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Hey Guys!! I know it been a long time since I've written anything and you guys probably forgotten who I am...but that's okay. I'm back with a OK OS i don't think its that good but i just felt the need to finally write something... So without further ado...Here it is! Enjoy!!(hopefully)


Swaron OS: The Journey Home

"WooHooo!!"

"Sharon not again," Swayam sighed at the sight of his girlfriend. Sharon stood on top of the bar counter with a bottle of alcohol in her hand moving to the rhythm of the blaring music. "Sharon get down from there!" Simmi ordered Sharon. She instantly regretted saying anything as Sharon looked down to glare at her. "I am Sharon Rai Prakash, the Diva, and no one can order me around!" Simmi replied to her by saying, "Okay Sharon you are right…Now can you please get down?" Sharon tapped her chin as if thinking about if she should approve Simmi's request. After a few minutes she simply nodded her head. Simmi and Rinni grabbed her hands and carefully brought her down. They pulled the now empty bottle from her hand that they had bought for them all to share. As soon as she was off the counter Simmi and Rinni handed her over to Swayam to handle. He pulled her closer wrapping one arm around her waist and used the other to pull her hand around his neck. "I think you should take her home," Rinni said worried by the condition of her tipsy friend. "Yeah your-"Swayam was about to reply to her when he caught sight of Sharon. Sharon was about to gulp down another drink before Swayam saw her. "Oh no you don't that's enough drinking for you," He said pulling the drink from her hand and setting it down. He pulled her away from the counter and she turned around to see who dared to stop her. When Sharon found it was Swayam she gave him a big smile. "SWAYAM!!" Sharon screamed in his ear before jumping up and wrapping her arms around his neck. Swayam staggered from the impact of her voice and her weight. He steadied himself and whispered in her ear, "We are going home." Sharon pulled away from him with her hands still wrapped around his neck. She gave him a cute little pout, but Swayam only responded with a glare. "Fine," she said still pouting. So Swayam dragged her out to his car as she turned around and screamed bye to their friends all the way. Swayam sat her down in the car and then sat down himself. And then began their sweet little journey home. A calming silence set in the car as they began to move, but it did not last long. Sharon opened the window letting the cool night air in to the car and turned towards Swayam, leaning her head on his shoulder. She began blabbering about the random things that popped in to her mind and came in to her view. Swayam just smiled laughed at her silly comments. He listened to her continuous talks but never interrupted enjoying the sound of her voice playing in his ears. All of a sudden she pushed herself upright and looked at Swayam with a huge smile playing on her lips and a spark gleaming in her eyes. Before she opened her mouth to speak Swayam began speaking, "I know what you are going to say, but I'm already a step ahead of you." The car swiftly came to a stop in front of an ice cream shop as Sharon stared at Swayam in awe. Coming out from her shock, repeatedly saying, "I love you I love you I love you so so so so much," she gave him a big hug. Before Swayam could come over to her side of the car and open the door, Sharon jumped out of the car. She grabbed Swayam's hand and pulled him along with her as she ran towards the shop. Sharon stopped at the line to the counter a little clumsily. She tipped backwards on her heals, but Swayam pulled her up straight before she fell back. He stood behind her and put one hand around her waist and held one of her hands in his. Her other hand slipped itself to the place where Swayam held her on her waist. He whispered in her ear slowly, "That's what happens when you drink too much. So next time what don't we do?" He questioned her like a parent questioned their young child who made a mistake. "Drink too much," Sharon whispered back in a baby voice and looked down with guilt. "Very good," He said in a kind voice. He watched her as she continued to look down at the ground guiltily. He softly bumped his head against hers and whispered, "Hey don't feel bad, and I'm only saying this for your betterment. And because you listened to me so kindly you get to pick whatever ice cream you want however you want it." Sharon looked up at these words and the big smile and the glint in her eyes returned as she heard him finish his statement. As soon as she regained her balance Swayam let go of his grip on her and she wrapped her arms around one of his. She stared hungrily up at the menu hanging from the ceiling and jumped in happiness every time the line moved forward like a little child. By now they were almost to the front of the line and Sharon's excitement held no bounds. Swayam was lost in the drunken beauty that at the beginning of the night was being ever-so-elegant and now had completely become a child. That is why he loved her…He loved her so much!!Only he knew the real Sharon behind the mask she refused to take off. Only he knew about her love for ice cream, romantic moments, and Bollywood movies. Only he knew about Sharon's favorite teddy and her favorite part of the day…dessert time!! He was the only one that knew about this cute, adorable, and imperfectly perfect girl. She had made him promise to never tell anyone about this. But he was more worried about her showing everyone this side of herself. Especially when she is drunk. There is no stopping Sharon Rai Prakash after she had a few drinks. Swayam loved her just the way she is. He didn't care how she acted as long as he gets to spend his whole life just with her. Swayam broke from his trance when he heard a giggle. At first he thought it was Sharon, but Sharon was completely lost in her world of sugary good ice cream. When he heard the silent laughter again he turned to find an elderly couple behind them. They were laughing because they had caught sight of Swayam looking so lovingly at Sharon. Swayam blushed when he realized that he had been caught red-handed. This only got more laughter out of the couple as they watched the young lovers and remembered their own youthful days. Sharon stood waiting for her turn completely oblivious of her surroundings. As soon as the line moved up she dragged Swayam to the counter. "Hi, may I take your order?" said the girl on the other side of the counter. "Umm yeah can I have a…no wait…can I have the…ooo but there's that too…," Sharon stared up confusingly at the menu trying to do decide what she wanted. Swayam watched her in amusement as her confusion only got worst leading to a frustrated Sharon. Swayam knew this would take some time so he turned to the couple behind them and let them move ahead of him and Sharon. Luckily there was no one else standing in the line so they were the last people there. The elderly couple got their order and had already left the counter, but still Sharon could not decide what she wanted. When about ten minutes passed, Swayam decided to take some initiative. He turned to Sharon who had her eyes glued to the menu for the last ten minutes. "Sharon do you want me to order for you?" Swayam asked simply. Sharon out of frustration replied, "How would you know what I want?" Swayam, knowing the temper of the diva, he softly said, "You could give it a try and if that's not what you want we could get something else." Sharon gave him a scrutinizing look then simply nodded. Swayam moved ahead to the counter and politely asked the girl, "Can we have a mix of cookie dough and fudge brownie ice cream please?" "Yes of course sir," the girl replied in the same polite manner. Sharon jumped forward saying, "Oh my god!!That's like the perfect combo!!How did you know I wanted that," and before Swayam could reply she clumsily pulled him into a hug and continued, "of course you would know!! After all you're the best boyfriend ever!!" She placed a big sloppy kiss on his cheek and let him go. The move sent Swayam backwards trying to balance himself while holding his cheek and blushing. "Aww!! So cute!!" The girl said after witnessing the scene. Which made Swayam blushed even more after the comment and he lowered his gaze to the ground in embarrassment. But, obviously, Sharon did not notice as she was completely concentrated on trying to catch sight of the person behind the counter setting up her ice cream. As soon as the ice cream arrived Swayam handed it straight over to Sharon. Sharon looked at it hungrily and took a bite to test it. Swayam and the girl waited patiently for her response. She looked up from her ice cream with a big smile and gave Swayam a thumb up. Swayam returned the smile and finished paying the cashier and left with an over-excited Sharon tugging his arm all the way to the car. Once they reached the car, Sharon moved to sit in the car. Swayam stopped her by holding up a hand. She looked questioningly at him, but he just smiled in response. He pulled off his jacket and placed it the hood of the car and then picked up a confused Sharon and also placed her on the hood. After Sharon was comfortably settled he climbed on and sat next to her. As soon as Sharon was seated she began to dig in to her ice cream. And Swayam just sat by her side gaining enjoyment by watching her enjoy her sugary treat. In the middle of her eating Sharon finally realized Swayam's presence. She offered him the ice cream not able to speak due to the amount that was stuck in her mouth. Swayam took the ice cream in response and held out the spoon to her. Sharon eagerly took the spoon in to her mouth. Swayam fed her the ice cream until there was none left in the cup. He jumped off the hood and used to his hand to instruct her to stay on the car. Swayam ran off towards the shop and reached the door right before it was about to be closed. He threw away his trash and grabbed a few napkins on his way out. He hurriedly ran back to an impatiently waiting Sharon, who was still sitting on the car. He took a napkin and dabbed it in water from a bottle in his car and proceeded to clean Sharon's face. He was careful not to mess up any of Sharon's makeup and only to wipe away the remnants of ice cream on her face. After doing so, he lifted her off the hood and placed her inside the car and drove off to their last destination together for the night…her home. They reached there fairly quickly because the ice cream shop was close to her home. Upon Sharon's insistence, Swayam picked her up in his arms and carried her all the way to her bedroom. Once they got to the bedroom, Swayam placed her down on her bed and said good night. When he was about to leave Sharon demanded, "Don't leave…stay until I fall asleep." He quickly obliged to her orders and sat down next to her bed and held her hand until her eyelids slowly began to close. Right she before she completely drowned in to sleep and the effects of the alcohol she quietly whispered, "Good night Swayam….I love you…" Swayam whispered back, talking to her sleeping frame, "Good Night Sharon and I love you too….I don't know if you will remember tonight, but I know I definitely will…I could say it will it one of the best nights of my life and I know as long as I'm with there will be many more of these to come." He placed a feather-soft kiss on her hand and carefully released his hand from hers. He stood up and pulled her blanket up to her shoulders and tucked her in. He took her clock and set it up to ring an hour later than it usually does. He put her phone on vibrate and placed it on a soft surface so it won't bother her. After doing all that he placed a kiss on her forehead and closed the lights before heading out of the room. He drove home remembering all the minute details of the night of the…journey home.

How was it? Was it bad? Was it good?Please do tell me the honest truth...I know it wasn't as good as the other few things I've written but I tried my best...Please do comment and like (only if you actually liked it...) I would really appreciate your views!


Lubna:)

PS:

If you would like to read any of my other(better) work:

Swaron OS: Shawty's Like a Melody in My Head

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/channel-v-dil-dosti-dance/3469153/swaron-os-shawtys-like-a-melody-in-my-head

Swaron SS: Two Truths and a Lie

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3509226/swaron-ss-two-truths-and-a-lie-part-4-on-pg-8

Swaron OS: Free My Caged Soul

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/channel-v-dil-dosti-dance/3574741/swaron-os-free-my-caged-soul

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Your writing is very simple and crisp, thence the flow of the one shot is really good. It's a very nicely framed and simple concept and lighthearted on top of everything. It made a rather good read. I could visualize all the scenes so your writing induces imagery. That's good.

Way to go.
Thanks for the PM.


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OMG
how could u!!!!!!!
tune yeh os phele post kiya kyu nai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
agar mai motivate nai karte toh tu kabhi isse post nai karte😡
n the os
omg
wow
loved it to the core
the scenes were so cute n beautiful
i m speechless actually
loved ur os
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It was awesome!!! Loved it..:)
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Hey it was simply beautiful!!!!Drunk Sharon & caring swayam is always a treat to watch!!!!Loved every bit of it!!!!
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awesome os
loved every bit of it
n mostly loved wen swayam taking care of drunk sharon
even simmi n rinni knows dat only swayamis the person who can handle sharon in any state
loved theos
keep writing

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...
what an amazing os!!
it was fabulous!
u should write more often!
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Lubna that was the best of ur work I have read and dare to say this os just OK...it was minddd blowinggg...I love this drunken Sharon...ohh god her child attitude towards ice cream was so beautifully penned down...I love how swayam know each and every detail...ohh god I love it...

do write more...u r an awsume writer ...last bt not the least...* a tight hug and kisses*... love u for wonderful os
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lubna this was adorable
awww
sharon as a drunk and swayam as the ever caring boyfriend hayees
it was atreat to read
loved reading every bit of it
brilliant do write more cant wait to read more of your work and do pm me.next time
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Hey the os was lovely it was very cute.. 😳 ❤️. Loved how caring swayam was for sharon and the fact that he knows her in and out he even knew when she wanted to have icecream and which flavour both of them are just very adorable.. Awesome OS loved it thanx for the PM dear..😊

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