An Untitled Story That you must read. :) - Page 2

catchy title lol
got me curious I had to open the thread and I don't regret it!
you write well, write more!! 😊

beautifully written please do pm me when u update!

So nicely written

Well written

Wow u wrote so well in ur first attempt..continuee

Well written. Its good to read something in the future. Though I ALMOST want to throw a tomato at you for making my asad's dil hurt. But I won't 😉 kyonki usne bhi zoya ka dil dukhaya hai

Originally posted by: asyaforlife

Aww... this is beautiful yet heart-wrenching. Poor Asad was trapped in the maya jhaal of Tanveer.

Zoya has a family. She has moved on in her life. That's nice.

Wanting to know what happens next.

P.S. Can you PM me your updates whenever you do??

P.S.S. I loved your writing.

Love,

Diya

Originally posted by: OMG12399

Hello Diya. 😃

I wasnt planning to have a second part to this, but considering I got some nice ideas and awesome comments, I guess I shall. 😊 I'm glad to know that you will be continuing this OS😳😳 Looking forward to read more.😃

Yeah, I always think Zoyas the kinda gal who'd move on if she had too. I don't think she'd sit around moping for too long. :) I wanted to see that too. Why should a girl mourn when the person she loves behaves like a jerk. She should move on with life. I liked that you portrayed Zoya's character to be strong and not like those typical rone-dhone wali bahu/GF. Our Zoya is different. She is unique and so is Asad.

Your comments are really sweet. :D Thank you soo much. :) Your welcome dear😳🤗

My comment in red😳😳