Tumhari kasam -_-_ Angad or Karan..Part5

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hello friends.. how r ya doing?? i was really bored n i read some ff's n i really liked them so i decided to start my own. i hope u like it...

!Tumhari Kasam!
PART1

We see two girls walking into a very beautiful restoraunt buh we can't make out their faces well.. slowly the girls appear and it turns out to be kripa and kashish. They are all dressed up in red and white mini skirt's,with white tops and white caps.
Their are two handsome men sitting on one of the tables and they turn out be angad and sujal. The girls are drooling over them.
kripa- I am going two get that table
kashish- noo way!!! i am getting that
kripa- last time u got ur choice, now it's mine
Hearing all this fight bout guys their boss apeears
boss- y r u both fighting?
kripa- uhhh....
boss- kripa, you can get that table.
kripa is very happy. she thanks the boss and leaves . She quickly checks in the mirror if she looks fine. She picks up the tray from the kitchen and is walking towards the table and the guys r juss staring at her with their mouth opens until kripa slips on a banana peel and falls down with the food all over her. The guys, kashish and even her boss was laughing at her. She got very upset and ran to the bathroom. kashish laughing follwed her
kashish- kripa r u okay?
kripa- please don't talk to me.
kashish- but it's not my fault.
kripa- but u were laughing
kashiah- i cudn't help it..
kripa- w/e keep on laughing.YOU will laugh, u wanted me to look bad infront of them now didn't u
kashish- calm down..

kashish thinking she cudn't do anything, she leaves from there, nowshe is sad too.
SCENE CHANGED..
sujal- It was 2 funny
angad, yea, buh i dun think v shud make fun of her
sujal- why?? is it dat...
angad-SUJAL!! this is not right
sujal- ok fine.
angad- I am going to the mall, u coming?
sujal- sure.

i hope u like it so far and tell if i shud continue or not. and please lave your comments.😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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sounds great!! i think u shud cont 😛 ..so kripa nd kashish work at a restaraunt? cont soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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This is a coooll FF!!! 😛 Continue soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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This is a coooll FF!!! 😛 Continue soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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coooooooooooooooool!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwww.. thanks all of u. dats is really sweet of u. i will continue soon
i totally loved those cooments
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi peepz are you ready for my another part?? LOL.

PART 2
Kripa walks to kashish's room..
kripa- i am sorry kashish. i really am
kashish- no relly it's fine, myb it was my fault
kripa- Pleaseee
kashish- seriously... i am fine
kripa- should we go somewhere out??
kashish- good idea
Then we see this huge buliding lighted. we c a car stops infront and comes out a girl. It was kripa she looks very beautiful wearing a pink beaded dress and pink slippers. Then from the back comes kashish. wearing a light blue dress with matching slippers. Both the girls look beautiful.
A car passes by them really fast and the girls are just like
" UGHHHHHHHHHHHH"
When they see two handsome men come out. kripa wanted to folplow them but kashish pulls her from back and takes ehr inside the mall. They go their fav store. Kashish likes a dress their so she calls kripoa to ckeck it out. as kripa turns out se bumos into a guy
IT WAS ANGAD!!!!!!
k- TUM!!!!!!
a- yea me?? any problem
k- don't show me your face
a- are you mad??
k- yes very, now GO AWAY!!!!!!!!

kashsih comes from the back hearing the noise and with her is sujal.
kashiah- kripa, v r having lunch wid dem 2day.
kripa- WHAT!! i am not, u can
kashish- c'mon.. PLEASE!!
kripa- fine

They find a table to sit at table they order food and talk for a while
kripa- the first time wen i met u i thot u were wrong.. buh actually i was
sujal- it happens?? so what do u guys do?
kashish- right now we are working at da restoraunt buh we r soon to open a salon.
angad- wow that is cool.
Just then angad's cell rings
angad- hello
sum1- ....................................
angad- WHAT.. HOW.. WHEN
sum1-.......................................
angad- ok bye!!

Edited by ~*ish_jaan~* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yes guys please leave ur comments 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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and awesome parts!!😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part!! i predict that someone had a car crash or something or is in the hospital and thats why Angad was askign, wat, when, how?...cont soon! 👏

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