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It was a beautiful morning.Sun was peeping through clouds as if playing hide and seek with the sky and the world. Clouds were swishing back and forth with subtle wind blowing as if asking the sun to step out and enlighten the sky which had a tinge of pink in it as if blushing while the birds were chirping the welcome song for the sun. trees were swaying with the wind as if requesting the sun to bless them with its warmth and light.But what was equally beautiful was the angel standing near the window of a beautiful mansion.she really was a vision.Beauty in its raw essence.her eyelids were closed hiding her big olive green orbs behind them,her long lush eyelashes were teasing her cheeks which had a hue of pink in them,her soft and succulent lips just like rose petals were carved to perfection.Her brown curls were teasing her neck and cheeks as the wind was playing with them,skin smooth like porcelain and curves that would leave men begging for her attention.She was enjoying the quiet and calmness of the morning with a hint of smile playing on her lips,while someone was gazing at her with confusion.There he was her knight in shining armor.If she was Aphrodite he was no less than Adonis with his godlike looks.Tall stature with muscular build he definitely was a looker.His chiseled jawline was impeccable.his smooth silky long hairs touching the nape of his neck were no less.His chocolaty brown eyes could make any girl swoon in a second.His eyes held so many emotions
1.confusion as to how is she so calm as calm and her don't go along
2.love as she was his life,the reason of his existence
3.happiness because he was hers
4.pride cuz she was his only his
He was admiring her with an angelic dimply smile when all of a sudden his expression changed.Eyes earlier filled with love now had a mischievous glint in them.His smile morphed into a naughty smirk as he slowly and carefully advanced towards her.He put his arms around her petite waist from behind and nuzzled her slender neck and waited for her outburst as he knew she gets scared due to such sudden actions,but to his utter shock she just sighed with a smile and leaned into his muscular chest.He was shocked wheels were turning in his head wondering how SIREN is calm.Sensing his thought her smile widened and she said

"Itna sochoge to dimaag kharaab ho jaayega😛.Waise gud morning swayu"
"Gud morning siren"
she smiled at the nickname and turned around in his arms to look at him only to notice his face contorted in an adorable pout an a confused expression
"kya hua"
"wo as tum aaj i mean..."😕he stumbled upon words trying to find out the right way to express his confusion.She knew what he wanted to ask so she just nuzzled his neck and said
"yehi soch rahe ho na ki maine aaj tumpe yell ku nahi kiya hmm.."
"haa"
"well wo aise mere majnu because i knew u were staring at me and mujhe pata tha ki tum mere paas hi aa he the"
"O really dont lie siren to phir har baar tum ku darr jaati ho sacchi btao"
"sachi swayu mujhe pata tha tum hi ho, mujhe har baar pta chal jaata hai"
"realllyyy kaise"
"waise hi jaise tumhe mere pass hone hone ki feeling hoti hai tumhe yaad hai tumne mujhse kaha tha ki tumhe mere aane ki khabar kis sms ya mail se nahi balki tumhaare dil se milti hai well waise hi mere dil ko tumhaari dhadkanein recognised hai aur wo mujhe tumhaare around hone ki news hamesha de deta hai"😳
"achha ji agar aisa hai to aj tak ku hamesha darr jaati thi hmm btao na"
"pta to mujhe phle bhi hota tha but maine kabhi act nhi kiya pta kyun kyunki jab tumhe aisa lagta tha ki tumhaari prank successful ho gayi to tumhaare face par ek cute si adorable si smile aa jaati hai which made my day and kyunki mai selfish hu to mai wo smile kaise miss karti"😳saying so she hid her face in his chest
"ohooo to aisa hai well me too is selfish so mera day banaane ke lie give me my gud morning kiss"😉
she blushed but slowly leaned up and pecked his cheek and again hid her face in his chest.He smiled at her cuteness and hugged her tightly burying his nose in her curls inhaling her heavenly scent of lavender and strawberries mixed with something unique something sharon.She responded by clutching his tshirt tightly and breathed in his intoxicating smell of leather musk and something warm just like him.They separated after sometime and he cupped her face and said
"Happy 1st Anniversary Mrs siren shekhawat"saying so he pecked her forehead lovingly
"Happy Anniversary Mr Majnu shekhawat.thank you swayam. I am blessed to have u in my life tumhaare saath life ki har problem tackle karna easy lagta hai,tumhaare saath har ek moment special hota hai.Thank you swayam for believing in our love and never giving up on us even jab maine tumhe give up karne ke lie insist kia tab bhi.You are perfect swayu and I want ki kabhi kisi ko tumhaare jaisa koi naa mile because u are special and unique and sirf mere always and forever.I LOVE YOU"
Swayam was touched he didn't know what to say sharon was less expressive with words but today she just left him speechless.he caressed her cheeks and said
"tumhe pata hai sharon tum meri life ho aur koi apni life par kaise give up kar sakta hai hmm.Sharon i don't know ki mai kabhi bhi tumhe ye samjhaa paunga ke nahi ki mai tumse kitnaa pyaar karta hu lekin mai bas itna keh saktaa hu ki tum ho to sab hai tum nahi to kuch nahi mai bhi nahi.Tumhaare saath life ka har ek moment cherish karne ka mann karta hai and I'm lucky to have u.I LOVE YOU TOO MY SIREN SHARON"
They both embraced each other.Their sweet and tender moment was disturbed by the loud cries of their princess TANYA.Hearing her wails they separated immediately.
"Of course junior siren ko kaise bhool sakte hai pta hai sharon bilkul tum par gayi hai.Soti hai to aisa lagta isse innocent koi nhi par uthte hi siren ki tarah waaoh waaaoh karna start"
"tumhaari hi princess hai and how dare u call her siren u listen mr majnu she is perfect"
"ya she is to phir umm sharon.."
"kyaa"
"aur perfect babies create karein"😉
"sharm karo swayam and phle ek ko to sambhaal lo baad me aur sochna now lets go isse phle ki humari perfect baby pure neibhourhood ko jaga de"
They left together for the nursery with the gift of love and warmth.

That was it jutte chappal tamatoes most welcome but no eggs im vegetarian😃😃😃i know ki bakwaas hai but do comment and let me know how it was bad bakwaas ya maha bakwaas
BTW Im Harshita and if it isnt obvious im a SWARON FAN


MY OTHER WORK

WALK DOWN MEMORY LANE (SWARON OS)
YOUR LOVE MY STRENGTH(SWARON OS)
OUR LOVE MOMENTS(SWARON OS)


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Posted: 12 years ago
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AMAZING OS dear...i loved the way u have portrayed the nature along with sharon's feelings .Nature is undoubtedly the best reflection of human heart...loved these lines..

Clouds were swishing back and forth with subtle wind blowing as if asking the sun to step out and enlighten the sky which had a tinge of pink in it as if blushing while the birds were chirping the welcome song for the sun
I loved the way u described Swayam's eyes..and the confusion in them...beautifully written...loved the unique way of showing his emotions ...
Suddenly the tone of the OS changed from the soothening touch to the naughty and romantic one...cute swaron conversation...
How she acts to be scared to see that glint in is eyes...awww...so adorable...
Beautiful OS dear...i loved the SwaRonish touch ...its amazingly well written for a beginner...will look forward to ur future works..
Luv
Deep
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres..

my god
it was super cute loved it
aww!!!! 😳😳
it was well written
love swaron a lot ❤️

"ya she is to phir umm sharon.."
"kyaa"
"aur perfect babies create karein"😉
"sharm karo swayam and phle ek ko to sambhaal lo baad me aur sochna now lets go isse phle ki humari perfect baby pure neibhourhood ko jaga de"


this was hilarious 🤣
do write more

Edited by -spongy- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -spongy-

res

unres..

my god
it was super cute loved it
aww!!!! 😳😳
it was well written
love swaron a lot ❤️

"ya she is to phir umm sharon.."
"kyaa"
"aur perfect babies create karein"😉
"sharm karo swayam and phle ek ko to sambhaal lo baad me aur sochna now lets go isse phle ki humari perfect baby pure neibhourhood ko jaga de"


this was hilarious 🤣
do write more




thanks will surely try to
Edited by cenation123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS
u hav written it soo beautifully
SanskritiS thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely Os 😊
Beautifully penned
sweetydiyafrien thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great and good ...😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

AMAZING OS dear...i loved the way u have portrayed the nature along with sharon's feelings .Nature is undoubtedly the best reflection of human heart...loved these lines..

Clouds were swishing back and forth with subtle wind blowing as if asking the sun to step out and enlighten the sky which had a tinge of pink in it as if blushing while the birds were chirping the welcome song for the sun
I loved the way u described Swayam's eyes..and the confusion in them...beautifully written...loved the unique way of showing his emotions ...
Suddenly the tone of the OS changed from the soothening touch to the naughty and romantic one...cute swaron conversation...
How she acts to be scared to see that glint in is eyes...awww...so adorable...
Beautiful OS dear...i loved the SwaRonish touch ...its amazingly well written for a beginner...will look forward to ur future works..
Luv
Deep


thank u dii ur opinion matters a lot to me since u really are my inspiration will write more and try to improve
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very very cute os...
gr8 work..👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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harshita...it was a cute, innocent and beautiful story!!

the initial description of the scene, the description of the characters with the simies of nature was superb and well written and expressed...

loved the romantic bond between swaron.. it was very relaxing to read their conversation in each others arms.. i felt like lying down and slipping into romantic dreams 😛

and swarons child is officially named tanya... i dunno how many stories.. practically all the stories which has swarons child..the kids name is tanya... so thats like a note to the creatives ..pls make a series on married swaron after a few yrs and pls keep the childs name tanya 😛

jokes apart.. i loved the story.. wish to read more of ur works 😊

love,
megha

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