SwaRon OS- 'Dreams- A Way To Better Reality'

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Lubna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Great OS!!!!!

I didn't get time to read all the contest OSs but I did read yours and I luved it!!!

its an absolute pleasure to read it the second time around!!

Luved the Swaron confession!!!

The kiss was the best part!!!!

Lovely work and definitely interesting to read!!

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Wantubak

@Wantubak

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Finaly Done

Awosm 😆😆😆😆

poor sharon yaar 😆😆

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Sneha_Shantannu

@Sneha_Shantannu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

awesum OS...
Beautifully written :)

Love u,
Sammy.

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

loved it.. poor sharon was very afraid abt d dream n rushed to swayam's home.. loved d way she narrated d dream n d amused expression of swayam.. d confession was cute n sweet... loved d choco cake time n d way she ate it.. swayam on naughty side didnt leave d chance to romance.. our majnu ll always b majnu... loved it..

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Hey Swthrt
🤗🤗🤗
I loved the OS...it was a perfect combination of love...pain..emotions...romance...amazingly written...

Loved the way sharon was dreaming about them & the separation part was heart breaking...

He was walking towards the door'Sharon held his hand'.

"Swa'yam.."

Swayam removed her hand from his'in a force'and walked away'.

"No..Swayam..please..no." She pleaded'.

"S-w-a-y-a-m" She called his name in a screamy voice'.

Loved the way u proceeded the story ...sharon went to his house n confessed awww...it was beautifully done baby...😳

LOVED THIS CONVERSATION...the lines were so swaronish😳😊
"And'Swayam'now..as we are in a trail relation'I don't want it any more'" She said in serious tone'

Sharon's tears flowed down her eyes'.Swayam's eyes were also teary when he heard this Statement'

[Swaym is not facing him'Sharon is some distance away'behind.]

"Sharon..I'll not force you'but.." Swayam said'

Tears in his eyes..rolled down..

"Swa.yam..do you'still'LOVE me'??" Sharon asked and came some closer to him'

Awww..u made me remeber the GOLDEN moments..trail confession...hug...awww..head touching...crying swaron in each others embrace ..aha😊😳

"Sharon..I..Still'.but why did you come here', hugged me'expressed.." He asked..in disappointment..

"Because..now'I have realized that..that this..Trail Relation-ship is NOT MEANT to be'..but ! WE are MEANT to be'FOREVER..As a Perfect Couple'named SwaRon'!!!" She said..smiling..unnoticed by Him..

As soon as he heard these lines'he turned back'

"You and I..forever.." Shocked Swayam asked'

A sweet smile crept on her lips'.she smiled in tears..

Swayam came towards her'.he held her with her shoulders'their heads touching.. [Hope u all imagine this'same as D3]

"Yes'Swayam'I..Love You.." She said , blushing'

He pulled her in a bone crashing hug.. [Imagine our TanHa's Last hug.] Which was never ending'.but ever lasting'

"I love you , Shar'" Said while hugging'"Sharon..I..Still'.but why did you come here', hugged me'expressed.." He asked..in disappointment..

"Because..now'I have realized that..that this..Trail Relation-ship is NOT MEANT to be'..but ! WE are MEANT to be'FOREVER..As a Perfect Couple'named SwaRon'!!!" She said..smiling..unnoticed by Him..

As soon as he heard these lines'he turned back'

"You and I..forever.." Shocked Swayam asked'

The post confession sequence was cute and nicely done..the cake part was cute & the first kiss..ADORABLE...

AMAZING OS swthrt👏👏👏👏

Keep writing..

Luv
Ur Di