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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --Sanchu--

partner an update after sooo long...but kya mast update hai...
not commenting in details...agla comment pakka will be lengthier...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter: 16

Mayank looked up and saw a woman tied hold by parkah 's man…

He was feeling he will again escape but this time he will not let this happen … wht he should do even if he aim and just shout parkah they will right there kill that woman… freak…

Parakh : kyua hua kuch nhi ker saktay nah… u lost mayank u lost….

Benji: not so fast…. Picture abhi baqi hai… akely ja rahy hoon.. apany ek sathi ko sath nhi lay jao ga…

Mayank looked back to him and was surprised to his wits

Mayank: tu yeah kya ker raha hai..

Benji: kya diya ur dad is going away alone… leaving u back here…

Benji was holding diya from her neck …. Having a gun on her head…. Mayank eyes went wide …

Mayank: KYA…

Benji: tujh kya laga k humaray baatein itni easily kasay jarahi hai bahar…. Meet her diya chopra… or should I say diya parkah chopra…

Diya: tum mjhy nhi maro ga…

She smiled looking at him..he looked away then looked at her back ...

Benji: he chukled… shayd baat sirf tumahry dad ki hoti tu na marta…. Per woh dono log ..aur yeah sab log… diya I will not think once to kill u…. police wala hoon… terrorist ko martay waqt hath nhi kapay ga meray….

Parkah was delusional looking at diya in there hold… samart from behind came and very steadily climb up the stairs to plane such tht he is not visible…

Mayank was frozen at his place as he was worried for the woman up there and here benji and diya… he was hell worried plus still he doesn't know abt nupur still.. but here the one thing he want is to arrest parkah alive.. he was stuck..his mind wasnt working untill
Diya: dad at ur back…

Parakah turned to see at back.. and mayank rushed to move away the kid and hold parkah… sliding towards him

smarat shot the terrorist moved the woman in plane….

Samrat: u stay here pls…

Parkah hited mayank back.. making his nose bleed.. moving away .. mayank hited him on his leg and turned his hand on the back .. locking his hand …yet he hit mayank back ..causing him to leave his hand… he griped him again.. this time circle his arms around parkah's neck….and with his leg pressing his already wounded leg hard…make him go weak with pain…. Soon the force of commandos too arrived..

Benji locked diya's hand in cuff…

Benji: bewaquf hoon.. thora emotional fool bhi… but itna nhi k tht u can make me turn blind…

Sir we will take him,..

Mayank: no I will do it by myself…

They moved infornt of the airport to look around the damages and hostages….there were no causalities , very minor injured people..tht to my running and stampeded…

Mayank was looking all around he want to see her glimpse… the more the time was going away his heart was sinking were she is … is she oky.. if she is where the hell she is ..he just cant stop thinking the possiblities of her being injured or hurt

mayank: where are u

Samart: woh thik hai… I meet her

He turn to him

Mayank: kaha hai per

Samart: she is handling ths hostages.. bahar hi arhi hogi… tu us k sath ja .. mein aur benji is ko bureau pochta hain ….

Mayank: yeah humary office waly area nhi jay ga

Samrat: I know yaar .. is ko asi jaga daaly ga.. k isko khud bhi nhi pata chaly ga k zinda hai k qabar mein…

Mayank: takecare of benji… mjhy diya wala mamala samhj nhi arha …

Samrat: mjhy bhi… donot worry I will handle… lay teri jan agai.. he said smiling and winking at him

He place his gun back and was looking at the few terrorist they were able to arrest alive specially parkah…finally he was able to arrest parkah.. alive and save… as soon as samrat signal him her arrival... he was numb to turn around and look at her... he thought he will face the worse... all these hours he was hell... in thoughts tht she might get hurt or sumthing more.. but evrytime the thoughts came he just shrug them off...but now he will turn ..he needs his breath ... he saw her.. and he felt his breath came now… she was helping an old lady to move outside…holding kids and all towards vans tht will take them to their home… and all smiling the same old beautiful l livily smile.,.there were clear signs of tiredness n fatigue as she brushed away her hairs off her forehead ..taking a sigh

The moment he saw her he felt he will loss his inhibitions pretty soon… he start moving towards her.. when she knew sumone is watching her .. she moved her eyes up n felt herself weak to… he was there.. a moment when the gun was on her head...she was so scared tht she might not be able to see him..but he was there... he just kept looking at him... as he rushed to her… an crashed her in his arms…. The feeling of having her breaths warming his skin… was the feeling made him believe he is alive… she hugged him back.. there was atime she was feeling she will never see him… yet she is in arms …He shut his eyes and kissed her nap…. It was the moment he felt alive….


Mayank: U scared me … his choaked voice shudered her... she has already lost her voice so she just snuggled more in him.

He moved away n cuped her face n than looked at his hand they were all black… she chuckled asking him to look at his shirt wch is in same condition.. he smiled and kissed her head and hugged her hugged her again…. He doesn't know wht actually he is feeling.. neither she can define just now how her heart is feeling… his mind was already dizzy and now having her… he was losing his inhibitions
..

COM: see thts the benefit of having two best officer married,…. Congrts both.. ur oky nupur..

They broke apart… yet still he hold her close to himself

Nupur: thanku sir… yes sir I am…

COM: this it was more because of both urs understanding abt each other….

They looked at eachother…smiled

COM: go u need rest n mayank in two hrs I want u to cum n have press conferences

Mayank: sir .. I will b there…

Nupur: wht not me

Mayank: ur grounded… so..

Nupur: im not im cuming… she said stubbornly

mayank: nupurrr

Nupur: i will cum ..thts it

COM: its better u do talk to press now… and take her away… she will not agree…

Kayal rukho…he patted her cheek…

Mayank: he moved his hand down to feel his son…. He is oky

she smiled... as he was so reluctantly touching the bump tht she has to hold his hand and assure him its oky to touch... he smiled at the feel... this was amzing

Nupur: hm…. He is perfectly fine… must b sleeping…

Mayank: acha bacha hai apni maa per thori gaya hai … doesn't take care… tum k kya zaroorat thi itna risk layny ki

Nupur: oye… officer Sharma… u should say tht I did a great job..

Mayank: ya ya … yaha humari jan nikal rahi thi.. great job…

Parakah who was now being thrown in the van.. stoped and looked at nupur and mayank… he cant believe tht this girl was all the time there… and she was… God dam.. she was a cop.. and he didn't recognized her.. not for a single moment he even doubted on her… but wht made him dam angry was the fact tht he lost the biggest revenge he can take from mayank…. He lost tht…

Parkah: Ab pata chala tum ko k kasa lagta hai… mjhy agar pata hoata tu yeah nhi bachti..is ki kismet achi hai k yeah bach gai

Mayank: Parkah tum ko pata hai us ko mein ny nhi mara tha… aur yeah bhi k woh mjhy bht aziz thi… tumhary admiyon k nishana miss hoa tha.. aur usko goli lagi aur us k bachny k liyan sab kuch kiya mein ny.. islyan tu waha se bhag pa thy.. per riya ny tumahri galti ki saza bhokgti …woh tumhara kasoor tha….

Parkah: just ek bar ek bar mjhy pata chal jata…. Us waqt jo tum per goli mein ny nhi chali woh chala dayta tu aj jita sukkon mjhy milta woh har saaza se uper hota…. Is se bari saza tu mayank k liyan aur ho hi nhi sakti thi…

Samrat; oye chal oye…. Yeah hindi film k villain k dialogues marna band ker… chalo…
……..
Mayank: is ny tum per goli chali…tum nah.. nupur why u have to do this… islyn mjhy sab se zadya darr tha.. usko ek baar bhi pata chalta hai tu… nupur

Nupur: mayank…kya hogaya hai… ab tu sab thik hai nah…..

Benji: nupur mayank press is waiting.. he moved forward… welcum back bhabi jan nikaldi sab ki…. He hugged almost crushing her…

Nupur: oye senti maat ker….

He touch her cheek and ask them to cum…

Mayank: hope yeah thik hai…

Nupur: matlab…

Mayank: ghar per batao ga… pehly yaha sab ko farik keray

Nupur: tumhara sir per … she touched his wound

Mayank: I m fine… itna nhi laga…

Nupur: han han tumhain thori lagta hai kuch.. tum tu macho man ho…

They both went infront of the press and sat there…. Nupur felt her back scremed with tiredness… and she did shuddered abit… it has been hell hectic for her… and if for once she showed it… he will kill her… she knew mayank is already hell scared and worried ..if once he saw her in pain.. she is dead..

Sir how cum it was such a easy swep for u guys and if it was why u did reacted earlier

Mayank: I just donot get the press people… we did it without any loss.. so ur saying who we did.. initially we didn't have any clue about wht they are upto as they did said a word… but yet ASP Bhushan….

Nupur: phir se bhushan sadu ….she whispered and he galred with smile…

wao life is back

Mayank: so ACP bhsuhan being ther help us a lot …telling us all about whts inside position are and wht they are planning to do.. with hostages ther we wouldn't have attacked such until we didn't knew the excat positon of them….

ACP bhushan ( mayank chukled at nupurs glare) how u were able to do so… they didn't got to know u…n wht wereu doing inside the aiport..

Nupur: I went to demolish the aiport.. everyone chukled…. Yaar I was cuming from Mumbai to delhi.. so got caught here…. About them not reconizig me.. I made myself look like this.. cant u see.. yaar mein ab itni bhi badsoorat nhi hoon…. I knew very part of delhi airport as its initaly days of security setup I was on my frst project as police officer so I know every bit… the way in.. the over look…

But still contacting outside .they let u talk

Nupur: tht I donot know how happen … but they were very easy with pregnant woman.. actually they didn't trouble any hostage… I just need tp pretend im having a panic attack and they let me call..my husband … tht was fortunately the in charge here…. And seoncd time they did react.. and said thy will shoot me but just tied up and all…

Mayank looked at her in sigh…

ACP Sharma… parkah has once run away from ur cluthes… is this was a revenage…
Mayank: it was kinda… for me arresting him was my work and I donot want to fail again.. for him repeating his unfinished business was…. He has always been such…

Doesn't it seem lame tht just for revenage he will do this big

Mayank: u cant balme him… tht nite he lost many things… he lost his job, his prestige… his moment to prove tht he can break in my security and im not the best at it.. and he will escape with all the gold … and he lost his wife and his unborn child too… tht was the biggest thing… and he still belive I shoot her…

I m cuming to personal one.. Bhushan u being pregenat didn't u felt afraid of doing all so.. it got have killed u… are can be risky to ur child

Nupur: it depeneds on u .. u take it as weakness or strength.. I took as shield and they did harmed me… plus it was about 5000 people .. if I cant help tht and just like sam lay man will think abt frst myself whts the use of me being the officer…

ACP Sharma.. it wouldn't have been easy to think as officer…having ur own wife as hostage.

Mayank: it wasn't… it was hell.. u cant think like an offcer yet u have to… and after knowing it is parkah mayb this was more worrying me as he would have not stoped himself if he knew she is my wife…

He was holding her hand beneath the table… tightly and was feeling her holding him too

So there main motive was to take revenage

Mayank: no not at all… there main motive was to take the arms and gold.. with breaking my security taking away my job… revenge would have cum its own way… plus we will intergoate him more… maybe sumthing related to peace conference might arrive
Wht abt the peace conference

Mayank: I wish it happen and I have no idea wht the higher authorities have decided…. Pls now.. thts all..

Samrat assure him to wrap up things here and ask him to go home.. as he can see nupur was feeling really tired…

...

Meray intelligent readers..u all were always right ..DIya was negative...

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yeah i was r8.
its diya.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update.
I had a little doubt on diya.
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing
now waiting for mayur moments
loved the part

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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally tum ne update kar di...
How was your vacation?

Nice update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update ...
I love mayur scene very much .
U describe there emotions very well seriously I read that part 5 times
I like nupur more in this update .she is so brave yar itna sab kuch hua lakin phir b she is so easily saying they just tied me up n all...sigh
Bas dekh la api huma pehla sa he pata tha wo diya h .hahaha ab apka readers h intelligent to ho ga he na 😉

Now waiting for the next part jis me sirf mayur ho ga
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG..!!! It was Diya..
awesome Di..
But ab Benji ka kya hoga...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update
finally mayur were together
and diya was parekh's daughter..- nice twist

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