swaron ss Fall in love - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
thanku sooo... much. i wud very much lik to hug u all for ur coments i wantd to to hug u all bt i cant evn lik dem as i am comentin frm fone.. wil try to snd pms..
if want to share criticisms or nythin u wud lik to change or includ plese pm me i wud lik it very much.,


chaptr 6

inside d house...
sharon had gone to d washroom swaym nd rey wer alon in d sofa... swayam cudnt hide d goofy smile nd rey obviuosly noticd it.
rey- som1 is smilin a lot today...kya baat hey?
sw-arey rey kuch nahi.. yar wat smiling
rey-dude dont even try to lie to me.. its abt sharon rit?
sw-hw did u knw?.
rey-tumhara best friend toh he.. batao kya hua?
swayam narrated how she slept on his shoulder and hw he had given her lift...
sw- ab samcha sirf lift hi toh he... i dnt knw if she had noticed me
rey- luk swayam its sharon she doesnt take lift from anybody like dat.. if she hadnt trusted you or felt somethin different for you she wudnt hav taken your lift hw late it is..
sw-really? yay...
at dis moment sharon came in
sh- wats d matter. y r u all shouting..
swayam was already lookin at sharon no actually he was lost in her...
rey looked at swayam and felt he must do somethin..
rey-woh sharon swayam has to go nw he got a call.
he said shaking swayam..
sw-i hav to?
rey-ofcourse tum hi toh keh reh he the na..
sw -ya really.. hmm... bye rey.. (softly) bye sharon..
sh- bye swayam(bit softly)
swayam left and rey closed d door.. sharon was still in trance staring at where swayam went..
rey- so?
sh-so?..
rey-(imitatin a dreamy girly voice) bye swayam..
sh- wat rey?..
rey-dats wat i am askin.. wat sharon..
sh- oh please rey mein aur uss nobod...swayam... no chance..
rey smiled at sharon stoped half at nobody and took his name. there was defenitly somethin sharon never had problem with callin anyone nobody..
rey thot it was too early to ask her as she wudnt tell about it nw.. so he decided to leave it at dat..
sh- well rey wat was d importand matter?
rey-well ...(suddenly a smiled spread on his face)
sharon cudnt believe rey d hunk of d college was actually blushing...
sh- well?..


Edited by aneed3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Lovely update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
rey sharon best friend would not tell truth to her...
swayan actually like or love sharon...
i think rey to has fall in love ...
continue soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
hey awsome update..
loved swayam and sharon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is very nice story.
Sweet and simple.
Love to see Swayam and Sharon like this.
Hope they will soon realize their love for each other.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
that was so short :(
anyway loved it..
swayam was so lost hehe as always..
sharon hestiate to call swayam nobody..
now that was something..
update soon..
thanks for da pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
superb update...

nobody nhai bola ...

pm me when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
amazing update

loved it

wow 👏👏

rey sharon best friend will not tell truth to her... 😃

thanks for the pm

update soon

and do pm me

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Posted: 12 years ago
#59

nyce 😊

rey ne bhi pakad hi liya aakhir inki feelings ko 😛

hehe... "I have to??" 😆

yes swayam 😛

itna chota sa update kyun?? 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
#60

so.. here is d next part.. hit likes nd comment..

i wud appreciate if wud comment more..


ders not much swaron i dis chapter but d story needs it.. nd der will b more in next chapters...

Chapter 7

Rey-I am goin to tell kriya dat I luv her tomorrow..

Rey screamed..

Sh- wow.. dats great'

Rey- I knw but Sharon ineed ur help. I dnt knw wat to say.. how to say nd all.. wat if she doesn't luv me .. I don't knw wat to do ..am a mess..

Sh- dat u are..

Rey 'oh my god..

Rey sat down wid his head on his hands. Sharon sat near him and gave him a hug..

Sh-luk rey just be yourself.. just tell her wat u feel from ur heart .. nd u will be all right..

Rey-wat if she doesn't agree.. wat if its too soon..

Sh-if u wud hav askd a blind person abt it he wud hav hesitated.. com on rey its kriya.. have u guys not noticed how u two look at each other.its obvious dat she loves you. Its not too soon. She will be expecting you to ask her now. Just plan it well make her feel special..nd in d right moment tell her hw much u love her..dats it..

Rey- I hate it wen u put everythin dis way. It makes it sound so easy..

Sh- dnt worry idiot am der to help u..

Rey-pulled Sharon into bear hug nd said thanks Sharon' nd he suddenly left her ..

Rey ' now I hav to plan everythin..ideas.. ideas..

And he sat on d sofa thinkin very hard..

Sh-I hav heard dat love makes people act weird.. I dint knw it was dis weird..

Rey was thinkin for a long time.finally he said.

Rey-I knw wat to do.. nd hw I will tell her.. but how wil I get some alone time wid her. All d dance fest preps r goin on. D gang will b der evry time..

Sh- I can help u der.. see everyone will hav a lot of work to do tomrw.. by noon all will b dead tired.. and will leave early.. you can ask her to stay behind for ur couple dance practice.. while u practice wid her I will make all d arrangements..

Rey- u r a life savior'

Sh- ok.. now if ur big talks r over can I go sleep nw..

Rey- ok gud n8'

Sh- gud n8 bye..

Next morning'.

Rey was excited .. well very excited ' d gang noticed something different about him and was talkin about it. Sharon heard about it and said it is nothing he is just excited about d dance fest and all.. der was 2 people who dint buy it .it was swayam nd kriya of course..

In d locker room rey was busy deciding wat to say to her wen swayam came der..

Sw- wats d matter yaar?

Rey- hey swayam.. u knw wat am goin to tell kriya dat I love her today..

Sw- wow man ' wen? How?

Rey narrated d whole plan to swayam'

Sw-but dude do u think Sharon will b able to complete all d arrangements nd decoration by d time u practice..

Rey-hm.. so u r not worried abt me nd kriya.. u r worried abt Sharon haan?

Sw-arrey look kriya cant stay much late her mom wont allow'

Rey- I hav an idea y don't u help her. U knw abt kriyas likes nd u will also get to spend time wid Sharon..

Sw- dats gud.. (smiling)

Rey- arrey yaar save ur smile for her.. and tell me do I look ok.? How shud I tell her..?...

The entire day Sharon kept d gang so busy dat by noon dey finished most of d work..dey wer all dead tired nd wer sitting in d canteen..

Vick-arrey yaar mein toh dakh gaya hun.. ki mujhe khanee ka bhi mann nahi he sirf sonna chatha hun..

Everyone- true I cant do anything more'

Rey- ok guys lets call it a day nd u guys.. go home'

Neha- thank go.. kriya hum ghar chalet hey..

Rey- who kriya can u stay back' we hav to practice our couple dance..

Kriya ' ya right.. neha tum jaoo..

Neha- par hum toh sadh aye dhe na.. its ok ..mein wait karungi..

Rey now dint knw wat to do. He was looking at swayam and Sharon for help..

Sh-its not needed neha.. c am also stayin so I will drop her home..

Simmi- Sharon y r u stayin.. if u want to do more work den do it tomorrow .. u hav done a lot for today..

Kriya- haan Sharon tum hum sab se syadha kaam kiya he. I think u need to rest..

Sh- who essa nahi he' I mean.. who..

Sw-its dat ki we hav to practice our dance too.. rit Sharon?

Sh- han haan of course.. we hav to practice.. dats y..

Now d gang bid bye and left. Now Sharon ,rey and swayam let out der breath of relief..


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Edited by aneed3 - 12 years ago

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