Jodha Akbar SS:The Undying Love Story Ch 2 Section B Updt 9\1\14

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PrologueOne Glimpse of Jodha, and he knew she was meant for him, only for him.She belonged to him and no one else, Not even that Suryabhan, whom he defeated.
And Jalal gets what he wants.
"Shehen-Shah Ji"a meek voice of some daasi entered his thoughts.
He turned to look, what was so important that she had the courage to enter when he had ordered no one to do so.
"Ji..wo Maharani Ruquiya Ji ne aapke liye yeh..yeh Patr bheja hai"she spoke with fear in her voice, she feared, that one mistake and Shehen-Shah Slamat's Shamsheel at her neck, just one second before her neck slits.
After handling the Letter, she quickly gets out fo the room, still trembling with fear.
But notices something, something very new in the Shehen-Shah. Something she couldn't put a finger on.
Maybe Ruquiya Begum will be able to...Same Day in Amer:"Aap aisa nahin kar sakte hain" Meinavati was shivering with fear
"Ham bhi asia nahi karna chahte par majboori hai, Hamari sena Jalal ka muqabla nahi kar sakti, usne Raja Surybhan ko bhi parajit kar diya hai" Raja Bhar-maal said with stress and sadness evident on his Royal face
"Par Jodha, jara sochiye Jodha ka kya hoga?"
"Jodha hamari bhi beti hai, Meinavati hame bhi unki chinta hai, Par hum unke ke liye saare Amer ko toh saza nahi de sakte"
"Chinta mat kijiye Bapu sa"Jodha interuppted the conversation
"Jodha, aap yahan? Apko apne kaksh me hona chahiya tha
"Bapu sa! Ham Jalal ka prastav sweekar karte hain, Amer ki Bhalayi ke liye ham uss Jallad se vivah karne ko tyaar hain"Jodha said with a determination in her voice
"Jodha par.."Meinavati could not digest the fact
"Par-war kuch nahi maa sa, hamne faisla kar liya hai, and she was gone before anyone clould respond to the Sky-crashing decision
For a moment Raja Bhaar-mal wished what Jodha wished earlier.
He wished that Jodha wasn't a Royal princess, then she woudn't have to sacrifice for the sake of the state
Meinavati dropped to the ground, with tears glistening in her eyes, just about to fall.
"Maharani banegi wo"
"Itihaas ka Naksha badal degi wo"
"Pyaar ki ek Anokhi kahaani lighegi wo"
"Bikkhre huye baal, Mitti ka sindoor. Aaj tu peheli baar uaka naam sunegi Jiske Ghar ka deepak Jodha Jalayegi"
"Teri Jodhaa Mughlo ke ghar jaayegi"
"Yahi honi hai, aur yahi ho kar rahega"
Shaguni Bai's words kept ringing in Meinavati's ears,She thought she could change the fate by marrying Jodha to Raja Suryabhan..
Jodha is going to get married to Jalal.
Shaguni bai's predication is coming true!
How was it? This isn't related to related to real history!Leave you Reviews. No PMs for this. Do you wish me to continue?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome yaar!
Very beautifully written & plzzz do continue!
Simetimes i feel that jalal matches RK's character,
Though i luv RK more!actually,d most!
Anyways,gud to c u in dis forum as well
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb! Very nice concept dear. Please update soon. And add me in ur pm list if u can.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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a yes please!

:D

Arz hai:


Undercurrents of passion.

Undercurrents of anger.

Undercurrents of love.

Unbelievable amounts of intrigue.


I believe, ladies and gentleman, we have a great FF in the making. 👏

Best wishes for the FF,

Shalu Jaan. 😳
Edited by sharneil92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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update soon seems really interesting and plz in bigger fonts.
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Awesome Starting 👏 ⭐️ 👏


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Loved it and was awesome! Plz pm me when u update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome yaar!
Very beautifully written & plzzz do continue!
and dont frgt to pm me
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Chapter 1 Marriage:2 Different Religions.
Jalal sat in the Mandap.
Still looking in the direction of the staircase, From where Jodha would descend in some time.
He didn't had to wait much, in a minute or two his bride was descending down the stairs with her mother and sister on both the sides.
Jodha, he murmered lost in her,Godess of Perfection
Jodha was made to sit beside her
As the rituals started for the Hindu-marriage, Jalal could sense Jodha was extremely uncomfortable.
Ofcourse how could you be happy marrying someone you hate the most.
He filled her maang with the Red Powder, called Sindoor and tied the Mangalsutra around her neck.
She flinched at his touch, which he enjoyed looking at.
While tying the Mangalsutra a tear dropped on Jalal arm.She was crying! Somewhere his heart ache at the though of Jodha crying
But Why?
Jalal has no emotions, Why he is feeling low at someone's crying
But she is not someone
She is Jodha, his bride
The epitome of Perfect beauty, A Rajputani Princess who held the courage to fight Jalal back.
Who was a blend of Innocence and Bravery
He remembered the incident that took place yesterday
"Ham aapse shaadi karne ko tyaar hai Jalal, leking hamari kuch sharte hain"She spoke with a determination in her voice
"Impressive!" though Jalal
He was impressed, A girl with Beauty and Brains, a rare combination and a precious pocession.
"Kahiye"
"Aap hamara Dharm-Parivartn[Religion change] nahi karvayenge"
"Aur Hame apne kaksh me ek madir chahiye"She stressed the last word and went out before he could say something, clearly declaring that she ordered not asked it.
"Jalal ki begum jaisa hi Robb [Attitude] hai aapme, Jodha" he smirked to himself. clearly impressed by his future Bride.
She was different, any other girl in her place would be over joyed to Marry a Shehen-Shah like him, and would agree to all Terms and Conditions but this girl is giveing me conditions.
Someway Jalal liked her for this Attitude.
"Vadhu ka haath thamiye"Pandit's voice rang in his ears, breaking his thoughts.
"Yeh rasm kuch iss tarah hai, Var ko Vadhu ka haath tham kar yeh Vachan dena hota hai ki woh uska saath jundagi bhar nahi chodenge"
Jalal looked at Jodha as the Pandit explained the ritual.
Jodha was sure Jalal would not accept it, As he is marrying her only for His Ego and Pride, for adding one more member ot his Harem, so Why would the Shehen Shah promise to be her side all his li...
"Ham Jodha ka saath jindagi bhar nibhayenge, Vaada" he said holding her fingers and gradually her hand.
He promised, surprising her and himself.
She shivered at his touch, some feeling she couldn't name but this didn't happen at Suryabhan's touch, then Why at Jallad's touch
...
"You will never understand Jodha" Love said peering over the couple from above
"What are you looking at?" fate asked appearing into the scene
"The most magical and beautiful couple in the era" Love said still Awwwing
"You mean Jodha-Akbar?" fate asked joining him in peering
"How do you know?"
"Don't you forget, I played a crucial role in making this marriage happen, This is beacuse of Destiny, I am the one who chose these 2 for the most beautiful Undying Love Story that is to be witnessed by History."fate retorted
...
Jodha closed her eyes, not able to understand what was happening to her, While Jalal was having the same sensation Jodha was having
Touch of Soulmate.
After the rituals were over they proceeded for the Islamic wedding, It was Jodha who insisted that they will have a Hindu Marriage too.
During all this Jalal had only one thing in mind
This Girl.
She is different from others!
Thank you forumwassis for such Lovely comments.😭This Chapter was Crap😭 Very bad!I know I wasted your time, forgive me!
I was thinking of Question-Answer system.
I will ask you a Question at every Update and you will give you views about it and I will reply to it.
Question~!
What do you think about Jalal-Jodha equation? How do you think the first Day in the Jalal's palace will be?Frame the scenario, write it.
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@cuterishbhala
Thanks!! Yes I think RK and Jalal match someway, mostly in ego and "I am the one HOTTIE" auro around them.I hope you will be a regualr reader.
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@Sunshine001
Thank you very much~!I would appriciate Longer comments!
@Archi02
Thankxxx! I am sorry I don't have a PM list for this SS
@Sharnie92
Wah Wah! Shalu Jaan, Thanks for appricaiating my efforts and I gladly accept your wishes.Love You!
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Thank you very much! I am sorry No PMs! Really sorry..I am gald you commented
Edited by ApurvaLovesARVI - 12 years ago

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