asya os : today is her birthday

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey freinds this my first hand at writing , i am novice so bare with me ya do leave ur comments

oh so today she turned 25 allah , why she
is so beautiful ? so bublly , charming and
so naive. she always arise unknown emotion
within me . and the biggest why she is my neighbour ? even if i try to avoid her i am
obliged to see her stunning face and jaw drooping figure? ...

yes, we are 'pals' as she brambles . but i dont
know why i wanted to take our relation from
freind to a step further . i wanted to tell
her that i want to make her mine

i can see her dancing and drzling with her freinds as today is her birthday . she is just perfect but probably not for me . she
is indifferent of me and more ever i dont think she like reserved guy like me . she could be with any of her freind the one who is cool , flirty , boisterous unlike me

i rubbed my thought and gazed towards the star , i admired how the star united and
make magnificent constellation , i wished me and her could make a small family like this

suddenly i felt a light dripple on my shoulder of course it was her . she looked
a little confused.

zoe : hey why are u here? dont u enjoy
the party ?
asad : no nothing like that , i was felling a litlle suffocated that 's why

z : oh , sorry if you are not cormfortable
here . i tried to plan my party so everyone
enjoys but...

a : and u did that
i tried to relive her. there was a moment of silence as i see her gazing at the stars, her gaze reached my face which i resisted . but she took my hand in her which was unusual ...

z : hey i am ur pal u caan share anything with me , i am always here

a ; ya actually ilike a girl but i cant tell her

z : oh so this the matter , hmmm just go and simply tell her

a : i dont think she would like me
z: dont say that ... you are such a good,
young , talented and ya ur hot also
she said giglling
a : but what should i say to her?
i said to get a hint frm her
z : just tell how much u like her
and cant live without her
a: i tell her daily ... i grinned
z: what do u mean?
a: i "m always with her ... i love her
z : i know how u feel . i have the same problem ... but he"ll never like me
a: wait . who do you like?... my heart ached
z : oh , a boy i am also close to him and
probably my house is also at his vincity

she gazed at me to understand what she meant . her eyes filled with tears and love
was inviting me .

a : do you .. i mean ... me ... actually
z; ah asad ! you are incorrigible . yes i love u u stupid moron

and with this her lips was placed upon mine . i was shocked to the hell . But leaving that i also gave in the same passion , desire and love for her as she did . it as just perfect as i wanted

a : so u knw i loved u ?
z : asad u are aborn ocd . even a blind could
fell the intense gaze of urs and understand it . sometime u behave 2 weird
a : yes yes ... i screamed ... i love u zoya it is unimaginable to live without u
my soul is connected to yours and if u leave me my soul would leave my body ...

and then rejoicing the new found love with a more lip crushing kiss and i never wanted to part away , stay like this . but she parted
off and said

z : hey yu stupid ocd ! i love u too .
today allah has given me the best gift
a man like u who would be always by my
side

and i crushed her to a hug and trying to never seprate again

z : hey not that hard mr .jahapana six packs apni kaneez pe rahem khaiye
i smiled and whisperd " crazy girl"
z : maine suna haan
a : sune ke liye hi tha

and then we laughed our heart out and prayed to allah that even in face of sorrow, darkness , adversity he give us
the power to become each other strength
and never part . never ever ,


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RuchaMulay thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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How sweet! You have a nice romantic piece there. There was a feel good effect...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was short and sweeet.

Wnderful. Thanks for the pm, darling. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -ElmoFuj-

That was short and sweeet.


Wnderful. Thanks for the pm, darling. :D


thnx fr it
lDirectionerl thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was so cute! I liked the gullible Asad! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its really sweet and cute!!! thanks 4 the pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg that was so cute!!
Asad is a reserved guy!, cant believe it :p
Im happy that zoya knew he loved her!,
It was beautifully written
And i loved the romantic scene between asyaa!,
You shoudl definatly start writing yr!!!
Awsome ahhh!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow
so romatntis
and lovely
hatss off cute sanya
can u tell me ur name
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ITS CUTE CUTE CUTE...M LOVING THIS ASAD..IT WAS SO SHORT..SHOULD I HATE U FOR THIS...WAIT A MIN...NAAH!! I LOVE IT !!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww this was very sweet😊

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