FF: The Healing Touch #2: Ch 10 Pg 92

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Yipeee...yipeee!

I knew it...mujhe always bharosa hai Nidhi...it was beautiful!

Nidhi this was fantastic...I love the way you write Khushi, she is strong, supportive, perceptive and understanding ...

I loved her clarity and her understanding off the situation I loved how she explains to him that his devastation is at loss of his sister not his love...and the difference between what he perceives to be his fault and how certain things happens in which we play no role in. I loved how she uses his parents example to make him understand what love is...

Where as she agrees that what happened with his sister was sad and something no one should have to go,through but that does not mean it was his fault, if not with each other La and Shyam would have been with someone else...I love how she tells him by punishing himself will things go back who they were? Will it bring Di's husband back? Rather than dwelling on the past that is casting a shadow on the present he needs to embrace the people who care about him like Vandana...

I love how she believes in love and needs that and he does not ...they are just different neither right nor wrong.

And neither will settle for anything different...or compromise on what they think they want...

I love your Arnav...I always did but this man,his anguish and pain, the dilemma and the guilt he lives him...punishing himself, I loved how he calls Di and speaks to her, that he did and the conversation with her giving closure to so many things gnawing in his heart...and his self imposed restrictions on the simple pleasures of life...hope now he is able to find his way home!

to see the woman he loves...(well I think he does) dressed the way she is...looking the way she does...and he sees green, literally and not just the colour...but also is angry, an anger which he is not able to understand or justify ...

I liked how he tries to tell himself that it's for the best and pacify himself ...he knows that since he can not offer her more, se should be free to find that with another man...but easier said than done, I loved his anguish...how could she have so easily forgotten everything that transpired between them, she seemed fine in contrast to his aching heart...

I loved that he is jealous, jealous of any man even near her...thankfully Vandana is there for him, but Arnav unable to fight those feelings anymore, or even comprehend them...I loved how he kept a track of the time and also remembering all the moments spent with her, images of which kept flashing in front of him, her laughter..like he was consumed by her...feelings he did even realise he was capable of feeling...I loved his banging doors and his ill temper, proving how deeply involved he is!

I loved his resolve of not even going to ask her but in vain...

I just loved how at the sight of Alok's arm around his shoulders he breaking all barriers of self control and immediately warns him to remove his hand, loved the two of them at it with a perplexed Khushi, wondering, and then putting a stop the madness, finally getting Alok to leave, who seemed reluctant to do so witnessing Arnav's temper and anger scared for his Khushi...

I loved, just loved the last part, him pulling her to his room, his questing her as though he has full haq...(of course he thinks he has) and then loved how at the moment all that mattered to him and them was this feeling that was between them the desire and the need which ran deeper than just the physical need to be, she wanting to be angry but his look and his touch, his closeness to her and the tone of his voice when he calls her name and she she needs him as much...his touch and him in entirety..

I loved how her don't do this, and I think she meant it for not just his touch but for what it does to her emotionally, turns to do this again...I loved his I have to...realising he really had to, his heart losing to his head...

I loved the passion and intensity in their kiss...it touched the heart and soul...and Nidhi, I loved how she finally relieving him of his anxiousness and anger...so nonchalantly tells him who he was!

I love the way your wrote so many layers of emotions and expressed each one so clearly and crisply, with the correct words, or do words sound correct when you use them? but you leave me in awe, always!

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Deepa jha

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I am so happy the way khushi's words started the healing process.

Due to his past terrors, he his not giving love a chance again...not even khushi.

I am glad he did talked to his sister, which might have made her feel better😊

I liked seeing the green eyed monster in arnav😉

No matter how hard they try, they just can't fght back their desires & also what they feel for each other.

And arnav, thoda toh sochna tha. How can khushi jump from one man to another? -_-

Arnav, my buoy, jealousy speaks hell lot then you will ever say.

Waiting for next😃

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So we get to see a jealous Arnav which I love!

Of course this Arnav is passionate and emotional and overreacts when he sees Khushi going out!

The kiss was sensational and superbly written! I think I've said before that the passion between these two is explosive!

I really liked Khushi's dress that you picked for her. Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!

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Posted: 12 years ago

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It ws beautiful... 😛
loved d jealous arnav...
and alok ws her cousin... hehe 😆
wonderful update...
loved it 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Nids..

come here you. 🤗

absolutely awesome piece of writing! Your updates always have the Toe-curling feeling throughout.

Start was brilliant with Khushi bluntly but straight forwardly showed Arnav the Mirror.

Loved it when she said about His Parents and at the same time his mind went back to the memories of his parents! that was the most beautiful part of this chapter for me!

Finally Khushi was able to make him go back to where he belongs.. where his family is waiting for him.

and, Arnav finally called Anjali. 👏 Loved the way Khushi touched the most sensitive part of Arnav's life with such an ease!

and then 2nd half.. Khushi looked breathtaking.😳

Jealous Arnav.. 😳😳 is always a treat. But love this Arnav for being so unique as in his Jealousy he didnt hurt her.. but but but.. His insecurities, his desire, his want for her came out in quite an awesome way!

and you excel in Kisses! bas! make me go all blushy and mushy! "Do that again!" ☺️☺️ I loved that line!

Loving this healing process where Khushi is surely but steadily making Arnav to come out and walk to her! Brilliant update Nids!👏

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: dj_arshifan
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Me first?😲

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The whole part was written so gracefully
Arnav & khushi's relationship has started off with a great kick!
The pull they feel for each other is much more than a mere attraction. It is just that khushi is aware of it but arnav, he is afraid to be introduced to that feeling.
I loved the relationship shared by bhabhi & devar.
So vandana can actually read people? Interesting
I am die-hard fan of besharam arnav in every story I read
I am so glad that khushi has completely opened up her past with him & has also shared lives with him. Me thinks this is the stepping stone to a relationship
Arnav's past was so painful. True, if the one you love breaks you completely apart your world just comes crashing down. You don't wish to live anymore. You don't want to love again!
But I am sure, khushi will mend his broken heart & teach him to love again <3

P.S. I will make a banner for this FF too. Already in my favorite list.

P.P.S This song came in my mind while reading the update.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cFlxi_k6EbI[/YOUTUBE]

Thank you so much for your love of this FF!!

I meant to tell you earlier but it slipped my mind, I loved the song you picked for the update, fit right in.

Thank you for your wonderful comments.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Wow...
Their conversation lead to a new change...
Khushi made him realise the truth...
He called his di and he was happy...
Vandana noticed the change in arnav's regarding khushi...
Arnav is so jealous 😆
Both tried to ignore but still they are not able to control...
Their emotions, feelings, passion is so awesomely written...
Amazing di...
You gave it a light end, at least you ain't give any cliffhanger...
Thank you for that...
👏
Love you di...
Again looonnnggg wait to do...
Finding Love time starts...

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Posted: 12 years ago

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R and waiting eagerly!! 😊

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As usual a brilliant update Nidhi... I was so excited when I read it... Actually I cheated too.. As I had said earlier, I can't handle twists... So I read the end first... 😛 Just could not wait to see who the guy was and then when I was relieved, I enjoyed the update like a small college girl!!

I totally love Arnav and Khushi's conversation on the beach... Khushi is a very smart and intelligent girl... In this story I see her using her brains while Arnav uses his heart... 'Your devastation simmers from the loss of your sister, not your love, am I right'... This was a perfect example oh how well she knew Arnav... 😊

She is a true gem... the way she put things across to Arnav about her family loving him a lot... About his parents loving each other... about eternal love... All these dialogues were so beautiful Nidhi... What brilliant thoughts... I always feel that each sentence is an idea... and you update was filled with so many of them... 🤗

I loved this Khushi knocking some sense back into Arnav's brain... His self-pity was troubling him and also the people around him... He was revealing all his past to her in order to make her understand that their relationship did not have a future... And she understood it bang on! You don't believe in love or relationships, and I don't believe in anything less... What dialogues...brilliant again... Take a bow Nidhi!! 👏

So Arnav had finally started thinking in the right direction... yet that fool thought that he could offer nothing more to Khushi that a summer romance? Really? By the end of this update itself he found himself acting otherwise... And finally he manages to call his Di... and the brother-sister duo bare their souls out to each other!! 😃

And the thunderbolt hits Arnav again when he sees Khushi, dressed to kill!! Woo hoo!! He could not see Khushi even speak to a stranger... another man, his competitor! His anger taking over his whole being!! And then he kept pacing around like a wild tiger remembering his passionate moments with Khushi... He wondered how could she move on so easily... Idiot! You are the one that let her go in the first place... 😛

Haha! Then he was fighting with himself over his confrontation with Khushi... whereasKhushi was busy chatting up with her cousin... yes cousin!! I had read that part first!! 😉 And then the ASR anger on poor Alok... but I am glad he gave Arnav back... Khushi's confusion over his behavior was obvious... One moment he pushes her away... the other he grabs her close to himself! Confused man!!

"Yeh kya kar rahi ho tum?" This dialogue is back to haunt us... And then his anger... his passion towards her... her melting at his touch... their kisss... the touch... and all the emotions that they felt for each other... just beautifully written... Then Khushi reveals to him that Alok is just a cousin to see a stunned Arnav and hear his sense of relief in an abuse... And as Khushi bubbled with laughter... i had a huge smile on my face... This was just a perfect chapter!! 😊

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Sorry nids lakho sorry for the late unres...chalo here i go.

I remember reading the teaser and getting really excited cause the J Arnav was looking awesome in that avatar and i always had full confidence in your writing skill to know that you and your J Arnav will fulfill all our expectation. And you totally did Nidhi...this was a great amazing chapter and J Arnav was at his sizzling best...bas

I think this must be the first time that i am equally in love with Arnav as much as i am in love with this Khushi...In most of the FFs i have read i have always had some problem or the other initialy with the character of Arnav and khushi...But in this story right from the word go...i have been in love with Khushi as much as i love Arnav. 😳 What a strong personality she is but still has all the charms and insecurities that every women will have, but still manages to stride through life with loads of confidence.

I loved her conversation with Arnav...loved the clarity in which she tried to explain to Arnav where he has gone wrong in handling his emotions...On how he was punishing himself and his family unnecessarily for sins that were not committed by him. How he was running away from life and taking refuge by denying himself the wonderful emotion called 'LOVE"

But i want to totally applaud her for standing up for what she believes in and very clearly telling Arnav that she will never give up on experiencing Love with all its ups and downs.

Glad that Arnav gave some thoughts to khushi's words and atleast took first step towards reaching out to his family...

Loved the J Arnav who was angry at khushi when he saw her looking her best for another man. Poor chap was so restless and then the bull decides to go for kill...

Both the As were amazing 😛 but what can i say i could only admire J Arnav who was fuming and the way he drags her to his room ufff...But really i think if a guy were to do that to me...i would have screamed bloody murder but when arnav does something like this to khushi i become very excited...😳

Loved the kiss nids...☺️ It was HOT HOT HOT bas. You are on the way to becoming kissology expert and could write books on kissology...really they are so good.

Looking forward to what happens next nids...now that Mr. Raizada knows what a fool he has been. 😆

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