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Riya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

plzzz pm me for your update.

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kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

interesting one
viren is such a flirt feeling bad for manvi
update next part soon and do pm me

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Jannat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

nice update dear
update soon ❤️

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naina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

I m liking it...
Cont soon n i luv maaren...

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meet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

thank U guys for wonderful comments. I am feeling as if am on cloud 9. I will definately cont soon

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meet

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Posted: 12 years ago

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chapter2Living two facesmeanwhile at vedhra mansionMr vishal was very exited, and why should he not be, his grandson was returning from London after 4 yrs. " sari preparation ho gayi kya?" asked mr vishal who was was very I'll, but his illness was not able to affect the excited inside him. " are jaldi jaldi bath chalk, meta pots Ata hi hoga" said mr vishal. Mr vishal was excited not to meet his grandson only but was also exited because today he was going to convey him for his marrige as a mindblowing idea was going on his mind." sir, virat Baba a gye hai" said Tarun." ok sab san ready hai na" said me vishal. " yes sir" said all the workers. " baghvan ji please mere dadaji ko bada kar dijiye, vho 70 saal ke ho gye hai par 7 saal bche(kid) ki tarha act karte hai" virat thought. His car reached the main door, as he placed his foot ovirat's SUV entered vedhra mansion. He was also equally exicted as his dadji to meet him. He looked out of the door amlnd saw what he expected. Lots of band Baja, garlands etc were there to welcome him.he came out of the car and his dadaji hugged him." Welcome back beta" dadaji said. " dadaji the sab kya , itna pomp and show, I think I should clear your doubt, aj mere Shadi nahi hai" said virat who was irritated of this loud music." I wish hoti" he said dreamingly. " acha phele andar chalk phir baat karte hai" said dadaji and went inside the house virat followed him, he was very happy to see his house after 4 years. Beta yum than gye ho ge , apne kamre mein jake fresh ho lo" said dadaji. " ok dadaji " said virat. First went to his room and took bath. trun came to his room. " virat Baba, dadaji apko bula rhe hai " said Tarun. " acha thik hai ab tum jao" said virat. And went to his dadaji's room. As he reached his room he saw lots of photos of girls. He know what was going to comedadaji herd footsteps at his door when he turned around he saw virat standing there. " are virat beta ander so aur batao in mese tumhe kon se achi lagi, agar mere rai lo to ye wali achi hai" he said givig one of the photo. First refused to take and said" dadaji ye sab kya hai" Said irritated virat. " beta mujhe to ye larkio me photo lag the hai, tujhe much aur dikh hai kya?" asked dadji with lilittle smile on his face." dadaji nein shaadi nahi kar sakta!!" said virat who was angery now. " par kyu virat tujhe pats hai mere umar me log some par poto aur potio me sath khel rage hai, aur ek nein badnseeb hu jiske pote ki shaadi bhi nahi hai" said dadaji.virat was not marring because of any past but because he thinks that metrics and love will become hurdle in his way to sucess. " dekh virat agar aj tune shaadi me liye jai hai nahi kaha to tu mera mara mu dekhe ga" said dadaji he know that it was too much but he has to do it to convey virat. " par nein shaadi nahi kar sakta" said virat ."kyu" asked dadaji. " kyuki meine phle se hi Shadi karli hai" he blurred out withuot thiking twice. " WHAT!!" said dadaji with shock+happy expression. virat himself was shocked at what he said.kab? Kaha? Kaise? Dadaji's question started. But virat's phone rang at that moment. He picked up the call. " hmm...kya...abhi...thik hai" he said to the person at phone. "dadaji ek bahut urgent meeting hai mujhe Jana hoga" said virat. " par intni intni raat ko" asked dadaji worridly. " ha dadaji, asp khana khake so jaiye g nein shayed late ho jaunga" said virat leaving that room.
At the restraunt
"ve-verin" said manvi with cracking voice. Verin immidiatly pushed the girl kissing him away. " manna jaisa yum such rahi hi vaisa nahi hai" said verin hi was very panicked. After seeing all the drama, no strenght was left in her to here some thing else. Every one in restraint was watching them. She was not in condition to face world or to face verin so she ran from there. Tears are rolling down from her brown eyes. Verin also followed her. " stop! manna Stop!" said verin to stop her but she awsnot listning to him. Done finally hold her hand to make her face him. She turned aruond and jerked his and away. " DON'T YOU ARE TO TOUCHE ME MR VERIN KHANNA"she she angerly. " manvi plz try to understand" sauna verin with sorrow in his voice. " plz verin go I want stay alone, otherwise I will also something wrong" said manvi who was very irritated by verin's presence near her. " no manvi don't try to hurt yourself, if you want me to go then I wlii go but plz don't try to hurt your self" said verin while Wallin away from her.
now manvi was all alone she was crying badly. She started walking on the road without thinging where this way will lead her.there was jungle on her either side and road was emty because of late night. After all that she was very weak mentally as elwell as phisycally, so she fainted and fell on the road.
virat was returning from his meeting. There was only one thing going on his mind' mrs vedhra'. He has lied to his dadaji but now from where he will find mrs vedhra. He was so lost in his though that he did'nt noticed what was on the road. He suddenly applied brake when he saw a girl leying on the road her body was just inches away from his car. He came out of the car to see who she was. He was not able to see her face as her back was facing him. So he turned her when he touched her he found that she was having high fever. But when he saw her face he was lost in her beauty. " wow she is so beautiful. Shut up virat ye tu kya soch rha. Ach yeh sab chod. Iski tabiat bahut kharab hai ise that lijana chahiye" he though. And pick up her, made her sit in the car and went to his house
So please tell me how was it and if there are mistakes then kindly ignore them
Love meet

Edited by pinkdreams - 12 years ago

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Niaksharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Res/
superb one...
Liked ir...
Starting was awesome...
Waiting for next one...

Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago

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Deeksha...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

nice update...
mil gayi virat ko mrs. vadera ..
i think viren did not cheated manvi...its some misunderstanding...but nice now virman will be together. ..
waiting for next...

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pink1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

both part was nice
he doesn't want mary
and she heartbroken
update soon next part

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Huma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

omggg Meet thats was awesome this is sooo exciting- i knew virat will find her bt didnt kno lyk that i hope virat makes manvi the 'mrs vadhera' - im gettin even more excited plz update quickly cnt wait anymore for next part 😉