Rey OS : The weak moment

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Niti Mehta

@Miss_wannabe

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

loved it quite diff. bt really it was awesome idk wht to sy bt really loved it

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Speechless.

Wonderful OS Amy, you said it all, beautifully and flawlessly! :)

Loved it, truly!

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

speechless os.. awesome.. simply beautiful, flawless, n brilliantly penned os... d way u showed rey's guilt was awesome... rey's pov on kria n his wife was nice... kria who loved rey til her last breath.. n rey's wife who gave her whole life for him.. this kria s real kria .. loved d os a lot.. beautiful.. u showed rey's character his guilt everything brilliantly.. awesome hats of ..

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Fabulous os 👏
Loved ittt 😃

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Ayushi (aka Ayu)

@Hidden_Emotions

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

A very beautiful OS.
M completely speechless.
D way u portrayed evrythng was jst amazing!
Rey's guilt, his wife's pain, kria's last wish, everythng was vry beautiful.
Loved d lines wer u described kria's feelings fr rey in d end.
I love all ur works n dis one adds to it.
Keep up d gud work!
Love,
Ayu...:)

Edited by ayu_kriyaansh - 12 years ago

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Anjori

@anjoriii

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

it was nice but sad ending for kriyansh ...btw who was rey's wife ???

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arsha_simran

@arsha_simran

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

awesome update di...

couldn't even imagine of writing something like this...

all this while i was thinking dat it is kria on whom rey cheated i thought it si kria who is rey's wife bt u kept the suspense nd atlast brought me into a huge huge shock...

the girl was kria who died...😲😲😲
damn...

awesome... nd seriously loved it...

itna accha sa update...

there u wer increasing the suspense nd here my hear was beating faster...

nd i swear it on...

nd rey's wife so nicely understood rey... poor her she would be broken na...

bt still u managed to make it better...

end it better nd so hats off to you...👏