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Posted: 12 years ago
Last update was short
plz this time try to update a long part
and please put a long mayur scene
tasnim. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
aPI PLEASE UPDATE ALL UR ff'S
PLEASE aPI

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Posted: 12 years ago
Update soon api n plzishh is update me mayur ko mila do n pori update mayur per ho plz api jan ab our intezar nhi ho rha 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
will update very soon
hopefully in this week.,...im back in town
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Guys

i havent rply to any
pardon errors

i am back after attending a wedding cermony out of city... bit tired yet i m trying to write n get back to things... as Ramzan are just about to start tu kafi kam hai

pls do remind me to update this ff on sunday... as by Tuesday inshAllah it will end..

enjoy
Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Chapter: 15

The team placed their caps switching the lights to see the clear path… moving abit in tht line they can see the three paths infornt of them

Wch way sir..

Mayank: second one…

Ur so sure sir…

Mayank: I have no doubts at all..

Benji reached the army van and got inside..

Diya: hum yaha aay hain tum tu kah rahy thy k mein waps jarahi hoon

Benji: tum abhi waps nhi jao gi… asay thik nhi… abhi u have to help me in finishing this all…yaha bhaito..

Benji took hs portion and started hacking the area… the first attempt was waste dam it

Diya: tum tu kah rahy thy tum se nhi horaha hai

Benji: ab hojay ga… tum hon na

Diya: kya

Benji: tried it second time it was asking a password

Diya: ab kya kero ga

He smiled and looked at her

Benji: and writing first attempt he put it and accepted.. bulls eyes.. diya's eyes were wide in surprise wao it was…

Benji start accessing the area he placed his own password and jammer so tht thy cant change the frequency.. he started to work with his co worker and saw the cameras oopen..bingoo..

Benji: Mayank u can hear me

Mayank: ya benji..

Benji: I got it..

Mayank: great…

Bneji: everything tht we have with the numbers is correct.. just one progress a private plane I can see very near the outer gate of the lounge I think there shifting things…

Mayank: tu bus cameras manuilpate ker… we are almost near

Benji: its recording meray pass itna data ajay ga..

Mayank: bahar k area tujhy dekhna hai humari team se tu hai bus waha

Benji: tension maat lay….

Mayank was on the edge of the pipeline… and he climb the small ladder wch was making way to the washroom.. he pushed the mainwhole to make it open…. To three pushes and it was open… he slowly slided it off and sneak out.. he smiled he was there inside…

He came down…looked around it was the exact place nupur has said… the only thing he wish is to see her ASAP..and clear this mess… his came out of his thoughts and brief the team going back down … as it was not a huge place to have them all…

Group 1 will go first and with a min slowly one by one all 4…

Sir….

Nobody is gona attack… if by chance u have to ..be very careful to make it as silent as possible… we donot want them to be alert ..u get tht…

The first group climb up and enter the washroom..slowly the sneak out an rush to frst wing.. the didn't attacked as they need to wait for Mayank instruction but yes there were hardly 4 people there..chilling almost…

Than the second third and fourth team took there place….

Mayank : benji ur ready

Benji: yes I am…

Mayank: samrat u take the team out..

Samrat: tu …

Mayank: mein agay ja ker ek kam kero ga…

Samrat: thik hai..

Mayank: on ur positions now… all…

The team rush to the site .. and Mayank climb and jump to the the end of the series of washrooms… he took out a gun and a bullet proof jacket and open the flashing tank and place the bag …and went out .. he hoped tht this is the washroom nupur used for mapping the area.. and she do find it…

…………

Nupur was feeling hell sick..she will vomit any moment she knew.. she call there man asking tht she needs to go washroom but they didn't listen resulting she vomit there…

Nupur: pls let me go to washroom…

The man groan in anger.. god this woman is making things worse for him…

Parkah: fine let her go ..open her up..

they did and with help of priya she rushed to the washroom… she moved in and saw boots mark in the washroom… she puck and than clean her self.. she took out a energy bar form her back and eat it .. she need it she knew tht…. she moved in the toilets and search

Priya: kya talsh ker rahi hoon

Nupur: they have reached ..yes… meray liyan kuch tu hoga yaha…

She open the tank on by one and than smile at one whn found a bag.. she opend it and found gun bullets and bullet proof jacket

Priya eyes went wide..

Priya: yeah kya hai… tum

Nupur: she came close and holded her… yaha anadar police achuki hai.. and they will attck in few mins.. tum jao bahar donot go to lounge …after 3 mins they will attack thn find the cop and go out ..u will go out safe trust me… help other too but ok

Priya: haan but tum asay I mean tum …

Nupur: I am cop..

Priya: wht

Nupur: han per ksis ko na pata chaly oky… just go…

Priya: per ur not fine

Nupur: she smiled… I m fine… donot worry… I have to complete this job.. and u need to help me.. help others…go now..

Nupur wore the jacket and hold her gun…

…….

Mayank: took his position in the center lounge he took all around but he cant see nupur … where are u … his heart was sinking at the thoughts tht he has in mind…

Samrat: maaynk u there

Mayank: haan.. all set Alfa bravo Charlie delta ..all ready..

Sir…

Mayank: benji on ur count…

Benji: oky…. 3….2….1… rolling

Mayank: go on… hold five…

As soon as they get the call benji rolled the video… and the four teams attacked the area… they all of silencer attached to there guns..

Mayank did went with the fourth team.. he cant just stay here… and wait..

They aimed and shout all at instance at frst two wings..

Wing one clear sir…

Wing two cleared..it was easy there as there were few ones…

The terries from the third wing just to have word went to the second wing and saw the dead… he at instant called everyone…

Mayank could see them alert…

Mayank: spread the gas at five..now.. and open fire at fourth and third..

Mayank aimed and killed two…he was caught form the back by one… yet samrat shout him….carefully… ….samrat spread the gases and killed a man near the main leader… the want the main person alive… they went in having mask on them and started to take hold on people one by one…

Benji: Mayank sumone is going out of the wing five..

Mayank: freak it must be parakh…

Mayank was holded from back by man … he hited him in stomach..yet he hit Mayank back on head… he did felt a bit dizzy yet got control on him…just when he was about aim to kill Mayank …Mayank slided on his feet hiting him on his foot… turned and hit on head they want sum alive for sure,,. He tied him and ask one commando to take him… they will interrogate him…. He ask commando to be very careful around.. as they can kill themselves

There were screams and coughs all in central lounge ..people where running all over.. and the police man where making them show the way….and still he cant see nupur.. he rushed to the outer area and saw a man running he aimed and place fire on his leg and he fell down… Mayank rushed to him hold his hand when he turned around he saw he wasn't parakh.. he was hostage…

Man: I have done nothing pls I m hostage…pls donot kill me

Mayank: he didn't agreed and ask sum to take him

Benji he is not parkah woh kaha hai..

Benji: I cant see there is no moment in wing two and three.. and fith I can see any thing its to cloudy..

Mayank: can u make the fire almar work and water start

Benji: sure I can give me 5 second …

Mayank rushed back and had to fight sum .. there was now open fire in lounge..they were not thinking now… and the police has to be very careful ..Mayank and smarat rushed to them.. and shout sum ….yet they have to fight them too…

Nupur start making people go towards wing on n two as she knew its safe area…

Nupur: move to tht side .. move to …. She was gripped by a terries and she placed her gun in his stomach and killed him.. she can't fight and take risk of by not killing one… she has to be very careful on tht

Samrat came and saw her and he hugged her tight.. it was relief seeing her here ..it was such a relief…

Nupur: Samrat guide them out … ask sum u go to the outer area there shifting arms

Samrat: Mayank gaya hai

Nupur: akely nhi hoga just go

Samrat; tum yaha

Nupur: I will handle..

Mayank reach in the center lounge and water started them now have clear picture …there were very few hostage ..there plan of in gases making them out was succeful… he can see tht ..

Very carefully samrat has made people move towards the wings… and they have almost been succeful of clearing it… mayaynk cant see parkah

Mayank: benji can u see him…

Benji: I think I can Mayank to ur left he is going out… the plane is ready…

He rushed out and there he has to slide down as a man was holding gun to hit on his head.. he slided down and hit him on his leg.. yet he stood up and beat Mayank..

He hold his hand make it on his back breaking it off his shoulder… Mayank threw him on floor.. and the other commando took him.. Mayank went to out.. he can see parkah runnig .. he shout him on his leg yet he kept limping and running…

A terrorist was cuming from the other end who shout Mayank.. the bullet hit and he fall down due to pressure yet stood up again as he was wearing bullet proof. And in return he shout tht terrorist on head..

Mayank: freez parkah aur I will kill u right there….

Parakah was standing out side the wing in flying area…

Parkah: u will not kill me ur ego will b hurt… I will go away Mayank u cant stop be I have sumone with me…

Mayank: his heart sinked thinking no not nupur… yet he breath in relief it was kid he has hold in…

Parkh: u will not kill me…. If u kill this child ur job and ur so called fake prestige of being so good will all ruined… they donot know ur a murder and can do anything to save ur name

Mayank: I didn't killed her and u know tht… u know tht

He moved few step towards him…

Parkah: donot give me tht Sharma… u cant fool me…. I just wished I could kill ur wife soon.. so tht u will know wht it feels like…

Mayank: I will not let u escape this time…

Parkah : u have to… else I will kill him and his mother too who is ther in the plane..

Mayank looked up and saw a woman tied holded by parkah 's man…

He was feeling he will again escape tht this time he will not let this happen … wht he should do even if he aim and just shout parkah they will right there kill that woman… freak…

Parakh : kyua hua kuch nhi ker saktay nah… u lost Mayank u lost….

Benji: not so fast…. Picture abhi baqi hai… akely ja rahy hoon.. apany ek sathi ko sath nhi lay jao ga…

Mayank looked back to him and was surprised to his wits

Mayank: tu yeah kya ker raha hai.
Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update Api
awesome
lekin kafi short tha
Api why u r in hurry to end such a beautiful FF- thoda sabar rakho na.

itna jaldi kyun end karna chati ho?? r u going to start a new story??
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow just now i turned to goldie
partyyy
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tasnim.

beautiful update Api
awesome
lekin kafi short tha
Api why u r in hurry to end such a beautiful FF- thoda sabar rakho na.

itna jaldi kyun end karna chati ho?? r u going to start a new story??



hurry??... nah
CSI is always a short ff... around 13-14 chapter yeah tu phir 17 per jay ga... when the case is finish csi is finished...

aur yeah chota update tha..beta ji yeah poray 8 pages k tha😆...

new ff ki baat maat kero aj kal mein lazy hogai hoon do ffs tu sambhal nhi rahy new kaha se start kero
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tasnim.

wow just now i turned to goldie
partyyy



congrats dear

tht so on my thread yupiii 🥳🤗

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