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Sorry again! (It's becoming a trend isn't it?)
This is a mini unres:
Deer with every update u have me going how the faraq can this possibly get better? It does. I just read it all. And it still hasn't sunk in. J the ease with which you carry forward relationships..add in a VERY important dimension the physical attraction, is just well you! And after reading like a bajillion stories by you I still haven't been able to understand how you do it! Especially in this one, with the help of the sun and moon..beautiful poetry. This chapter was as usual all encompassing..I am left with a multitude of thoughts and PHEELZ!!! This must be a hard story to right to rationalise the hate as u do, while moving on with the current scenario and not making Arnav sound like the most complete douchebag. And even more importantly to justify these pheelingz they have for each other..and taking them on this path of love, when nafrat is the base of it...i finally get what u meant. You are doing such a phenomenal job J! Thank you for taking this up bas! I promise I won't harass you while you are writing now haha, as keep offering you badam milk and whatever else that helps (no gutterz please).
I love how while one is trying hard to remember the past the other is trying (probably not as hard) to forget it..and the aftermath of all that is this chapter to me.
There are a million other things I haven't touched on so will be back. And with regards to the cliffhanger, his condition is probably he wants her to come..but why would he..doesn't hate mean he wants to stay away from her? And he doesn't know she is trying equally hard to stay away from him, so he can't be using physical proximity as a way to torture/make her suffer because it would be more torturous for him too? Or am I missing something...probably. Will go back read and comment properly.
Thanks J for staying up late last night and giving us insatiable phankis an update.
This is a mini unres:
Deer with every update u have me going how the faraq can this possibly get better? It does. I just read it all. And it still hasn't sunk in. J the ease with which you carry forward relationships..add in a VERY important dimension the physical attraction, is just well you! And after reading like a bajillion stories by you I still haven't been able to understand how you do it! Especially in this one, with the help of the sun and moon..beautiful poetry. This chapter was as usual all encompassing..I am left with a multitude of thoughts and PHEELZ!!! This must be a hard story to right to rationalise the hate as u do, while moving on with the current scenario and not making Arnav sound like the most complete douchebag. And even more importantly to justify these pheelingz they have for each other..and taking them on this path of love, when nafrat is the base of it...i finally get what u meant. You are doing such a phenomenal job J! Thank you for taking this up bas! I promise I won't harass you while you are writing now haha, as keep offering you badam milk and whatever else that helps (no gutterz please).
I love how while one is trying hard to remember the past the other is trying (probably not as hard) to forget it..and the aftermath of all that is this chapter to me.
There are a million other things I haven't touched on so will be back. And with regards to the cliffhanger, his condition is probably he wants her to come..but why would he..doesn't hate mean he wants to stay away from her? And he doesn't know she is trying equally hard to stay away from him, so he can't be using physical proximity as a way to torture/make her suffer because it would be more torturous for him too? Or am I missing something...probably. Will go back read and comment properly.
Thanks J for staying up late last night and giving us insatiable phankis an update.
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