swaron ss Fall in love - Page 4

Originally posted by: spongy

the whole update contains both the chapter

in b/w it is written chapter 4

i don think ki kissi ko woh dikha..

Originally posted by: aneed3

guys thank you for your support for my os...

am back wid another swaron work...

Dis time its an ss...

dis will hav sharey.. bcoz i love der friendship...

FALL IN LOVE

Two friends are determined to help der best friends to realise der love...

little did they know wat destiny had in store for dem...

Will dey fall in love???? Or Fall apart????????

INDEX

chapter 1 - pg 1

chapter 2-pg 1

chapter 3 -pg 3

chapter 4- pg 4

The plot is...

Sharon ,Rey and rest of the dazzlers are in st Louie.. Rey is d GS. Sharon the CS... Sharon gets selected for trainin in a prestigious dance academy for 6 months. Though she is sad to leave rey and others... she goes for it..this is the time wen Kriya Ghai enters.. not only her rest of weaklings are also new.. all the dazzlers vs weaklings fight takes place.. and finally dey are all friends nw.. Sharon being in contact with d dazzlers knws about everythin.. Our rey is now feeling great love for Kriya..and kriya to him.. this is d situation as our divaplans to enter the college..

Chapter -1

Rey was very excited and nevous today.. Excited bcoz his bestie frm childhood... Sharon was comin 2mrw.he so wanted to talk about kriya to her...But wat if she doesn't like her. No ofcorse not Sharon never hated anyone before meeting dem..though she supported the dazzler weakling fight ,she did that for her friends.. she even appreciated der dance now wen he sent her d videos.

It was evening and he was thinkin of how to tell her tomrow..

Sudenly d door was thrown open

"SURPRISE"!!!

Rey was starin at her open mouthed den without wastin a moment he pulled her in to a bear hug... Eventhough they called and video chatted evry day.. he had missed her... missed her like hell... she was his bestie, sister everythin..

Sharon had also missed her best friend who was more like a brother to her.. she had nevr been away from him so long...

Finally rey pulled back and said

Rey- u wer supposd to come tomorw?

Sh-yes But i thott my best friend could use some surprise...

Rey-surprise yeh toh shock da... mein ne socha ki last day of independence celebrate kare..

Sh- oh.. really..

Rey-Yes Sharon .

he faked a serious look and Sharon started chasin him. After a whole tom and jerry scene.. dey both fell back on d couch laughing hard ..

"i missed this " they both said together and started laughin again..

Sh- so as am finally here would take care to tell wat ws dat u wantd to tell me but couldn't and wouldn't tell me unless i came back...

She asked in full diva mode..

Rey- woh.. woh Sharon i think.. no am sure k ii love kriya.. i haven't told her yet.. i really don't knw wat to do...

Sh-wat d hell rey!... u r in love wid dat weakling.. how can u? Wat r u thinkin ? u dint think about our team or me?

Rey luked at horrified..

Rey- Sharon but...

Seein rey in dis condition Sharon burst out laughin.. and rey was... well..even dumbstruck.. wouldn't explain his expression.. this only made Sharon to laugh more loudly...

Sh- was i supposd to eact like dat?.. oh pls rey kab se janti hu tujhe.. u think i wnt notice that u dazed out takin her name even while talkin to me.. and d smile on your face... i knew it idiot..

Rey-sharon u scard me ...

Sh-i shud hav recorded dat... ur face was so.. funny...

Sh- anyways i am thankfull to kriya ki ab mujhe tumhe kam time jhelna padega...

Rey-wat r u sayin Sharon? Jab tak tumhe kisi hadh me nehi diya tab tak how will i rest. Findin your Mr perfect is my lifes aim..

He said wid a mock seriousness.

Sh-whu r u kiddin rey? Even aftr dat u will still trouble me as always...

Rey-(flashin his million dollar smile) actually u r rit...

And dey wer both laughin again...

Sh- woh rey mujhe bhi tumhe kuch kehna hey mr perfct ki bare mein...and she luked down.

This was enough to make rey serious.. he wud always suport her decision bt he was concerned

Sh-wen i ws at NY i met...

Rey 'yes Sharon..

Sh-No one.hehe...

Rey-sharon!...

Sh 'u knw rey u wer lukin at me as if u wer ma father...

Rey-very...funny

Sh-rey we wil go to college tmrw na... show me our new friends and kriya... aur gang ko mat batana we will giv dem a surprise..

Rey-aye aye captain...

Originally posted by: aneed3

guys here in this chapter der is not much swaron... but will be der in comin ones ..promise...

diva ko majnu ko notice karne mein time toh legega na...

Chapter -2

Next morning in the canteen ..

Everyone except rey and Sharon was present.

Simmi- Sharon is comin today rit?..

Vicky-haan yaar i hope she comes soon .. mujhe apni dewani se milwana he...

Nil-stop it Vicky... it will b soo much fun with her around..

Kriya- I want to meet Sharon too bahut suna he uske bare.. mein

Neha- neha also agreein..

And rey enterd wid Sharon .. dey went near dem and said surprise..

All d dazzlers wer makin so much noise.. simmi and rinni engulfed her in a big hug.

Simmi-sharon u wer supposed to come by todays flight na?

Sh-actually i came yesterday evening wanted to surprise u all.

Rinni- toh y dint u come yestrday evenin itself.

Sh-rey ke pass dha guys..

Vicky- Sharon came early and dint meet us..

Nil-she met only rey...

Vicky nd Nil- Sharon doesn't love us...(guys imagine the rey doesn't luv us scene befor dazzlers wer reinstatd in footloose)

Sh-idiots... kabhi nahi badalega...

Nd pulled them into a hug..

Here weakling and especially swayam was watchin dis...

She was lukin so beautiful.. he had felt dat wen rey showed him her nd is dances..and wenevr rey talked about her he wantd to meet her... he loved the way she was wd her friends and her attitude towards others...

Now kriya shook swayam nd asked

Kr-kya hua? Cant blive u wer starin at a gal... not starin lost in her...

Sw-stop it kriya..

Rey-(to weaklings) yeh he humari Sharon... aur yeh he..

Sh- i knw rey... d weaklings ...

And she pointed evryones names to dem. Swayam felt it very gud to hear his name from her.. it sounded gud...

Kr-nice to meet u Sharon .hav heard a lot about u .par how do you knw our names..

Sh-of course iss college ka CS hu.. hw wudnt i knw abt dis..

Rey-ofcourse aur mein humari sab fotos send bhi nehi kiya dha...

Sh-rey !

And startd chasin him... dazzlers-oh we missd dis...

Neha-aww dey r so cute...

Amar-haan dono ki friendship toh gr8 hein..

Bharat-donom kafi close lag raha he... friends hi he?

Vick-arey esa kuch nahi guys... dey wer best friends from childhood... dey r more like bro-sis. Rey is very protective of her.. nd Sharon teases him by callin him her father..

Sw-bohot cute hein..

All-wat?

Sw-woh wahi.. dono ki yeh fight...

Kr-haan guys aur kya ho sakta hein..(winkin at swayam)

Peon- RDX Sharon rey swayam aur kriya ko bula raha hein..

In RDX cabin

All- sir aap ne bulaya?

Rdx- haan kuch imprtand baat he.. aur Sharon gud to see you back...

Sharon ' thank you sir..

Rdx- so rey as u r the GS . u will b needin an asst. So new AGS is Kriya...

Rey felt like on cloud nine... swayam was also reys kinda best friend so he was happy for rey..but he was surprised to see Sharon punchin rey and winkin at him... toh rey told her ..she seems fine wid it i wonder y rey was tensed about it.

Rdx-aur Sharon u wanted an asst. Too so swayam will b d ACS.. he was d one hu assisted rey in cultural activities durin your absence..

Sh knew abt swayam as reys good friend.. so she gave him a smile.

But hamare swayam toh earth mein bhi nahi the.. kriya whispered to him. Tum toh lucky he yar..

Rey noticd something wrong der... but sharn dint pay much attention...

Rdx- guys most importantly we will b organisin a dance feast in nxt month so. U'l hav to finalise the events performances... etc

All- ok sir..

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Chapter -5

Rey- Sharon kahan he? Tum na jaldi mere ghar pe avo.. its importand… I hav to talk to u about something..

Sh- wat rey .. is everything ok?

Rey-yes..yes.. nothing like dat I just hav to talk to you..

Sh- ok I will come just let me get home..

Rey- u r not yet home?

Sh- wo had to do some work..

Rey- den tell simmi to drop u at my place..

Sh-nahi yaar I will come aftr I reach home..

Rey-wats wrong yaar ..jst tell her to drop u at ma place…

Sh- well am not wid simmi.. i..i..i am wid swayam.. he is dropin me home..

Rey-(thinkin) sharon stutter kar raha he.. who bhi swayam ki bhare mein… kuch toh hua he.. I will leave it nw she will feel embarrasd if I ask her infrnt of him..

Rey- its ok Sharon jst tell him to drop u here..

Sh-no rey I told u na..

Rey- u r comin here.u want me to talk to him?

Sh-no ..fine ..idiot. bye

Swayam was happy to see a slight blush creepin on her cheeks…

Sh- hey drop me at reys place.. its on d way..

Swayam felt bad he wud be getting less time wid her.. and dint she want him to be wid her.. did he make her feel uncomfortable or something..

Sw- its ok sharon am fine wid dropin u at home…

Sharon noticed d change in his expression he looked a bit sad… den she got it may be he felt she was uncomfortable wid him..

Sh- no rey wanted to talk about something…dat idiot..

Sw was relievd hearing dis .

Sharon noticed his expression turnin from sad to relief and back to his normal cheerfulness

Sh-(thinkin) why was he sad.. ofcourse wen dey dnt get to drop sahron raiprakash home dey will b sad..

But y d hell did I feel bad at his sad face.. y did I want to clear everythin wid him…

While sharon was lost in thoughts dey had reached reys house..

Sw- Sharon we hav reached..

Sh- oh yes…

Nd she got out

Sh- aren't u comin?

Sw-no its ok… I will just go..

Now rey had come at d door..

Rey-hey come in dude..

Sh- yes come on..

Swayam had no other option but to come in.. ofcourse he was happy wid it.. he got more time to spend wid his Sharon..

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