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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys...im not at all a poet bt gave a try nd wrote my 1st poem hope u guys enjoy this

this poem is not to heart any body...i know we cannot change the destiny...same is with shanantu he wanna change everythng bt nothing is in his hand...hw loves his wife a lot..bt she is not there wd her..he misses her a lot...

so here u go...

i stand on my balcony
seeing people rushing here and there
but my eyes searching for my angel
who stole my heart a year back

my heart still beats for her
it still wait for her to come back
embrace me in her arms
touch me with her soft and tiny hands
made my heart skip a beat
hold my hand when im standing alone

but i have to accept this harsh reality
that she is no more there with me
she has gone far away from me
to a place from where no one come back

i still rememeber the last word u said to me
"always keep a smile on your face and never cry remembring me"
i kept my promise
bt today i cant as a tear trickle down my cheeks

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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG so sad poem...😭

No it cant be true even in my wild dreams! 😲
Its just a poem😕

BTW beautifully written but the concept
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very touching!!! 😭 Keep writing poems..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maneesha_Shanak

OMG so sad poem...😭


No it cant be true even in my wild dreams! 😲
Its just a poem😕

BTW beautifully written but the concept

. I knw even I can't imagine shanak like this..anyway thx 4 liking it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its very heart touching🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow SUPUB just SUPUB poem u wrote for SHANAK
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😭 omg my shanak i cant bear this but the poem is beautiful very well written can feel shan's pain but still i m crying 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very Touching 😭

Beautifully written 👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -pranjal-

very Touching 😭


Beautifully written 👏👏

thnku so much...
its great to hear that it touches ur heart
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaisyjazz

😭 omg my shanak i cant bear this but the poem is beautiful very well written can feel shan's pain but still i m crying 😭

i sont know wht to say...bt happy it touches your heart

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