virman ff living two faces IMP NOTE

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi beautiful girls my name is meets. I am new here . Iam also a very big fan of virman. So I decided to write a story on them. Writing skills are very bad so please ignore it.
iam writing the plot I will only con if you will comment
lIVING TWO FACES
Plot
this is a story about a girl manvi. She thinks that she is very unluckey because she have no one in the world except his best friend whole she loves. But he cheats her then she feels completely broken and decides to divide. But fate has decided something else. She meet a boy virat who has his own problems. They both decides to help each other in the process one of them fall for another but then...
So please tell me how is it
Love meet
index
Part 1- page 2
Part 2- page 3
Pracape - page 4
Imp note - page 5
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
sorry it's not decide its sucide in the second Para 4 line
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
character
manvi Sharma - an orphan. Sweet lovely girl.loves verin very much
virat vedhra- a very rich person . Owner of international company the vedhras. Is also orphan . Lives with his grandfather. Loves him very much.
Vishal vedhra - virat's grandfather . Loves him very much .have only last wish to see his grand son married
Verin khanna - middle class person . Loves manvi very much.is lawer by profession
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dear just suggestion...
Put little change in title... Add some words like virmaan or ff or ss or os or story... Which make it perfect...
At least people know abt ur story nd post here... This title was also good nd name also bt may be it fails to catch attraction of readers...
Sorry if m intrepted in ur matter bt its just suggestion..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
thank u niaksharma actually I was not adding ss or ff because I don't know the difference between it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its okay...
FF means fan fiction story...which is long one then ss...
Nd
SS means short story...
Nd
u can add ''story'' or ''Virmaan'' there with some signs like other story titles which is noticeable...
Bt do what u like...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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seems like a very interesting concept
wud luv to read more - continue soon dear 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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virman ff
living two faces
Chapter one
"hi bhagvan ji " said a young girl, looking out of window towards sky. It was cold and windy night of Mumbai. Sorrow and pain can easily be seen on her face. " I don't know whether I should be sad of losing everything or should be happy of every thing" she said" you must be getting confuse I mean l don't know whether I should be sad of losing my love ones, my parents, my identity or should happy of having verin who is everything for me. My friend, my guid, my lov.." she was about to complete her sentence when two arms warpped around her waist.
" manna you again started talking to god" said verin lovengly."no verin I was just.." "thanking god for giving you such a hot boyfriend " said verin with smirk. " by the what are you doing at my room" said manvi with fake anger. " manna you really forgot what is today?" said verin sadly. Manvi started thinking what was so special today, then something suddenly clicked in her mind." oh! I am so sorry verin how could I forget today is our 25th date . Just give 10mins to get ready plz" said manvi . Verin went down stairs. And after some time manvi came. Verin's jaw dropped when he saw manvi as she was looking like a fallen angel. She was wearing knee lenght blue dress with blue heels. There was also some make up on her face. Her brown curly hairs were making her more beautiful. " let go beautiful" said verin while asking her for her hand. "of course handsome" said manvi giving her hand.
Then they sat in verin's car and went to a 5 star restraunt. They entered the restraunt. and sat on there sets. Verin was busy in admiring manvi while manvi was looking here and there. A waiter came. " sir what would you like to have" asked waiter. " a kiss" Saidverin who was busy in looking at manvi. "WHAT" said both manvi and waiter. This made verin come out of his dream world. " oh! I am so sorry . I did'nt mean that " said verin who was all red of embarrasment. Manvi was laughing like anything small chukle of other people can also be herd in the room . This made verin annoyed . " now why are U laughing. This is his because of U" said annoyed verin. " what because of . Hello it
was not me who said" " now stop it manvi. Lets give order. " said verin cutting her. Verin gave waiter the order. " give me 5 mins I am coming" said manvi . She went towards wash room but when she came back she was not able to belive at what she saw. She saw her small world clashing. She saw verin KISSING some one else
So guys this was all for the day plz ignore my mistakes and don't forget to tll me how was it
Love meet;)
Edited by pinkdreams - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I AM FIRST.
SUPERB UPDATE.
MANVI IS MODERN.😊😊😊
VIRAT KI ENTRY KAB HONGI.
CONTINUE SOON AS POSSIBLE.
PLZ PM ME.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
I was smiling while reading the update especially wen viren says I want a kiss 😆bt then the last line made my jaw drop open- omg viren kissing some1 else -god giv manvi strength cnt wait for next part- plz update soon dear 😉

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