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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

update😡😡😡😡😡😡

jaldi karo

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Anu

@Angelic.x.Chaos

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Madhukumari
Nice OS. . .
Wel,i dont read any other os than kr. . .bt,i gave it a try. .i likd it. . . .
Wel,mai toh tb bi tere kr ke works ka wait ker rai hu. . . .
Do pm me wen u write any kr work.:-D

Madhu yeh OS nahi hai...

Par thank you... Sorry for the inconvience...

And Kr works ki updates kaal paka...

🤗

😊

~Anu~

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Anu

@Angelic.x.Chaos

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Hey guys I am back with a update...

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~Part 2~

His daadi leaves and soon as she leaves Maan resumes his work... He calls Geet...

Leaving her cabin she comes I front of a red and fumig Shasha and she says " kya hua aapko Shasha... Ma'am?" she says in her cute voice but everyone including Shasha could guess that she is rubbing it in... And she proceeds towards the lions den with her head held high... Feeling a unknown victory of being more important for HIM... And taking a deep breath she the door gives a knock and hearing him reply in his hot voice "come in" she opens it and walks in...

Geet: " haan sir kuch kaam tha?" she says hoping that she hasn't done anything wrong this time and that he's not going to shout at her...

Maan: " Geet kuch kaam hoga tabhi to tumhe bolaunga" he replies in a I-am-stating-an-obvious-fact tone...

Geet: " haan to kya kaam hai"

Maan: shakes his head because of her answer and replies " cancel all my meeting after 7"

Geet: " okay..." and smiles and leaves...

Maan inside his office to himself " isse kya hua?" he says to himself and shakes his head and again says to himself " Maan focus... Yeh ladki mere saath kya kar rahi hai" and again opens his files and turns on his laptop and starts his work again...

*On the other hand...*

Geet to herself in her cabin " kya baat hai babaji... Muje to early choti chahiye maagni nahi padi" and in her happy and exited tone... With that she too resumes her work...

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So Maaneet has finished work and both in the mall... Maan is in the search for the stuff his daadi asked for whereas Geet is in a search too but the fact was she wasn't in the shop looking for the intems the shop had to sell she was looking around to find a person... Well anyone could have guessed that by looking her face... Which was turning red due to her anger as she'd been waiting for 10 mins but she made it look like 10 bloody hours... People walking past gave her weird looks when looking at her red turning her face to which her shot a deathly glare and the poor souls increased their speed to walking... And some even sprinted... 🤣

Whereas Maan... Who being a good grandson he is... Was looking for the times listed on that thin sheet of paper and was shouting at that petrified shopkeeper due to the fact that he couldn't find what he wanted...
Maan: " yeh shop hai ya garbeej bin?" he literally shouted at that poor shopkeeper who was know really scared to even mumble a "sorry"
After his tantrums he finally got all that was listed on the chit given to him and he was heading back his black luxurious car... When...

He sees Geet...

*Maan PoV*

Geet yahan iss waquat kya kaar rahi hai? ( as he glances at his watch...) uske babaji hi jane ke yeh chalti phir ti disaster kya kar rahi hai" but this thought process was broken by his cell ringing... And he picks up that call and turns the other way around... After a few mins he turns back around but finds no one...

Maan: " kahan gayi... Abhi to yahan thi... Yeh kya ho raha hai... Yeh laadki muje pagal bana ke rahe gi... Jahan jau wahan wohi dikh ti hai..." and in sexy yet angry wala fast walk mein he goes to his car... And after clicking that button and after the orange lights flash he opens the door really fast and goes to sits down... Turning his keys.. He quickly zooms off to his mansion...

Seeing this... Geet who had been hiding comes out... And wipes the sweat droplets on her forehead and fans her face with her duppatta...

Geet to herself: thank you babaji muje bachane liye... Warna aap to jante ho wo dusht danav mera kuchumbar bana dete aur khajate...

And thanking her babaji once again she makes her way to the cabs and hires one to her house ( Pinkys house )...

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Precap:

Maan: " meet him...
And Geet turns around...
Geet: "TUM?!"
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*In her cabin*
Geet: "tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?"

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So how was the update guys?

Sorry for any grammar mistakes or any typos check nahi kiya tha 😕

Do leave you likes and comments...

Thanks for reading...

Have a dancing day guys... 🤗

Love ya all...

😊

~Anu~

Edited by Luvkriyansh-anu - 12 years ago

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

res ******
kya tha ye meri hasi ni band ho rahi yar
MG ka description was awesome
update pretty fast
waiting

Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

awesome update
loved it
maaneet were superb

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

awesomeee updates👏

loovveedd ittt😃

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

part 2
nice part...
interesting...
cont soon dear...

PS - can u plz add the update and page numbers and also date if possible in the title?
MG ~ Fading Away part 2 page 6