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_bellaSwan_

@_bellaSwan_

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

OMG it was awesome I loved it ,you have written beautifully . You have explained very amazingly about Swayam concern, love and care towards his lady love . Iam also missing vrushan , vrushika badly

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---Priya---

@---Priya---

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Nams 😲 😲 you wrote such a beautiful OS, and saying chappals are welcome? 😡

I loved it!! Perfect OS, to suit this situation!! Swayam's worry for Sharon and how majnu boy will react when Sharon is not there... I so so loved it 🤗 🤗

why dont u continue this? 😉 what both of them go through after Sharon's leaves to delhi and all...

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Rachel

@.Vrushanholic.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

that was so so so amazing!!!

missing vrushika badly!!

lagta hai os padke hi peth barna hoga!!!

beautiful os di!!

thank you so much for writing this!!!

missing swaron😭

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

that was a lovely os... i really loved it... the reaction was absorbs
for some reason which only swayan knew about sharon and none of the other knew
about this... that was great and fabulous start...😊😊😊😊😊

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sneha singh

@swaron9113

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Wow superv amaging cncpt.

Nd u briliantly describe thr every move.
Lovd it.

Thank god kisiko to pta h ki sharon ko asthma h.

Ni to palki mam to stml ke patient bne h.