TS: Wimbledon Love, last part(page 20)

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avni_barun

@avni_barun

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

M sooo happy cheeni...U posted d SS...M sooo proud of u...

simply amazing concept... 👏 👏 👏 ⭐️

Arnav's accident mad me cry... 😭 😭

Did Lavanya left him coz of his accident???

ur writing was just amazing...loved it...

He didn't left his room for 2yrs...😲 😭

Khushi will surely fill his life wid Happiness... 😃

try 2 extend it a bit...like 5-6parts if possible...

look hows here 2 congratulate u 4 d SS...

love u cheeni... 🤗

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MeLuvsMiam

@MeLuvsMiam

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

Res

Unres~
Omg..!!! My sweetipie's first story

Superb, mind blowing 👍🏼

Amazing concept & story 😃

Arnav's accident 😭

Lav grrr...😡 but i'm happy that she isn't his GF now 😃

I can't see Arnav like this so helpless 😭

Khushi's entry 😃

Hope Khushi will bring new colours & new happiness in Arnav's life 😉

Hayee tere 1st TS ne hi humein maar dala 😳

Thnx 4 pm 🤗

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ll..Gungun..ll

@ll..Gungun..ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

This is a very wonderful start...
Continue very soon

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

RES for dhanno...

comment from my overexcited Dhanno...

OMG...OMG..OMG...

MY BASANTI WROTE IT?...

its socking yaar😆...

but rocking also...😳

firstly give me a hug🤗

ya just like this...

my basanti wrote it

i m dancing yaar

ya ya in sanka devi style😆

Tennis?...i thought this heart only beats for cricket😆😆

i also love tennis but my fav is

Roger Federer. i m telling this here i cant believe it😆

superb basanti...u r to a rocker yaar...simply awesome...Love this sportman Arnie...but what happened?...nightmares but y?.i always wanted to see arnie as a sportsman...u did it for me...thnks yaar

cant wait for 2nd part...amazing...

and thanks for res

and han i just love the title👏

Arshi met...now what?...sachi yaar cant wait for it...update soon nahi to u know😉...

and han for this amazing ss this one is for u

my basanti is a fabulous writer so party time😉

awesome...in Dean style

loved it...

love u nalayak😆

muahhh

urs dhanno❤️😳

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ArshiAms

@ArshiAms

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

woww amazing update...waiting fr nxt part.. 🤗

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@Chocolate_barun

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

Congrats di you finally wrote
m nadal and fedrer fan
brilliant di arnav was a tenis playr and he fulfiled his maapaa's wish
but he is now in sort of depression and finally he met khushi aray is baar khushi ne arnav ko bachaya poolside scene
thanks for pm continue soon

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-Anayah-

@-Anayah-

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Posted: 12 years ago

uffo
majhya navre la tumi wimbledon jinkwila...😆😆😉😉

okay I commmented in marathi...taki kisi ko pata na lage ki main kya bol rahi hu...😳😳

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asthagarwal

@asthagarwal

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hawww... I'm late... 😲 😲 😲

Bt anyways... I'm in luv wid d title Wimbledon luv... ❤️

I ws imagining Arnav here lyk Fedrer...

Hw hot wud he luk in dat sexy white t-shirt n shorts... ☺️

Cumng back 2 d update... I guess he met wid an accident where he hurted himself n lost his father too????

Finally he met his Khushi n I wish she fills his lyf wid loads of Khushi too...

Luvd it swthrt... Muahhh...

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Enchantng_Beans

@Enchantng_Beans

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Posted: 12 years ago

Who Told You tht U Suck at Writting. .. . You Are Amazing at It 👍🏼

Storyline & Characterization . . Amazing 👍🏼

I Loved That Khushi Dukhi Part ❤️

So , The Lead Had made Her Entry

Looking Forward [8>] 😎

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Deepti

@deepti1906

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

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you got to be kidding me sissy... just 2 or 3 chapters are left? *pout*

OK it's a Res. Can't write much. Typing on phone sucks. will edit it soon pakka...:)

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Gosh this was so awesome Komal...👏 I never felt that it was your first attempt at writing while reading it.. Absolutely loved it..❤️❤️

OMGeee Arnav and tennis? Just imagine. Him in a white vest and shorts clinging to his body, all sweaty, with wrist band and head band and his fringes falling over his forehead and with a tennis racket of couse... Hayee. I'm Dead. THUD.

I felt really bad for Arnav though..😭 Don't tell me he can never play Tennis now...😭 How did it happen to Arnav? Was it an accident? Is his Dad alive? Ugghhh so many questions.

I hope Khushi comes and fills his life with asli Khushi...😊 I cannot see him so distraught. *pout*

Update soon okay? Meri tareh mahino baad mat karna..😆

Edited by deepti1906 - 12 years ago