Viren Jeevika SS:Change page 5 and 8

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Okay so i'm such a lazy girl i swear.I get so tired and lazy that i don't feel like typing any update.So this SS is for Kanishka to whom i owe a lot of updates.Sorry kanishka but i'm soo lazy you see ;)

Also this story is for my ever so amazing buddies Priya,Alina(Kiran) <3Enough blabbering now straight to the story.

Pms will be sent to all who are in my buddy list.

Leave your comments even if it is a single line and don't forget to Like only if you really like it. :)

I know I have this bad habit of leaving stories mid way but Pinky promise I will complete this one.Hehe

Love you all.

All include those who like me.Bwahahhaha :D

PLEASE TELL ME IF I SHOULD CONTINUE

Scroll Down for Index.

Although I myself res posts on stories and forget 😆 but I don't like it :PPlease unres asap or don't res :D
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INDEX

Chapter 1:Scroll Down

Chapter 2:Page 5

Note:Page 8

Edited by ktloversera - 12 years ago
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Things were no longer the same.It seemed as if the sun rose from somewhere else in the Vadera mansion.No longer were the giggles of the younger couple heard and nor were the continous taunts by Swamini.The house was dead silent from the day it all started.

The Family was shocked to know that Jeevika couldn't conceive,their hopes,their dreams,everything was shattered but they were helpless.Not just Viren and Jeevika but each and every member of the family had almost forgotten how to smile.No one ever said a word about Jeevika's condition seeing how she was.Yes! She was physically very much present,but mentally the husband wife had just wrapped themself in a cacoon of emotions nver letting anyone know how they felt.

Every day,every night she would spend at the clinic hoping for things to take a turn and be in her favor but it seemed as if nothing in the world could help her now.She had started distancing herself from everyone in the family but if there was someone who knew her way more than herself,it was Viren.She knew how shattered and helpless he was but he still took care of her,attending to all her needs,providing her with everything even before she asked for it,what else could one want besides having a life partner like Viren.

But somewhere in the corner of her heart she felt guilty for not being able to give Viren what he longed for,"A child".She knew how much he wanted a heir but fate it was.She cursed herself for something which was never in her hands.The once brave Jeevika was now eventually breaking into pieces and she cold not help it.

It had now been exactly one month since Jeevika came to know about her disease and now slowly she had started stressing herself so much that it was affecting her mental state.

It was hard for Viren to leave jeevika and go to work everday and now he was somewhat back to his old routine but things were still not fine.

One Day while viren left for work Jeevika slept after brdding him good bye and when she woke up she saw that the closet was open and she got up to close it when she found her way into Viren's closet and found a few books there which were on "How to become a good father".Her heart ached to see that she had broken his dreams into pieces.The next thing she found was a diary,she did know Viren wrote a diary but she never asked him about it.Since it was just early morning and she was bored she thought of going through the diary.

The first few pages were about their marriage and as she flipped through the book she found pictures of babies neatly placed in between the pages and what she read next was something she had never imagine.

Please leave your feedbacks :)
Sorry for any grammatical or any other errors.Haven't proof read 😳
Edited by ktloversera - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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before commenting...i want a promise frmm u tht u will definately finish this sory...pinky promise!!!!!
sara i wanted to tell u tht if if m on india forum its bcz of u...nnd ur stories...i have read ur storiea so much time...tht they r learned to me by heart...nw enough of my blaberring but i want to tell u what ur stories means to u...this is the first time im commenting on ur story...
nd i m damm excited abt ur story...
the concept is reallly nice...
nd plzzz plzzz cont soon...
waiting fr it eagerly sara...!!!!
Edited by millee18 - 12 years ago
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srry fr ressing again!!!!!so sorry..
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Originally posted by: millee18

srry fr ressing again!!!!!so sorry..

No problem 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mind blowing babe,
Poor virika my heart ache for them
Very good story and well written
Im curious to know what she read
continue soon plz

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start...continue soon..😊
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Btw plz update your other stories especial mutual atraction
Pretty plz with cherry on top
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Originally posted by: nani2630

Btw plz update your other stories especial mutual atraction
Pretty plz with cherry on top

Heeheh aww Cherryy 😆
Okay i'll try to update it today only.
And If I don't you can kill me 🤢

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