FF The Betrayal - No intention to complete. - Page 6

nicely done

awesome update yaar

wow part is amazing hope tanveer is not able to harm dilshaad and najma and plzzz unite asya soon plzzz and thanx for pm and plzzz pm me for the next part

superb update...totally luv it...felling so bad for asad n zoya ...wow dilshad n najma finally find out about tanveer pregnancy n dilshad is awesome n hw she ask tanveer to leave is just superb...

wow,, najma turned out to be smarter..

wow, love your writing. I've been reading almost every FF trying to hold on to some positive. your writing clearly shows the emotions they all must be going through. pls continue soon

ugh u shud've been the writer for QH srsly cuz I doubt it will be as good as ur FF wen Dilshad, najma n zo find out abt this tanveer's evil plans 🤢

First, my like button isn't working!!!
Second, I loved it!!!
Yes, Asad n Zoya are sad n depressed but Dilshad knows the truth about Tanveer n she is throwing that Tanveer out!!!

Part 4:

"Tanveer?" just then she walked down the stairs; she had a knife hidden behind her back.

"Are you ready to leave? The driver is waiting for you" Dilshaad and Najma saw her walk down that staircase without her luggage, and they also noticed that one of her arm was tucked away behind her back – as if she was hiding something. They both weren't worried though, the cops were right there, hiding behind the pillar and outside the main door. These two were well protected.

She approached them slowly but steadily, and when she was close enough she said "Khala, main kahin nahi jaaoongi"

"Tanveer, I haven't given you an option" she was stern with her, the crime she had committed was too huge to be soft to her.

Tanveer brought the knife forward and pointed it out to Dilshaad, "you think I'll leave so easily, after doing so much?" Dilshaad and Najma were shocked!

"Tanveer, what is all this?" Tanveer smirked at that question.

"You thought I wouldn't know if you found out about my pregnancy? I'm way smarter than you khala, I've done so much and haven't been caught… and you think you could fool me? Me out of all people?" …still pointing the knife at her.

Dilshaad slyly motioned the policemen to not make a move so that may be they would have a confession of her sins.

"What have you done so far except for being pregnant and trying to frame my son?" Najma stayed quiet but strongly supporting her ammi.

"I have hated Zoya ever since I've come. That gas incident – it wasn't her, it was me. Remember the jashn-e-saughaat – that was me. I wanted to kill her, but she got saved so instead I harmed myself to gain sympathy. Remember the chicken blood? That was me. Remember the chandelier – that was me too. And that poison for humeira – totally me. And that fire incident – me again… her mehendi burns – me again. It has always been me. You people are so dumb that you would never get it. Besides now you know how dangerous I am, so stay out of my path. I won't hesitate to kill you, like I didn't hesitate to kill Zoya. That girl, she has escaped every single time… but that doesn't mean you will – your luck may not be that good! I've framed your son, and guess what – he won't believe you against me anyway. And by any chance you and Najma try to act smart, you know the consequences" The confessions had been done! Her overconfidence had led her here. She thought she was the best, little did she know overconfidence kills.

"Tanveer we'll do as you say, please drop the knife" Dilshaad pleaded so that their attack would be done smoothly. She had been kind enough to let her go like that, but no! Tanveer didn't appreciate the kind behaviour – she was greedy.

As tanveer dropped the knife, the cops came out. "We've heard your confessions and that is enough for you to be in jail for the next 20 years."

"Tanveer, had you chosen to leave with dignity, you wouldn't have landed yourself in this trouble" Finally Najma spoke.

The cops arrested her and put her in jail. She waited there for the court hearing.

x-x-x

"Ammi, we've got Tanveer out of the way but now we have to bring Bhaijaan and Zoya closer. We need to dissolve their misunderstandings. How are we going to do this?"

"I'll call Zeenat and tell her everything. Let Asad wake up, we'll tell him as well. That should take away a huge burden off his shoulders. His guilt would also decrease and his motivation to live will awaken as he starts pursuing Zoya." They smiled weakly at each other

x-x-x

It had been a long day for them. While for Zoya, the day had just started. Rehaan had taken a week off for Zoya and he headed to her place early morning.

"Zoya, look whose here to see you!" Zeenat called but there was no response. She guided to Zoya's room. And there she lying on her bed covered with her duvet, she was looking out her window with bloodshot eyes, heavy eye bags and a tear stained face.

Rehaan looked at her with disbelief, he had known her forever but he had never seen her in such a state. He wanted to reach out to her with all his heart. He whispered to Zeenat and asked her to give them some time alone. She left. He walked up to her bed, and yet she hadn't noticed him. He sat next to her and touched her shoulder.

"Hey gorgeous" he never called her that, but he'd do anything to make her feel better.

She sprang up on her bed. "I'm sorry, I didn't notice you"

"I realized! I've been so invisible all my life"

"No, it's not that. I'm sorry"

"Zoya, don't be. It was a joke." He leaned in to hug her and she hugged him back very tightly, with all her might and she started sobbing. He patted her back and let her cry it all out. They stayed in that position for an hour.

Zeenat brought in some food for them and left them again. "I'm so hungry, I bet you are too… let's eat" he suggested.

"No I'm not hungry"

"Eat now, so that you can cry more when you tell me what happened"

"I don't want to talk about it"

"But you have to! Unless you don't sort out the situation in your head, how are you going to leave it behind and move on?"

"I'm doing fine"

"I see that Zoya! Look, we're besties and I will do everything and anything to get you out of this mess – even if you hate me. And yea, don't underestimate me!" That brought a very tiny smile on her lips, because that's exactly what she had told him when he was going through a rough patch. It was payback time.

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