen up because your in laws will come to take you out for shopping
Gauri- Yes Papa

Gauri went up to her room than toward the bathroom took a small shower than looked at herself in the mirror because how she called Papa had ruin her life by taking away her parents and Siya her sister. Gauri looked out the window promise herself that she will find out the truth if her Anurag Patel is alive by the hard way because she can't tell anyone about this not even Poonam. Poonam who she never hide anything in her life and today she had to.
NIKHILA AND SHIV CAME TO TAKE GAURI FOR SHOPPING RIGHT KNOW BECAUSE POONAM'S WEDDING WAS LATTER

Nikhila told Gauri she could pick anything like liked while Shiv was thinking that he will pick a sari for her that she hates. Gauri wasn't even in herself she kept on thinking about how great was life when she was five in Anu Papa's arm with her mother even though she doesn't remember much.
Nikhila- Beta
Gauri- I'm sorry Mummy Ji but please forgive me I don't feel like shopping today because I don't feel good since the morning.
Nikhila- Gauri beta you should have told us early than we wouldn't have made many plans like this
Gauri- It's okay anyways I'm fine Mummyji lets shop around
Slowly looking through sari's Gauri for a moment if she had seen Anu Papa but she thought it was her imagination. Shiv walked up to Gauri saying I picked this for you

Gauri- Shiv (than notices Amit) I think it's nice even the colour even suit me.
Don't you think?
Shiv- (looked at Gauri with a weird facial expression) Yes because I picked for you

NEXT DAY DURING LUNCH AT KAPOOR HOUSE
Everyone were talking about Shiv's wedding and how much day lefted when the door bell rang Choti went to open the door.
Choti- Come in Gauri Ji
Gauri walked in with a bleeding hand everyone gets up to see Gauri while Gauri thought how Amit use to care for her and today he tried to harm her.

Mahen- What happen beti?
Gauri- (takes the water glass from Shiv's hand and takes a small sip) Actually Daddy-Ji I was going somewhere and I met a small accident it's not a big deal.
Mahen- How can you say it's not a big deal?
Gauri- I'm use to this (closed her eyes with a small flashback of Amit's love than hate for each other)
Nikhila- What are you thinking Beti?
Gauri- Nothing,
I was wondering if I could make a call to Kolkata
Mahen- You don't have to asks?
Gauri- Thank you

After she gets up to make the call to Amit's older brother Vishu. ( Vishu use to be Gauri's good friend before Abhishek's death and Abhishek was like a brother to Gauri same with Vishu. )
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Hello
Gauri- Hi Vishu
It's me Gauri Patel
Vishu- What?
Gauri- I mean to say Gauri Basu
Vishu- Oh Hi
So why did you call?
Gauri- ( forgot she was in the Kapoor House) Why I called you
umm woh actually
Vishu- What's the big deal?
Nothing is different between you or Amit?
Gauri- Vishu were you drinking?
Vishu- Yeah why do you care?
Gauri- Vishu I care because you are like my older brother after Abhi you are the only brother I have left with and I want you to came to my Shaadi.
Vishu- So you are getting married with my younger brother Amit?
Gauri- Vishu stop it I am not getting married to your younger brother in fact I'm getting married to Shiv Kapoor. After all the pain your younger brother have gave me I can't forgive him even though I'll wait for you
Vishu- I won't come
Gauri- Vishu I know you will come because in me some where you still can see Abhi alive in me
Vishu- (closed his eyes and remembered all times he had with Gauri and Abhi) I said I won't come and that's finally
Gauri- Fine if you won't come than I won't wear my Shaadi Ka Jora without you got that?

Gauri breaks down by the phone saying please Vishu Bhaiyya please come because when you are here I don't miss Abhi bhaiyya.
Kash Abhi Bhaiyya was alive than today I wouldn't be this alone even though I have Poonam and rest but its not like the way Abhi use to be for me only Vishu makes we feel like that. (Gauri closed her eyes than remember all those time she had with Abhi and Vishu in Kolkata while this song played in the back ground from Yaadein - Yaad Aati Hain )
Female Version - Yaadein, yaadein, yaadein, Duniya mein hum saare, Yaadon ke hai maare
Kuch kushiyaan, thode gham, Yeh humse, inse hum,
Yaadein, o meethi meethi yaadein
Khatti meethi yaadein, Nagme hain, shikwe hain
Kisse hain, baatein hain, Baatein bhool jaati hain
Yaadein yaad aati hain, Yeh yaadein kisi dil-o-jaanam ke
Chale jaane ke baad aati hain, Yaadein, yaadein, oh yaadein

IF I get part Ten, Elevn and Twelve don than I'll post it around 12:30 (that's maybey).

Edited by Jai-Bani_Kasamh - 18 years ago

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awesome part....wow great mystery...its really interesting

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😊 Thank for the comments

Part Ten
Recap- Gauri never thought Amit would harm her than she called Vishu to invite him to wedding because he was only brother to her after Abhishek's death.

Nikhila- Are you okay Gauri?
What was all this about Gauri?
Gauri- My friendship was my world with my best friends Abhi and Vishu but one day after Abhi's death. Vishu became more depressed after Abhi's death that I lost him even though there are lot of misunderstanding between us but I know he will come after I was there cute sister out of all the others.
Nikhila- Oh
Sorry about Abhi
Gauri- It's okay (Gauri looked at the clock on the wall)
Oh no!
Shiv- What know?
Gauri- Nisha is going to kill me
Shiv- Know who is Nisha?

Gauri- Some other time I'll tell you about Nisha right know she must be waiting for me at the station.
Gauri leaves was about to leave when she notice her father's photo hanging on the wall in one concern. She walked up to the picture than stared at it after left without saying she is his daughter Gauri Anurag Patel.

IN THE EVENING AT GAURI'S PLACE FOR THE SANGEET WITH CLOSE RELATIVE AND KAPOOR FAMILY
Everyone were enjoying the night while Shiv and Gauri felt like killing each other even though they couldn't after Nisha comes running down the stairs toward Gauri where Shiv stood by with his brother and Poonam.
Gauri- Slow down Nisha
Nisha- You know me than why ask?
Forget that!
Let me gust that is Shiv Kapoor you future husband right Gauri
Gauri- Umm yes
How did you know that?

Nisha- This person next to Shiv must be Prem Jiju Poonam's future husband
Poonam- Nisha how did you know this?

Nisha- Every simple because the way you guys are looking at each other anyways let's have fun without no dance there is no sangeet.
Gauri- Nisha....
Nisha- Fine yaar, I'll start

NISHA'S DANCE ON KAJRA RE - BUNTY AUR BABLI AND SAAJAN TUMSE PYAR KI LARAAYI MEIN - MAINE PYAAR KYON KIYA

Nisha stood in the centre announced that she will perform for her best friend Gauri.
aaisi najar se dekha usne jalim ne chowk par
humne kaleja arch diya chalu ki nok par

Siya was in her car going to Gauri's place.

mera chain bain sab ujda ,jaalim nazar hata le - 2
barbaad ho rahe hai ji - 2
tere apne shaher wale
mera chain bain sab ujda ,jaalim nazar hata le
meri angdai na toote tu aaja - 2
kajra re kajra re tere kare kare naina - 2
ho kajra re kajra re tere kare kare naina - 2
ho mere naina mere naina mere naina judwa mere naina
kajra re kajra re tere kare kare naina

Gauri went up to Meera ( because no one know her real name) and gave her a hug with a smile

Saajan tumse pyaar ki laraayi mein
Saajan tumse pyaar ki laraayi mein
Toot gayi choodiyaan kalaayi mein, kalaayi mein
Toot gayi choodiyaan kalaayi mein
Toot gayi choodiyaan kalaayi mein

Jaanam tumse pyaar ki laraayi mein
Jaanam tumse pyaar ki laraayi mein
Jaaga main akela rajaayi mein, rajaayi mein
Jaaga main akela rajaayi mein
Jaaga main akela rajaayi mein

Poonam asked Meera Ji to dance but Meera said only if Gauri will dance with her

Gauri- I can't

Poonam- Please Gauri
Shiv- Gauri one sec
Gauri- excuse me
Gauri goes toward Shiv and asked what
Shiv- Let see if you can dance?
Gauri- Why?
Is it a bet between you and someone?
Shiv- Maybe
Gauri- Fine but if I dance than you have to dance to the song I pick.
Deal or what ?
Shiv- Fine it's a deal

MEERA AND GAURI'S DANCE ON DOLE RE DOLE - DEVDAS WHILE RAJEEV GETS SOME FLASHBACK
The lights go dim while Gauri and Meera looked at each other than looked towards Kesar for strength music was playing.

Dola Re Dola Re Dola Re Dola
Haye Dola Dil Dola Mann Dola Re Dola

Lag Jaane Do Najariya, Gir Jaane Do Bijuriya
Bijuriya, Bijuriya, Gir Jaane Do Aaj Bijuriya
Lag Jaane Do Najariya, Gir Jaane Do Bijuriya

Mahen was enjoying the dance while Shiv was getting to like it. Prem was also enjoying than notice Poonam thinking about the way Gauri was dancing.

Baandhke Maein Ghunghroo
Pehenke Maein Paayal
Oh, Baandhke Maein Ghunghroo
Pehenke Maein Paayal
Ho Jhoomke Naachoongi Ghoomke Naachoongi
Dola Re Dola Re Dola Re Dola…

Rajeev looked at both girls dancing with exactly like Riya and her friend

Dekho Ji Dekho Dekho Kaisi Yeh Jhankaar Hai
Inki Aankhon Mein Dekho Piyaji Ka Pyaar Hai
Inki Aawaaz Mein Haye Kaisi Thanadaar Hai
Piya Ki Yaadon Mein Yeh Jiya Beqaraar Hai

Both girls can hear their mother's scream while dancing to this song because it was Riya's favourite.

Maathe Ki Bindiya Mein Voh Hai
Palkon Ki Nindiya Mein Voh Hai
Tere To Tan Mann Mein Voh Hai

Teri Bhi Dhadkan Mein Voh Hai
Choodi Ki Chhan Chhan Mein Voh Hai
Kangan Ki Khan Khan Mein Voh Hai
Baandhke Maein Ghunghroo
Haan, Pehenke Maein Paayal
Ho Jhoomke Naachoongi Ghoomke Naachoongi
Dola Re Dola Re Dola Re Dola…

Rajeev's flashbacking all Riya's movement in the dance than Gauri's with Meera after he left. The girls stood with a pose to end it than Gauri walks to Shiv because it was his turn.

Part Eleven
Recap- Rajeev imagine Riya while watching the girls, and know it was Shiv's turn to dance.

SHIV DANCE ON TUM BIN NA HUM JEE SAKENGE FROM MERE JEEVAN SAATHI

Shiv for the first time lost a bet with a girl mostly with Gauri the person he hates the most even though he wants to marry her. Gauri told the DJ put this song and announced that Shiv is going to dance on this song so please clap for him.
Everyone clapped for him while Shiv mad weird facial expression toward Gauri like he was going to eat her in front of everyone.

Jab se mile ho tum aaisa laga hai ki
tum bin na hum jee sakenge
ehsaas dil ko hoe laga hai ke
tum bin na hum jee sakenge
yeh dooriyan lagti sitam
aaghosh main tum bharlo sanam

Rajeev was trying to remember this song because it use to be someone's favourite song while Mahen was happy that his son made all his memory come back with Anurag during his college times. Gauri and Siya had a smile on their face because for the first time Rajeev Papa was trying to think about this song.

Jab se mile ho tum aaisa laga hai ki
tum bin na hum jee sakenge
yeh lamhe yahipe thehar jaane do
hume toot ke bikhar jaane do
jawaan dhadkanon main utar jaane do
hadhoh se bhi aage gujar jaane do
tanhaiyon ka kehna yahi hai ke
Tum bin na hum jee sakenge
Jab se mile ho tum aaisa laga hai ki
Tum bin na hum jee sakenge

Middle of the song the lights go off and Gauri tried to see how was coming toward her in the dark saying yu nafrat se na kaaton ko dekho kaam aayenge
phakat phoolon se aai gul dosti achi nahi hoti Gauri was froze by those line because she knew in that dark it was Amit Tondon. (Amit will perform on Ek Bewafaa Hai from Bewafaa)

mera dil jis dil pe fida hai 2
ek bewafaa hai 4
ha mohabbat ki ye saza hai 2
tu bewafaa hai 4
mera dil jis dil pe fida hai 2
ek bewafaa hai 2
ha bewafaa hai
ek bewafaa hai

koi sheesha agar tute
badi aawaz hoti hai
magar dil tut jane ki
sada koi nahi sunta
main deewana main deewana
main deewanapan karta hu
uski yaadon main jita hu
uski chaahat main marta hu
kya haal hai mere is dil ka
bedard hai woh kya janegi
main laakh use samjhaoonga
phir bhi na kehna manegi
kitni jaalim uski ada hai - 2
tu bewafaa hai - 2
ha bewafaa hai
ek bewafaa hai
mera dil jis dil pe fida hai 2
ek bewafaa hai - 2
ha bewafaa hai
ek bewafaa hai

Meera and Poonam could tell Gauri was in pain even though Meera knew Gauri hates Amit but it doesn't mean she like Shiv. Poonam was thinking the same but she thought Gauri loves Amit and can't see his pain while she is with Shiv.

use bhi neend na aaye
woh bhi jaage tamam raat
woh bhi kisike pyaar main
tadpe khuda kare
usne mujhko tadpaye hai
mai bhi usko tadpaoonga
main aaj bhari is mehfhil main

Gauri was numb in the dark than went to turn on the light but bumped into Shiv he saved her from falling. Shiv took out his lighter and put it infront of them while Amit saw that and turned around wipes his tears than dance to the lyrics.

usko ruswaa kar jaoonga
woh sar ko jhukaye baithe hai
dekho gairon ki bahoon main
har ghadi mujhe jiska nasha hai
tu bewafaa hai - 2
ha bewafaa hai
ek bewafaa hai
mera dil jis dil pe phida hai 2
ek bewafaa hai - 2
ha bewafaa hai
ek bewafaa hai

Gauri slightly looked at Amit than Shiv and all of a sudden lights come back on and Gauri notices Vishu standing behind Prem half drunk and walks toward her. Amit was about to go to him but Vishu puts his hand to stop him than walks to Gauri ( while singing this song Behna Ne Bhai Ki Kalaai Pe from Resham Ki Dori )

(Vishu's lines)
(behna ne bhai ki kalaai se
behna ne bhaai ki kalaai se pyaar baandha hai
pyaar ke do taar se, sansaar baandha hai
resham ki dori se -2
resham ki dori se sansaar baandha hai) -2
sundarta mein jo kanhaiya hai

While Vishu was walking toward to Gauri but he almost loosed his balance but Gauri holds him by his shoulder.

(Gauri's lines)
mamta mein yashoda maiyya hai
vo aur nahi dooja koi
vo to mera raaja bhaiya hai
behna ne bhai ....
mera phool hai tu, talvaar hai tu
meri laaj ka pehredaar hai tu
main akeli kahaan is duniya mein
mera saara sansaar hai tu
behna ne bhai ....

Vishu was loosing control of himself by getting more attached to Gauri than wipes her tears.

(Vishu's lines)
hamein duur bhale kismat kar de
apne man se na juda karna
saavan ke paavan din bhaiya
behna ko yaad kiya karna
behna ne bhai ...

Gauri hugged him but Vishu first hesitated to hug Gauri but after he also didn't want to let go of her while Poonam was happy that final Vishu bhaiyya and Gauri cleared the misunderstanding. Amit couldn't handle it than says out loud because of her Abhi's death happened and you have forgave her bhaiyya.

Part Twelve
Recap- Mahen was happy of his son because he reminded him of his college days while Amit couldn't watch his bhai getting attach to Gauri again.

Everyone was shock to hear Amit than Vishu let's go of Gauri walks to Amit gives me three slaps right on his face.
Amit hand is on his face- Bhaiyya what was that for?
Vishu- How dare you talk like that for my sister who use to be yours...
Vishu closed his eyes
Gauri- Bhaiyya why did you stop there?
Why don't you say that I had a relationship with him.
Everyone shocked even Shiv but some way he was enjoying this show.
Vikas- Gauri what are you saying?
Gauri walks toward the wind and looks out saying Chachu that's true but I never knew who I loved could sell me to Rohit group of Sen enterprises
Vishu- What are you saying?
Gauri looked down- Bhaiyya I always kept this truth from you because I promise Abhi bhaiyya that I won't tell you but after what Amit tried to do with me the day I called you I can't forgive him.
Vishu- Gauri tell me quick?
Poonam went and placed her hand on Gauri's shoulder while Gauri said it was the day of Abhi's birthday he wanted to know who I loved so I said Amit at that time when I told Amit about it he was also happy but after a couple of days his love for me got into some kind of business deal.
Poonam- What?
How cheap Amit can be?
Gauri walked toward Vishu- Bhaiyya that night he called me to meet him at the mandir where he said his love for me was only fake and he used me for this business deal.................................
Next moment I'm running from Rohit's men than slowly I came to a dead end where I bumped into Abhi bhaiyya. I hugged him so tight than told him what Amit did to me.
Vishu- I know the rest Abhi was able to save you but not himself.
He touches Gauri's cheek- All this long I waited for you to tell me this, but I knew you had some reasons.
Anyways tell me why you forgave Amit

Gauri walked toward the Ganesa Ji's murti- Bhaiyya that night I promised Abhi's dead body that I will also play with his emotions like he played with mine and make him tell the truth by himself to you, but today I failed to keep my promise to Abhi bhaiyya.
Saying all this Gauri runs up to her room and locks the door.
Poonam was about to go when Vishu stopped her saying let her cry out those tears she kept in herself this long.

SHIV ASSURED RAJEEV THAT HE WILL MARRY GAURI NO MATTER WHAT BECAUSE HE WANTS HER TO PAY FOR HIS INSULT
Rajeev hugged Shiv than Vishu stopped him.
Vishu- I know what you said to Rajeev uncle is true, but please come with me right know
They both go towards the outhouse when Shiv was thinking what is this going to be about.

Shiv- Mr. Vishu
Why did you bring me out here?
Vishu- I know that you don't care about Gauri's past for me she is my life and if I she one tear in her eyes because of you than I'll have to kill you.
Shiv- What do you mean?
Vishu- I mean always keep her happy even though you two have many things in difference but going through this safar you both will understand each other.
Shiv- Maybe its truth we both have many things not in common but I assure you that Gauri will never be unhappy because of me.
They both hugged each other when they saw something through Gauri's window, Shiv and Vishu both went running toward her room.
BREAKS DOWN GAURI'S ROOM DOOR
The door flew open smashing the wall when Vishu slapped Gauri
Vishu- Are you gone mad killing yourself?
Shiv- Gauri your past won't come in-between us even though it doesn't matter to me only you do
Gauri- Hold on!
What all talking about?
Shiv- Weren't you just hanging your self through this dupatta?
Gauri hits her forehead- Oh my god,
you guys thought I was going to hang myself.
What a joke?
Vishu- This is not a joke?
Gauri starts to laugh a little- Bhaiyya I was getting my dupatta that was stuck on the fan I wasn't planning to kill myself instead people who think of killing themselves are complete looser.

BRIGHT SUN SHONE IN A COUPLES ROOM IN FAR END OF MUMBAI
Two couples wrapped into each others arm while sleeping with the bright sun shinnying in their room while a small cold breeze came through the window.
In another room one person was sleeping on the ground while the another slept comfy on the bed. After she slowly gets up walks toward the bathroom without opening her eyes because she knew this whole house with her eyes closed.
Both ladies came out same time from the bathroom in their room looking in the mirror when someone wraps their arms around her.

Anurag please let go of me
Anurag- Riya come on after all we are married
Riya- What if your kids come running in like they always do remember Gauri and Siya the way they use to come in without knocking...
Anurag- What happened?

Riya- Anu I try hard to not think about them but how can I forget they are our first born child even though if they are alive or...
Anurag placed his hand on Riya's mouth- Don't say that, I have faith in god that one day we will meet our daughters but when we meet them how will we recognize them.
Riya- Simple Gauri will be more like you and Siya will be just like me
Knock...
Knock...
Riya- Come in
Good morning Mummy Ji, Daddy Ji
Both at the same time- Good morning Krishna Beti

Edited by Jai-Bani_Kasamh - 18 years ago

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