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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: meera.rajeev

Are you trying to kill me with exitment????? I thought ramdhari would fix meera and prithvis wedding once he comes to know who he really is!!!! But no... He actually hates him for who he really is... That was tottaly unexpected!!!! and you know what the sad part is???? MY SYSTEM CRASHED AND I HAVE TO READ IT ON MY PHONE!!! And i got feaver!!! God its exhausting!!!! Anyways great update yaar!!! Need updates on a daily basis to keep the last inches of my sanity safe!!!!



Oh! U poor dear! Get well soon!will update soon! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago



Chapter 15-page 46...https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/85720986

CHAPTER-16.

Meera stood breathing hard with her eyes closed from the sudden shock, not reacting immediately...
"What were you saying, Thief?!!"Prithvi asked again.
THIEF?!!Meera thought.Relief soared, as she realised finally, that Prithvi had not recognised her.
Of course!!! How will he?!! I'm dressed like a spy!!!Thought Meera, her eyes opening wide with remembrance.

At that moment, Meera felt like dancing with relief, though the situation demanded she should act more intelligently.So giving up on her irresistible impulse, she tried to think soberly.
"What were you saying?!!"Prithvi asked again, in a cold and dangerous voice.
Uff! The Man!!!Meera thought to herself.
What is he going to DO knowing what I actually said?!!Thought Meera, rolling her eyes in exasperation.
Is he going to write a thesis on it?! Or a Biography of a thief with his dialogues? Or maybe an article on THE THIEVES OF BARAGAON?!!Meera went on thinking with irritation.
Prithvi suddenly gave her a hard shake, which made Meera's head spin with the strength of it.
"I ASKED-"
"I heard very clearly what you have asked. I'm not deaf! With that loud voice of yours, I'm sure the entire Baragaon village must be standing outside your front door right now, eagerly awaiting to hear WHAT I had said!"Snapped out Meera with irritation.

Prithvi's eyes rounded in shock on hearing a female voice..
"Wait a second! Are you a female thief?!"He exclaimed out.
Does this guy really have a brain, or what?!Meera thought in exasperation.
"No.I'm a male thief with a female voice. "She replied sarcastically.
And on seeing Prithvi's furious expression, she belatedly placed her hand on her mouth, to stop her words from coming out.But the damage was already done.
Oops! I should not have talked again! Stupid! Stupid! Stupid! What were you thinking?!!Meera scolded herself.
She was not finished thinking this, when she saw Prithvi firming his lips determinedly.
"Come with me! "He bit out furiously, and literally dragged her towards a darkened side of the hallroom...
Where is he taking me?! What is he doing now?!"Thought Meera, chewing on her bottom lip worriedly, as she was dragged along the room by Prithvi..
He is searching for something on the wall! She realised.
What is he looking for?! Not a gun for sure?!!Thought a now scared Meera.

Prithvi cursed and pulled her towards another wall...Again he searched the wall for something, and again cursed on not finding it...
This man is not just stupid! He is also seriously crazy for sure!Thought now, a very worried Meera.
When Prithvi again pulled her towards another wall and went on searching and cursing.

Why is he parading me through the entire hallroom?!!Thought an amazed Meera.
Is he preparing me for a fashion ramp or something?!!She thought sarcastically...

Finally, on failing to find whatever he was looking for in the hallroom, Prithvi suddenly dragged her towards his bedroom.
NOW where is he taking me?! Why into his bedroom?!!She thought frantically.
Again in his bedroom, he searched the wall, and again cursed.
Does he plan to pin me to the wall with nails or hang me?!! Is he looking for hooks?!!Thought a scared Meera, as gory images of all the horror movies she had ever watched,flashed into her mind.
Once again Prithvi turned out to be unsuccessful,and with another loud curse, walked towards the bed, dragging her along with him...
Meera stared horror struck, as the huge bed became huger in her eyes, and old memories flashed across her mind.
Why is he taking me towards the bed?!!Now Meera was really scared.
WHAT does he plan to do with me?!!She thought frantically looking at Prithvi in parslysed horror, as he sat down on the bed determinedly.
Finally her common sense returning, she tried desperately to set her hand free...When Prithvi tightened his grip on her hand, and turning his head to face her, he pinned her with a cold and furious gaze.
Meera stood frozen, as Prithvi warned him not to move an inch, with his eyes...

Meera was so scared, that she could not have moved,even if the earth below her was moving!
When he was sure, she was still, Prithvi turned to the bedside table, and again started searching for something...
"Found you! Finally!"He heaved out a sigh of relief, while at the same time he turned on the bedside lamps...

Oh! So he was looking for the light switch?!!Realised a finally relieved Meera.
But why?!!She was wondering, when Prithvi suddenly stood up. And out of scare, Meera took a step back...
He wants to see my face! Oh no!She finally understood, as she kept walking backwards, her right hand still held in Prithvi's left hand, and facing her, Prithvi followed her, step for step.
I have to escape! NOW!Meera thought feverishly.
With this urgent thought, Meera tried to wrench her hand free, and run.But Prithvi had been holding onto her hand very tightly, and she ended up being pulled back by a strong tug, and bumped into Prithvi.
Prithvi calmly pushed her back against the wall.And once again, Meera stood stuck with the wall behind her, Prithvi at the front, and her held hand was pinned against the wall by Prithvi's.
Meera watched on with rounded and scared eyes, her lips slightly parted as she breathed heavily, as Prithvi came closer to her...His eyes dark, as he loomed over her, a tall, dark, silent and dangerous shadow in the golden light from the lamps...
As if in slow motion, Meera watched Prithvi's free hand move, and he yanked the monkey cap off her head...

Prithvi stared on amazed, as a cascade of dark, beautiful, soft hair, fell free in a wild array around a face, so beautiful, and so ethereal that it haunted his dreams every night...And the cap fell down on the floor from Prithvi's numb hand...





Chapter 17-page 51...https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/85882134
Edited by TehsinaJFJ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Tehsina dear friend , you did it again .. I mean ..another delay of thatkiss scene..

That was a beautiful description indeed ..thou I was waiting for his realizing her. But you kept us wondering what is he going to do..

I liked Meera's thoughts. And her angry replays.. Seems that she is hot tembered.

Please Tehsina .. No more wait for this kiss . I am dreaming of Prithvi prisoning her all night to make her badnaami ..and has no choise but marring him 😉 😳
Edited by awida - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
In the face of his temper and rage, I found her irritation so funny ... and his dragging her around searching for the lights was so funny..

Cat woman pakdi gayi and how... luved the end .. simply beautifully written.

Prithvi stared on amazed, as a cascade of dark, beautiful, soft hair, fell free in a wild array around a face, so beautiful, and so ethereal that it haunted his dreams every night...And the cap fell down on the floor from Prithvi's numb hand...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it!!!!! OMG! Beautifully written! The words you used to express her emotions ...she was frantic and scared! Brilliant!!! Can't wait for next update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dudette, you always leave us on a cliff hanger...grrr ! It was so good, ab kya bataon? Cannot wait for the next part...fiesty Meera and arrogant Prithvi...hayeee :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ




At that moment, Meera felt like dancing with relief, though the situation demanded she should act more intelligently.So giving up on her irresistible impulse, she tried to think soberly.
"What were you saying?!!"Prithvi asked again, in a cold and dangerous voice.
Uff! The Man!!!Meera thought to herself.
What is he going to DO knowing what I actually said?!!Thought Meera, rolling her eyes in exasperation.
Is he going to write a thesis on it?! Or a Biography of a thief with his dialogues? Or maybe an article on THE THIEVES OF BARAGAON?!!Meera went on thinking with irritation.
Prithvi suddenly gave her a hard shake, which made Meera's head spin with the strength of it.
"I ASKED-"
"I heard very clearly what you have asked. I'm not deaf! With that loud voice of yours, I'm sure the entire Baragaon village must be standing outside your front door right now, eagerly awaiting to hear WHAT I had said!"Snapped out Meera with irritation.

Prithvi's eyes rounded in shock on hearing a female voice..
"Wait a second! Are you a female thief?!"He exclaimed out.
Does this guy really have a brain, or what?!Meera thought in exasperation.
"No.I'm a male thief with a female voice. "She replied sarcastically.
And on seeing Prithvi's furious expression, she belatedly placed her hand on her mouth, to stop her words from coming out.But the damage was already done.


Does he plan to pin me to the wall with nails or hang me?!! Is he looking for hooks?!!Thought a scared Meera, as gory images of all the horror movies she had ever watched,flashed into her mind.


When he was sure, she was still, Prithvi turned to the bedside table, and again started searching for something...
"Found you! Finally!"He heaved out a sigh of relief, while at the same time he turned on the bedside lamps...

Oh! So he was looking for the light switch?!!Realised a finally relieved Meera.
But why?!!She was wondering, when Prithvi suddenly stood up. And out of scare, Meera took a step back...


Prithvi stared on amazed, as a cascade of dark, beautiful, soft hair, fell free in a wild array around a face, so beautiful, and so ethereal that it haunted his dreams every night...And the cap fell down on the floor from Prithvi's numb hand...


Tehsina meri jaan - that was too good 😃
I loved the dialogues - Meera is too funny and sarcastic and cheeky and obviously doesn't know when to shut up - what a combo!
And then her tension when he is searching for the room and even the reader is wondering - what is he searching for? and then the final revelation - light switch - too much - that was hilarious and a favourite scene of mine now.
And nice build-up of tension - will they kiss? or won't they kiss? Will he lose control again? or will he not? Nice 😃👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ


CHAPTER-16.

Meera stood breathing hard with her eyes closed from the sudden shock, not reacting immediately...

nice 😃👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow 👏👏👏, Tehsina , read chapters 15 and 16 in one go.
you are getting better and better at this.
Meera is such a child woman 😆 and I dont at all blame Prithvi for falling head over heel in love with Meera 😉

Allright here goes my favorite ..
what do you think it is 😉 of course the last part
Prithvi stared on amazed, as a cascade of dark, beautiful, soft hair, fell free in a wild array around a face, so beautiful, and so ethereal that it haunted his dreams every night...And the cap fell down on the floor from Prithvi's numb hand...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: awida

Tehsina dear friend , you did it again .. I mean ..another delay of thatkiss scene..

That was a beautiful description indeed ..thou I was waiting for his realizing her. But you kept us wondering what is he going to do..

I liked Meera's thoughts. And her angry replays.. Seems that she is hot tembered.

Please Tehsina .. No more wait for this kiss . I am dreaming of Prithvi prisoning her all night to make her badnaami ..and has no choise but marring him 😉 😳



Sorry sweetheart...Bt i think good things tk time in happening!😉

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