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OMG12399

@OMG12399

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: ritukaprithvi
Well written
If I am not wrong "Zara is Asad 's daughter " isn't she ? That is why all that secrecy. Please continue.

Ahahaha, that would be a nice twist.😉

But sadly, no she's not. She's Zoya and Rehan's daughter.😕

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OMG12399

@OMG12399

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: misha93
Well written. Its good to read something in the future. Though I ALMOST want to throw a tomato at you for making my asad's dil hurt. But I won't 😉 kyonki usne bhi zoya ka dil dukhaya hai

NAHII! NO TOMATOES😲

I felt bad too about making asad's dil hurt😒. But what to do? Zoya had to get on with her life.

Thankk youuu soo much ;D.

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Nai

@zoas91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

this was a sad but a beautiful os! do continue with your writings would love to read more of these :) good luck :D

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princee

@princeegoyal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

welcome to the forum...& ya...thts sound good...pls continue & pm me...

pls make sure u unite our asya..becoz i m not tht one who cn handle sad ends..pls

pari

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aish-au

@aish-au

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

loved it and can u pm me 4 next update

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Tv_wale_babu

@Tv_wale_babu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Well written! I totally enjoyed it, but felt bad for asad... he was stuck in time :(

You should write more, either continue with this or write something else. Would love to read more of your works :)

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