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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: prem_diwani

In the face of his temper and rage, I found her irritation so funny ... and his dragging her around searching for the lights was so funny..


Cat woman pakdi gayi and how... luved the end .. simply beautifully written.

Prithvi stared on amazed, as a cascade of dark, beautiful, soft hair, fell free in a wild array around a face, so beautiful, and so ethereal that it haunted his dreams every night...And the cap fell down on the floor from Prithvi's numb hand...



Thank u Anu!Glad u lykd it!😃u always giv such awesome comments!😳thank u!😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: irock321

Loved it!!!!! OMG! Beautifully written! The words you used to express her emotions ...she was frantic and scared! Brilliant!!! Can't wait for next update!



Thank u so much for such awsome comments Barayah!🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: monalika

Dudette, you always leave us on a cliff hanger...grrr ! It was so good, ab kya bataon? Cannot wait for the next part...fiesty Meera and arrogant Prithvi...hayeee :)



I know!😆Sorry 4 dt!😉Thank u 4 still lyking it!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Junoonian


Tehsina meri jaan - that was too good 😃
I loved the dialogues - Meera is too funny and sarcastic and cheeky and obviously doesn't know when to shut up - what a combo!
And then her tension when he is searching for the room and even the reader is wondering - what is he searching for? and then the final revelation - light switch - too much - that was hilarious and a favourite scene of mine now.
And nice build-up of tension - will they kiss? or won't they kiss? Will he lose control again? or will he not? Nice 😃👏👏



Thank u so much Binu!🤗Always love ur comments!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sabaSpeaks

wow 👏👏👏, Tehsina , read chapters 15 and 16 in one go.

you are getting better and better at this.
Meera is such a child woman 😆 and I dont at all blame Prithvi for falling head over heel in love with Meera 😉

Allright here goes my favorite ..
what do you think it is 😉 of course the last part
Prithvi stared on amazed, as a cascade of dark, beautiful, soft hair, fell free in a wild array around a face, so beautiful, and so ethereal that it haunted his dreams every night...And the cap fell down on the floor from Prithvi's numb hand...



Thank u Saba!😉Glad u rnt complaining I ended there...😆😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am waiting still plse next chapter 😎
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Posted: 12 years ago
Tehsina 🤗🤗 Read last 2 chapter together, lubbed it totally 😃 Like the way you are writing the story, its funny,engaging and always leaves us wanting more 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Checking IF frequently for the next installment.. patience is running out Tehsina!! Pls, pls hurry up and thank you so much for the engaging story line.. can't seem to get enough of Mithvi!! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 16-page 49...https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/85804204


CHAPTER-17.


Meera's eyes were closed,while her wild,black,soft hairs framed her beautiful sharp featured face..And her flawless fair skin,glowed in the golden glow from the lamplight,as Prithvi stared on dumbstruck.

Is this really My fairy?!My Meera?!!Thought Prithvi to himself.

Unable to believe himself and his own eyes,Prithvi closed his eyes again,to get back his bearings and ensure he was not hallucinating,and took a long staggering breath.

She is real!!!Prithvi realized,even before he had opened his eyes,as her sweet arousing fragrance engulfed him and got his senses reeling.And sure,on opening his eyes,she was still standing there,with her eyes closed,her soft rosy lips parted,as she breathed hard.

What,in the name of God,is she doing here?!!Thought a flabbergasted Prithvi,as his eyes moved downwards..

Prithvi felt someone had kicked him really hard on his stomach,and he forgot to breathe when he saw WHAT she was actually wearing and almost groaned out aloud.

Oh God!!!Prithvi closed his eyes in sheer frustration,as jolts after jolts of liquid pleasure and heat ran through his body.

Somebody please tell me what I am seeing is not real!!!Prithvi pleaded in vain,as out of its own accord his eyes reopened and continued its course down her body.

Prithvi's hot eyes followed every detail of her body as shock waves continued to pass through him.She was dressed in complete black jeans and t-shirt,but they were so tight and body fitting,that not a single curve or hollow of her hot body was left unexposed to Prithvi's eyes.Prithvi took another staggering breath,which worsened his condition due to inhalation of her fragrance in another fresh doze.He felt hot and cold all at the same time.Normally he could not take his eyes off her face,but today he could not take his eyes off her perfect slim and voluptuous body in her dressed to kill,snug fitting outfit.And jolts continued to pass through his body.

How could she wear something like this?!!What if SOMEONE ELSE saw her in this?!!Prithvi thought with sudden abnormal possessiveness.As his hot gaze raked her all over.

But I could go on,all my life,watching her like this..He thought.But only ME!!No one else!!!He thought furiously.

Prithvi slowly dragged his eyes upwards from her narrow waistline,up her other attractive lethal womanly assets,when his eyes stopped at her gaping neckline,as she breathed heavily.

God!What was she thinking when she wore this?!!Was she planning to kill me?!!Prithvi thought,as he placed his free hand on the wall,and clenched it into tight fist,to keep himself from touching her.As in some sane part of his mind,Prithvi was still well aware,that if he touched her right now,he would be completely lost..

Prithvi inhaled another staggering breath,and clenched his fist tighter,as they wanted to move of their own accord,and touch his Meera.

On hearing Prithvi's harsh breathing,Meera slowly opened her eyes wide,and with courage,looked up at Prithvi,who she found,was staring at her gaping neckline,with a tortured expression..

Out of embarrassment,Meera's fair skin turned a pinkish hue.

I have to get out!What do I do?!Thought an embarrassed and frantic Meera,and chewed on her bottom lip.

As if realizing her eyes were now open,Prithvi's eyes started a slow torturous ascent towards her eyes..While dragging his eyes across her face,Prithvi's eyes fell on the soft bottom lip being tortured by her pearly white teeth.And once again Prithvi felt he had just been dealt another hard blow on his stomach,and this time almost groaned out aloud.

Oh God!Is there no end to this torture?!!!You put so much temptation on my face and expect me to control?!!Prithvi thought feverishly,as his right hand,which till now he had kept against the wall under rigid self control,now moved,as if of its own accord.

Prithvi touched her soft bottom lip with his fingers,and instantly Meera stopped chewing on it..His thumb softly rubbed against the lightly bruised lip,as if caressing it,and slowly his eyes moved upwards and met Meera's rounded ones..His gaze locked with hers they stood staring at each other,as his thumb kept caressing her bottom lip..

Meera's heart had started beating so hard,that she felt,any second now,it would jump right out of her body.She kept staring into those mesmerizing eyes,and felt herself slowly getting lost in their darkness and mystery,while at the same time,his thumb caressing her already tingling and burning lips,sent shock waves after shock waves passing through her body..

Another jolt passed through her body,when her hand,held in his left hand was set free,and at that same instant,his same hand moved to grasp her waist and pull her tight and close to his hard body,and liquid fire started racing through Meera's veins..They were standing so close now,that one could not be separated from the other.

Prithvi's one hand moved up and down her back,puling her closer to his body,and drowning her senses in pleasure,while the other kept caressing her lips and burning them with liquid fire.

Why doesn't he..?I want him to..A dazed Meera did not know what she wanted him to do..She just did not want these feelings to end..She did not want to blink and look away from those mysterious magical dark eyes..She did not want his hands to stop casting their magic..She did not want this moment to end..She was getting lost in those soulful eyes,in the magic of the moment,when Prithvi slowly raised her face up..And as if in slow motion he lowered his lips to hers...

He is kissing me!Realised Meera with a shock,and at the last moment,when Prithvi's lips were just about to touch hers,she turned her head away,to one side,so that Prithvi ended up placing his lips on her cheek.

But still Prithvi did not stop..Like a driven man,he kissed her soft cheek,nuzzled her neck,moving her soft hair out of the way..He placed soft butterfly kisses along her jawline,and down her exposed neck,and Meera felt her reserve breaking down, as jolts after jolts of magical sensation passed through her body.

Holding onto the last vestige of her control,Meera pushed him away,just when he was about to kiss her skin above the gaping neckline.

With a last scathing look at Prithvi,Meera ran towards the haweli front door,somehow managed to open it with shaking hands,and ran away into the night,as an astonished Prithvi looked on..

Prithvi felt,as if he had just been splashed with a bucket full of ice cold water!

Good thing she ran away!Prithvi chided himself with a curse.Or else I wouldn't have been able to stop myself today..He thought.

I've to learn to control my feelings and emotions!I have to control myself before this craziness goes any further.I have to.For the sake of my promise,I have to forget her..




Chapter 18-page 54...https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/86039160

Edited by TehsinaJFJ - 12 years ago

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