I wish the baby is Jai's

I know people will very strongly disagree with me that Jai is the father of pias baby, but i think if they take this decision it will be much better for the storyline to progress into a non typical indian serial.

Nearly everyone complains about how the stories are rehashed from other serials, yet if the baby is his their wont be no magic that the baby is pushkars which is kinda boring and not real it'll just end like whats the point creating all these great characters and stories if we can just use the magic cure.

For me what'll be more interesting is how can their love progress with a child that is someone elses, how can she trust and forgive him knowing that the child is always going to be there it'll need a great build up like we already have had between them.

Anyways I kinda made a little fanfic for the end of 5th jan vid where jai is at the beach

JAI: Why must I always be alone, why god why, happiness never comes for me why (sobbing on the sand)
(Someone waliks up and and places a blanket on him)

JAI: BBani (he turns around and sees Pia, immediately gets up and raises his hands around Pias neck in strangle mode) I'll end this now all my pain all my suffering with my hands first you and then myself

PIA: Go ahead Mr Walia end all this pain and suffering end three lives you said that you'd rather lose everything than your child and its happened no ones here for you except me were all alone.

JAI: Shut up pia i hate your very existence (Jai goe sto sit down on the bench near the beach Pia joins him they both watch the sea waves roll in )

PIA: Mr Walia i know that you hate me but I still love you I havent left you

JAI: Why Pia why

PIA: I dont know, life is just.....
(Jai starts sobbing reminiscing about his memories, he feels cold alone uncontrollably he falls into Pia lap looking for some warmth some love)

JAI: because of this child my life has turned into nothing (looking at pias womb) why must we suffer for our desires, I only wanted a child so i could show my father that i could i become a great dad I would give them all the love i never recieved in my life from him
You know Pia when you three sisters came into my life I was totally alone I had everything but nothing could complete this hole in me, and i got used to it it was normal for i never wanted more nor less it was my aadat, but then you showed my NO JAI you can have more you can feel, you can love but that didnt last and the hole inside only became bigger except it kept hurting me taunting me making look like a fool thats why i had destroy you and pushkar.
Strange though that the hole wasnt completed by me it was by your sister Bani she somehow without me know ing had filled it up and never wanted anything in return. Before when i used to wake i only used to think about how i would survive that day what would i do that day, but with your sister i finally started thinking about my future what would i do how would i make your sister happy i could finally live i peace
Yet thats all gone now by these hands of mine strange using these hands i have created many companies many jobs in which people would live happily with their families yet these very hands of mine never left me a happy family its my CURSE
(pia starts caressing mr walias head like a mother would to a small child who is hurt)

PIA: Mr Walia we are cursed people, seeing all this has made me realise that neither of us are for this world all we seem to do is bring the people around us misery and pain , i only wished for happiness for my sisters yet my own happiness killed them (pia is crying)
Do you remeber mr walia what you told me in dubai, that love is a joke its false, u maybe right about that but loniless is not a joke its not false when we are alone it kills us, that day i told you i would love you and never leave you, together we could share our loniless to make us complete, i will still complete that promise not for you alone but for our child
Mr Walia we have a child coming it needs a father it needs the man i fell in love with someone who will protect and give it the love it deserves
We have to make sure that this child doesnt receive any of our misteakes any of our past, it mustnt i wont let it be cursed
Thorugh our hands life has created a new pathway for us the the only choice we can make is that will we walk down it alone or together?

wow hmm abit thrown off by this i wrote it up in abt 10mins didnt really concentrate on fine tuning it for more, give me some more time i may continue it if i think i'm able of producing any more goddness much help or encouragement would be helpful i love thinking up crazy ideas but not used to writing them down

its really good, you should consider continuing it.

-Rimpy

oh dude awesome start!
do continue soon!

hey i thought about and well it started plz go through have made some minor changes to part 1 heres the link its called loniless(hope no one hasnt named a ff the same havent checked)

link for loniless

I think it is depressing but that is the way real life is the adulterer wins at the end of the day and the cheated left to die. Jai and Pia can be happy with their child and create a parampara of cheating spouses my grandfather was an adulterer, my father and mother are adulterers so it runs in the family and me and my siblings too.
Oh god have mercy on the walia khandaan. be prepared to be cheated on cause infidelity runs in their blood.