SS-Mr&Mrs Asad Ahmed Khan's Room lst prt ch8 pg51

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SS- Mr&Mrs  Asad Ahmed Khan's  Room

 

Hey friends I m starting a new SS..this is my first time i m writing a SS...so pls forgive me for my mistakes...

This Ss is ..filled with love, passion, masti, fun...  and revenge...and pretty obvious asyalacious moments...๐Ÿ˜‰!
Hope u guys will like it!

Prologue:-


Kehte hai  ek tote hua  dil ki dua khuda tak sab se pehle pohanchti hai'..kyunki wo sidha humare dil se nikalti hain'..

Asad pray at ajmer at buland shah baba's darbar..

""Main Nahi Janta Mohabbat Kise Kehte Hain, Haan Par Itna Janta Hoon Ki Zinda Rehna Hain Kise Kehte Hain Aur Jab Se Zoya Gayi Hai Meri Saansein To Chal Rahi Hai Par Main Zinda Nahi.Main Nahi Janta Wo Meri Taqdir Mein Hain Ya Nahi Aur Agar Nahi To Main Dua Karta Hoon Ki Agar Apni Taqdir Badal Sakta To Uska Naam Apne Haaton Ki Lakiron Par Likh Deta , Hey Mere Maula Mujh Par Raham Kar, Mujhe Meri Zindagi Lauta De' "

his prayed listened by allah'.he gave him a chance to explain everything to zoya'to confess his love to zoya..at fort..

Asad confess his love to zoya'.he said tht 3 golden words which he always want to but tht never come to his lips'.but zoya being hurt'..doesn't want to listen to her heart again'..she listened to her mind this time'..& she doesn't make her way to asad & leave..asad shattered like a glass'& lost all his hopes''.

when zoya reaches at hotel by smhw she get to knw abt asad is innocent she link the lose  ends & get to knw tht her asad is innocent'he ws drugged tht night '. she is at the top of the world'because she get her love back'.immediately she call asad & tell tht he is innocent & want to meet him..at cliff''but again evil plays a card'.on the other end its not asad its tanveer'

 

at cliff tanveer reaches & she actually confess tht nothing happen between asad & tanu'.she pushes zoya from the cliff'..

zoya's last words are

I LOVE U 'I LOVE U MR.KHAN  I LOVE U'๐Ÿ˜ณ

TANVEER THOUGHT her plan worked nw..everything is okie'.but'..

As allah is always there to help each & every one..to care for his beloved people''to take care of his true lovers'..there is a child who saw  tanveer & zoya's confrontation'& .he  make a video ..he captured all the confession''&  tht video''will soon be reach to the ultimate person asad..

Tht child must be a god's messenger or a cupid to make these two loved birds together.

 

This story moves from ajmer asad mangalpuriyan, zoya confession ,asad confession, asya love 'asya mreunion.. asya at  Bhopal, asya plan to reveal tanveer in front of everyone.using  formula'..socho socho'????...tht will be fun'.tanveer ko jhappad'(my fav')'.& a big twist at d end'I promise u will love d end'I hv smthing  different  in my mind'..

SORRY for all my grammatical mistakes... I know that i make so many grammar mistakes...  THANK YOU FOR BEARING ME... 



Pari

 for Pm's pls add me into ur buddy list by sending me ur req...


my previous work..

earlier i wrote 3 OS  .

1. The KISS https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3598294

2. The Hug- u belongs to me-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3599961

 3. Os-asad  confession  to zoya/asad kidnap zoya.- this os became  a little part of  the shw too.

...https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3604276

my victory dance on this.yippee...hehehe..




4. ONE SHOT-  wanna run away...!!!...



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INDEX

Chapter 1-    ALLAH's Messenger on pg 6



chapter 2- Mangalpuriyan Asad on pg 12

chapter 3 - asya reunion on pg 18

chapter 4 - In d night No control on pg- 24 


chapter 5- sm asyalacious moments..

chapter 6- back to home


chapter 7- bathroom romance


chapter 8 A - lipstick flavour

Chapter 8-B  asya & ayan against tanu billi


Chapter 8-C...happy family


love u all 
pari 




Edited by princeegoyal - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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update soon...pls PM me...๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago
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im baaack... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
 
 
yipppe im 3rd...  
woooww pari...
tussi to kamaal ho yaar...
 
yaaar tu kitnaaa achha likhti hai...
 
 I mean it ws just just just amaaaznnn... ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ 
 
suuuperrb yaaar...
 
inaaam bindaaas...
Edited by LuvUAsYa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Gud one, yaar!
U write well but there is always room for improvement...I liked it.๐Ÿ˜Š

Would you plz be kind enough to pm me wen u continue?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i will surely try to...i knw i m very abd wd writing...but i'll try my best...& yes as u r in my buddy list i'll surely pm u..

pari

Originally posted by: kabhimitwaasya

Gud one, yaar!
U write well but there is always room for improvement...I liked it.๐Ÿ˜Š

Would you plz be kind enough to pm me wen u continue?

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Posted: 10 years ago
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u write so well pari๐Ÿ˜ณ

I really loved the concept๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Well i luv all concepts on current track๐Ÿคฃ

AsYa confession?๐Ÿ˜ณ

I m so waiting

Jaldi jaldi update kar๐Ÿ˜†

N thanks a lot 4 the PM ๐Ÿค—




Luv Aniโค๏ธ
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice๐Ÿ˜Š... continue soon!!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was really good! Cont soon an pm me when u update!
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Hey Pari ๐Ÿ˜Š New SS ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ great dear. Please fill  it with AsYa licious moments and 'Mangalpuriya' Asad longing for Zoya...and I am looking forward to the 'Tanveer's secret revealed' chapter.

Update soon please๐Ÿ˜Š