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Posted: 12 years ago
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here is d next update.. read it fast nd tell me hw is it?..

Chap-8

Kriya- kya he?

Rey,sh,sw-kuch nahi...

Three of dem luked at each other . kriya noticed all of dis .

Kr- kya hey guys .. u three r actin so wierd..

Re- woh...hum teenom friends.. hey aur wierd hey... toh act bhi wierd jaisa hoga...

Kriya luked at rey as if he had lost his mind which was indeed kinda true.

Sharn stampd reys foot . and rey stopd talkin...

Sh-kriya luk its nothing. Reys just tryin to b funny.. sumtimes he is lik dat .idiot..

Now it was reys turn to stamp Sharons foot..

Sh- ouch..

Kr-ab tumhe kya hua..?

Sh- its nothing.. just a little... never mind..

Now kriya luked at swayam for some explanations to all of dis..

Sw cudnt find nythin to say..

Sw- guys lets not waste time nd just practice..

Sh.rey-haan lets practice..

Swayam nd Sharon had decided to decorate a classroom .so dey left kriya nd rey to practice sayin about some files..

In d classroom,

Sharon nd swayam enterd wid a lot of boxes filled wid balloons candles roses nd everythin..

Sharon was on d ladder wen she lost her balnce nd was about to fall wen swayam caught her.

Sharon staill had her eyes closed . swayam was adoring her. Swayam thot Sharon pretended to be strong nd independent to everyone.. but her innocence nd vulnerability was visible to him.. may be it was only to him he wished. He dint want anyone else to see dis side of Sharon.

Swayam called Sharon softly showing all his love to her.

Sharon nw came to her senses she opened her .she quickly moved away from him.

Sharon was thinkin if she had imagined something in his eyes... wen he called her name she felt so good as if she was d most loved person...

Sh(thinkin)-love wat am i thinkin.. his voice is always soft...oh.. wateva concentrate Sharon...

Now all d decor was complete.. d room luked heavenly and romantic wid candle lights ,roses and evrythin..

In d rehersal hall after d dance kriya was about to go...

Rey called Sharon nd said he ws bringing along kriya nw. Sharon said ok..

Sharon and swayam were lukin at d room looking if anything had to be added.. den dey went out to d corridor.nw dey heard reys nd kriyas voice comin in der direction.

Sh- oh shit .. wat do we do nw.

Dey spotted a store room near by and rushed in to it. Now dey wer pressing der ears to d wall. Both tried very hard to listen but in dis attempt dey had come very close to each other foreheads almost touchin. Now dey noticed dis closeness nd Sharon felt ackward but not very uncomfortabl.. it was as if deep down she felt good to be near him.. swayam sensing her ackwardness moved a bit backward. Nothing much cud be heard from d wall but dey dint want to leave before rey nd kriya so dat dey cud knw hw it went. So dey tried to settle in d room.. suddenly Sharon felt something movin near her legs.. she screamed nd thre herself on swayam. Swayam felt good but was startled. He askd Sharon wat happened. She was nearly crushing him nd blaberin something.swayam patted her hair nd said luk its ok Sharon calm down .am here . i promise i wont let anything to hurt you..

After some time Sharon calm down..

Sh- der is something there.. and pointed to d place she was standin earlier lik a small kid..

Swayam luked der clearly he went near it nd kneeled down.

Sw-sharon its just rope . nd he picked it up..

Sharon now turned away embarrassed. Swayam was thinkin yeh siren toh bilkul bacha jaisa he.

Now dey heard rey nd kriya openin der door.dey peered trough d window.. dey saw dem walkin hand in hand.dey waited til dey wer out of sight..

Sh-oh dey r together ..how cute..

Sw- true..

Dey heard kriya nd rey riding off..

Sw-its late .. i think we shud go. I will drop u..

Sh- no. My car is hear...

Sw-ok u go in ur car. I will follow u in mine till ur house.

Sh-y?

Sw- its late its not safe..nd dnt argue just do as i say ok..

Sh- ok..

Swayam followed Sharon and drove back as he saw she was safely home.

Sharon was thinkin yeh swayam bhi ... but bahut caring he...

meanwhile swayam was thinkin how gud it was to hav sharon in his arms. rey nd kriya had become a couple.. wen cud he propose sharon...


Edited by aneed3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
A beautiful update.. but chota tha..!! LOVED the way u hav potrayed everyone..!!! the story is awesum..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
loved the update
it was beautiful
amazing
but chotu tha
never mind
mujhe vaise bhi study kare jana hain 😉
everyone was portrayed really well...
it is amazing
thanks for the PM
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
hey
both the parts were supercute...
so finally kriyansh together...
waiting for swaaron...
awsome updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Awesome update
Swaron part was really cute.
Finally rey n kria r a couple
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
thank you guys... i realyy appreciate ki u all are givin long long coment... luv u all..

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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
serious a kriyaansh became a couple thanks to swaron afford it worked...
i hope they to also became a couple soon... continue soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
amazing updated
both chp 6 n 7 are amazing
i am loving this
a very simple but an awsome storyline
finally rey to confess
thanx for d pm
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
Hey Awesum update...Loved it 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
Awesome update 😊

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