SwaRon OS: Hum adhoore bin tumhare - Page 3

Namratha

@nami2811

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: -spongy-
P.S.
you can continue it as well...
you know. swaron ki halat when sharon goes
each day
and then papa rai prakash ko bhi intro kar SAKTI HON😳😳

Waise idea bura nahi hai but mujhe agle weekend tak time nahi milega

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Rohan :)

@RoHaNmAlHoTrA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

hey...well i dont reply to people whom i dont know niether they no me...but this os...didnt let me follow that...that was so cute...i mean seriously yaar agar CV's IF par yahi current track based oss' dekhkar they change their script accordingly thats gonna definately help them with trp's...iso so so hope that this happens but we shudnt make false hopes...the os was reallly very cute and sweet...and i liked it to core...so kudos to the writer...

Rohan :)

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_bellaSwan_

@_bellaSwan_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

OMG it was awesome I loved it ,you have written beautifully . You have explained very amazingly about Swayam concern, love and care towards his lady love . Iam also missing vrushan , vrushika badly

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---Priya---

@---Priya---

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Nams 😲 😲 you wrote such a beautiful OS, and saying chappals are welcome? 😡

I loved it!! Perfect OS, to suit this situation!! Swayam's worry for Sharon and how majnu boy will react when Sharon is not there... I so so loved it 🤗 🤗

why dont u continue this? 😉 what both of them go through after Sharon's leaves to delhi and all...

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Rachel

@.Vrushanholic.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

that was so so so amazing!!!

missing vrushika badly!!

lagta hai os padke hi peth barna hoga!!!

beautiful os di!!

thank you so much for writing this!!!

missing swaron😭

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

that was a lovely os... i really loved it... the reaction was absorbs
for some reason which only swayan knew about sharon and none of the other knew
about this... that was great and fabulous start...😊😊😊😊😊

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sneha singh

@swaron9113

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Wow superv amaging cncpt.

Nd u briliantly describe thr every move.
Lovd it.

Thank god kisiko to pta h ki sharon ko asthma h.

Ni to palki mam to stml ke patient bne h.

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

nicely written

swayam worring about Sharon and about her asthama

I loved the kiss

do write more

thnks for the pm

😊😊

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Namratha

@nami2811

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Thank you so much each and everyone for the lovely cooments! They are really encouraging :)

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Namratha

@nami2811

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha
reserved for now

Waiting for you to un reserve..
Will write a new one after ur comments :)

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