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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi this is a two part os hope u guys like it

The unsaid feelings.It was 6 clock the party was on full swing. The d3 was having fun laughing and dancing. Everyone was happy except rey he felt alone without her. He wanted to be with her. His eyes searched for her but she wasn't seen anywhere."Rey" her voice echoed on his head it felt like a knife was put through his heart. His heartbeat went fast he felt pain her pain taani's pain. He felt the pain in his chest even through the loud sound boomed round the great party hall. Her silent whispers made his legs weak."Tanni" he whispered. He heart felt heavy. Every cell in his body felt her pain. All the veins in his brain told his that his taani was calling him. She needed him.He began to feel uncomfortable; he couldn't concentrate his eyes searched for taani. She was no where. " taani" he called for her."Rey" he heard the silent cry again. This time the pain was more he could sence her heavy voice. He realised taani was in trouble she need him her rey. His reys scanned every face in the room but taani face was not there.Swaron noticed the reys change of expression.Rey ran out of the party room in search for tanni. He called her phone but their was no answer"Rey are u okay" asked swayam."No" anwered silenty as the pain increased in his body."What happened rey.""Where taani we need to find her know" moaned rey."She should be inside" anwered swayam and he went to check but couldn't find her"She isn't we need to find her.Sharon go check the girls locker roomSwayam go check the canteen and the researhal hallIll go search the all class room." Ordered rey.Swayam and Sharon obeyed rey and went to search for taani.Shareyam looked for taani but coudnt find tanni.Sharon kept ringing tanni's phone bt no one answered it.Swayam found tanni phone on the floor the screen was badly damaged. Swayam was worried for taani.He shouted "tanni" through the empty corridors of the college. There was no response.The rest of the gang was informed by Sharon about missing tanni, they came and began to look for tanni but wasn't anywhere. No one had seen her recently."rey" he heard the whisper again but this time it was quite whisper. His body began to shake. His hands began to shake.After about 15 minutes the gang got together to the centre of the college."cant find her anywhere" a worried swayam spoke quietly "I need to find her I think"'.. Before he could finish the sentence, A scream echoed the silent corridors "bhaiii" it was her voice a deep pain emerged his heart he run to where the screams was coming from when he saw the gimpse of taani he stood in shock. taani was running around through the top corridors of the building covred in blood . Her cloths ripped.

There was fear within the eye. Tanni run as she saw a sight of rey she began to run faster and hugged him tightly . He felt her body shivering her tears and blood covered his shirt.He hugged her tight. He tried to break the hug to see her face. But tanni made the hug tighter. She didn't want to leave him. Rey tried to move so that he could console but when he moved he saw a guy holding her duppata. Rey's expression changed. As soon as taani saw the guy she hugged him tighter."rey he ' she couldn't continue as she slowly started to fall on rey feet.He picked her up and put his jacket around her and pulled her behind him. He told her to go down and find swayam.As taani began to walk the guy followed her a scared taani ran back and hugged rey.He signeled her to go and he went to confort the guy.he guy punched the guy relay hard run towards taani a scared taani began to take her steps towards rey to help but he yelled "to taani run""But you"Don't worry about me and go she started to wal backwards before she could run the guy punched rey again and run behind taani who ran as she got to the top of the stares she spotted the gang and began to run down the stairs and slipped she rolled down the gang watched as her unconsciousness body landed infront of them. Blood started to pour from her head.Swayam picked her up and run towards the exit" leaving behind the shocked gang.Nilesh and Vicky began to lok for re. When they got to the where rey was he was beating the hellout of a boy. Nilesh and Vicky came in the middle."Leave me am gona kill him he tired to rape taani"Rey forget him right know think about tanni she fell down the staires go to the hospital were are all here will take care of him.Rey ran towards his car and started his car and drove to the hospital.He ran to the to where swayam and Sharon was standing. A worried rey rang his dad and told him about taani.They wait for the doctor to come out .Sharon told the the truth to swayam about rey faking the break up.Before he could ask anything the doctor came"how is she"Doctor: there are minor fractions in her backbone and some fractions in her arm and leg. But she has still not gained conscious.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dramatic stuff! Poor Taani...I'm glad Rey beat the crap out of that guy! This story is different to your other work Aimz...looking forward to reading the next part :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Unres...

Thank you so so much for posting this...
I really really loved this, Aimen..
The way Rey felt Taani's pain in her absence...
I really felt bad for Taani..
I hate that guy,...
So so glad that Rey beat the crap out of that cheapo...
Plz. Aimen Plz. Continue as soon as possible...
I wanna read further...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome story, really different
loved Rey's lice for Taani that he felt she was in trouble
mind blowing story, please continue and make it a ss
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow, loved the connection between TaaRey!
and that guy 😡
please continue this
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome :D
Loved It <3
wow rey felt tani in pain !!!
ugh that creep 😡
Continue Soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome and painful ... Poor Taani ... Plz update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Update soon
Update soon
Update soon
awesome story plz
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice story...
dramatic n scary...
plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I would just say one thing now Aimz.. Please continue soon!! Update soon please please please and do pm me!! Ill say everything together!!

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