Tumhari kasam -_-_ Angad or Karan..Part5 - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 4
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Kripa grabs her jacket and the car keys. Kashish notices that kripa was crying..
kashish- kripa, what happened?
kripa- kuch nahi (heading out the door)😭
kashish- kuch to batao.. where r u going?? 😕
Kripa drives off and kashish is left behind with her mouth wide-opened and not knowing what to say!!!!

SCENE CHANGED
sujal saw angad coming in the bedroom and stands up.
Sujal- Angad!! kripa ka phone tha
Angad- what did she say..
Sujal- use tumse baat karni thi, but u weren't there.. and also, kripa ne kaha ki fikar nahi karna.
Angad juss shook his head. Sujal gives angad the idea of calling kripa. They both dial her number and kashsih pick up the phone
Kashish- Hello.
Angad- Hello kashish. how are you?
Kahihs- Angad tum!!! ia m fine, aur ap?
Angad- mein bhi theek ho. kya kriap waha hain
Kashish- (lowering her voice) She stormed out of the house and it has been 4 hours since she's gone.. AND she was also crying.
Angad- lekin, use kya hua?
Kashis- usne mujhe nahi bataya.
Angad also takes his car keys and goes to search for kripa!! He searches since sooo long and cudn't find her.. juss then it hit him!!! he knew where she went. He turned his car and speeded off...

SCENE CHANGED
We see two couples sitting on the sofas. They seemed like parents of some young children!!!!
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COUPLE 1:
Drishti- she is kripa's mom. very nice and always wants to see her daughter happy
Shiv - Kripa's dad. very rich can do anything for daughters sake. buh is a little strict on rules.

COUPLES 2
Naina- a very simple young lady. Is mother of karan ( another charatcer that i will reveal alter).
Maneesh- father of karan and also very rich. not that strict on rules.
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SCENE STARTED
Naina- apko koi jaldi nahi hai. take ur time
Drishti- hame koi problem nahi hai!! bas apni ladki ko
Maneesh- ap kaise baatein kar rahe hai. shaadi ke baad woh jitni apki hai utni hamari ho gi.
Shiv- I have no problem!!! ab rishta final hai.
Naina gives every sweets and they were having a very good time. Shiv,kripa's dad cudn't wait till he gave dis good news to his daughter.....


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allrgiht guys please leave ur comments!!😊

Edited by ~*ish_jaan~* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
wow awesome part 👏 toooooooo goooooooood continue soooooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
Jus read ur ff, itz awesome cont soon..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
Thanks a lot for dose sweet comments!!! ia m glad u like my FF.. 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
shes marryin karan.. noooooooooooooo.. i really dont care who karan is but if hes not angad then nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!

wondder wat she'll do..

continue reall sooon

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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
Thanks a lot IndainCutie13 nd brainychild!!!!

I also wanna continue the part right now!! BUH i think it's gonna b 2 early!! First i need to give others the chance to finish reading this..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
OH thanks so much navi!!! u r soo nice!!
well u'll have to read in order to figure put what happens
and i stopped writing that, caz nobody is reading that story.. mayb few ppl r.. i ma sooo sorry.. buh u kno 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
you r welcum!!!!
n i am sooo sorry!!! buh i'll try n mayb start on another fanfic as soon as i finish dis!!! mayb i will do like 7-10 more parts!! no clue
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
ok.. Yea i was juss gonna post my part soon!!!
juss gotta type it!!!
SO GUYS READ MY NEW PART N ENJOY
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30

PART5
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Angad pulls up his car by the lake, where kripa was. He slowly walked over to her. The only sound was kripa sobbing. She feels warm body sitting next to her, slowly lifting her head upwards she locates angad!!!
A- wo, i came to kno that u were somewhere out fro few hours..😊
K- it's ok..meri fikar karne ki zaroorat nahi hai😭
A- yes, lekin what happened to you?😕
K- Tumse koi matlab?😡
A- KRIPA!!! aisa behave karna band karo..
K- r u gonna rule me.. HUH?? (pushes angad back)
She runs to her car and goes back home!!! There she finds, kashish sitting on the sofa!
K- kash, what's wrong?
Kash- bas tumhari chinta hai!!
K- i am fine!! wo bas angad ki tension thi!
Kash- lekin usne bataya, ki um fought with him...
K- YES!! and i did that on purpose!!
Kash- WHAT!!!!! i thot...
Kripa- Yes, mein angad se pyaar karti hu, that's y i m worried about him. Mein use jhoot nahi bolna chahti.. Mein usse shaadi ka wada nahi karna chahti..
Kash- lekin kripa.. ye sab.. Y. y r u doin dis
K- this morning dad called. U kno maneesh, papa he bachpan ke dost. Dad told me that he had choosen a guy for me to marry. And dat guy is karan, Mannesh uncles son
Kripa- lekin how can u do dis!!!!!!!
I don't know but They are coming to india by tomorrow's flight....

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NEXT MORNING
KRIPA!!!!!!!
kripa turns around with her hair hitting a guy and she drops her coffee on that guy!!!
K- I AM SOO SORRY!!
(she looks up and it was KARAN)
Karan- Kripa!! tum.... wow, u have grown soo much
Kripa- OMG.. tum bhi!!!!
and from comes there parents. They hug and greet each other. Drsihti tells everybody to talk wen dey reach home..

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