Swaron poem:ADAM AND EVE

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys...its me again😛 this time with a poem on our beloved swaron...its my first ever attempt on writing a poem,its just a lame attempt and i posted it coz i wanted to know how lame it is😳so here it goes...

ADAM AND EVE...


Its been a very long wait..

For I had to fight with the fate.

It was love at first sight to me,

U made the world bright to me.

When I saw u,I knew u were mine…

Since then I was on cloud nine.

I expressed my affection

All I got was rejection , it only led me to depression.

I wished to be ur adam

But I could express seldom that I didn't want ur tantrum,

I decided to return ur freedom, but then u opened the album

It was destiny's special kiss

Ur touch was a pure bliss

Ur love was my last wish

Now that I have u, its coz I deserve u..

With all my rights I reserve u..and I promise to preserve u..

Till the day I live, coz I love u my eve.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely poem
You are an awesome writer
SanskritiS thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautifully penned 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is really a beautiful poem!!!
and you used the perfect metaphor for it!!
and the rhyming added to the beauty of the poem!!
Amazing JOB!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow this was such a beautiful poem. Can't believe it is your first attempt at writing one!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful poem...luvd it ..

grt job...👍🏼.

Edited by 123renudrlng - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing poem
loved it 👍🏼

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