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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sabse pehle, Rena, for you...and me as well, waise.
But well, here it is. Not what I promised...bloody...it didn't even turn out the way I wanted it to...but I hope...you still like it...
Like I said, I've had a horrible day...and this is a result of it.
*sighs*
Anyway, on with the piece.

Over

Who'd have thought they still had it in them to fight? They were supposed to be a couple, in love.

And yet, here they were, after a bad break-up. Not on talking terms, back to being the Stoneface and Chicklet they'd been for each other before they fell in love and having fallen out of love now.

They glared at each other, snubbed the other at every given opportunity and all in all, behaved as if there was nothing on the lines of love that had existed between them.

They said they were back. Back to being what they truly were. At loggerheads. Always.

And all that had existed between them, it was no more.

They were over.

***

They followed each other with their eyes and as the song changed, their eyes met...and they did too, as they took to the dance floor. It was their song, after all.

They danced, lost in each other. But the song ended too soon and the spell broke. They parted, walking away, not paying the other even a glance and trying to make themselves believe that the dance hadn't happened.

Their friends shared knowing glances at the scene.

They were over.

Not.

***

Okay, so yes, this was total and absolute bullshit. But anyway, I'm feeling better coz of it...so...

Rena, my dedication piece had been 2 months pending...and it's just too bad, now that I finally wrote on KiSha...it isn't what I initially had in mind.

But I'm frustrated and tired. And the "confession" today just made it worse. *rolls eyes*

Ek lambi note likhne ki bhi himmat nai hai. :/

My brain is screwed and so am I. >:(

I thought, it's finally begun to thaw a bit, but nooo!!! Argh! I hate this!

Behna, you were so right. I need sleep. And I guess I should have postponed this... *sighs*

And wow, I did so much of nautanki for this teeny tiny bit. -_-

Anyway...in the midst of the gloom, just one thing. The piece is an exact 200 words. *squeals*

Achievement! Achievement! I stopped at a round figure...woh bhi below 300 words! Yayyiiee!! :D

*sighs again* PMs not sent to anyone. Might or might not be sent later when I'm in a better mood...

Try and leave a comment, people!

Indebted,

Mugs.

P.S: Rena, even the dedication sucks! :X I am SO sorry. :/


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Posted: 12 years ago
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There is nothing to love about it.
Just a crazy frustration-induced drabble.

But thank you, nonetheless.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: NonComposMentis


There is nothing to love about it.
Just a crazy frustration-induced drabble.

But thank you, nonetheless.


@red: The exact reason why i love it. The OS kind of reflects my mood now
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Short, to the point, and brilliant!
It does take skills to showcase a whole transformation of their equations in such short amount of words. I loved the last two lines.

They were over.

Not.


Sometimes, it only takes a few moments to know if the spark is there or not, and amazingly, it was there this time! That little spark will bloom into a relationship once again, but this time with better understanding and foundation.

I like how you took your frustration out with this os, The message and future you are portraying for TBP kisha is crystal clear. Great Job! ⭐️
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Originally posted by: coolpixie

Short, to the point, and brilliant!

It does take skills to showcase a whole transformation of their equations in such short amount of words. I loved the last two lines.

They were over.

Not.


Sometimes, it only takes a few moments to know if the spark is there or not, and amazingly, it was there this time! That little spark will bloom into a relationship once again, but this time with better understanding and foundation.

I like how you took your frustration out with this os, The message and future you are portraying for TBP kisha is crystal clear. Great Job! ⭐️


*stares with mouth open*

*clamps it shut*

Elinor. <3
Damn, you make me feel SO much better, y'know?
And thank you! <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: lizzie_ROFL


@red: The exact reason why i love it. The OS kind of reflects my mood now


*sighs*
I feel ya, Liz. We're in the same boat, after all.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: NonComposMentis


*sighs*
I feel ya, Liz. We're in the same boat, after all.


I know.
My thought are just like the OS...
All hopes lost yet a small tiny part in my heart hoping for something better even though my mind says nothing is going to happen now. *sighs*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Bloody hell! A break up is what I suggested a SECOND ago:O

I LOVED IT Mugsy<3 it was brilliant!

I need the spunk BACK! Kisi bhi tarah!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: NonComposMentis



*stares with mouth open*

*clamps it shut*

Elinor. <3
Damn, you make me feel SO much better, y'know?
And thank you! <3


It's my pleasure! ❤️ *bows*. lol
but, why are you staring with mouth wide open? because it's a kisha os?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: lizzie_ROFL


I know.
My thought are just like the OS...
All hopes lost yet a small tiny part in my heart hoping for something better even though my mind says nothing is going to happen now. *sighs*


KiSha are doomed...and so are we...

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