MG SS ~DILRUBA~ {BY:NELU} COMPLETED

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Priya21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Maan toh bhut ziddi h.bt I liked it.
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Dona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

nice updates

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

part 5
nice part...

PS - plz include the update and page numbers in the title...

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nelufar

@NelufarAazmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

thnkss guyss for ur support...

plzz guyss wants more like nd comments...

NOTE::part 6 ke baad somebody of u r thought that MAAN IS ZIDDI...
BT GUYSS HE IS NOT LIKE THAT... HE FORCE GEET CUZ USE SOCHA GEET KO AGAR WO FORCE NAHI KAREGA TOH WOH APNE LIYE CHAI NAHI BANA AGE AUR AGAR BAAD MEIN BHI KOI JARURAT PARE TOH USSE BOLE GE NAHI... HE JUST WANT TO COMFORT GEET..😛😉

SO HERE IS PART 7
MG SS ~DILRUBA~

PART ----7

GEET WAS MAKING BLACK COFFEE FOR MAAN & TEA 4 HERSELF
AS GEET DON'T KNOW ANYTHING IN KITCHEN SHE THOUGHT TO SEARCH BY HERSELF NOT TO DISTURB MAAN...

SHE WAS SEARCHING COFFEE BUT IT WAS ON TOP SELF, SO SHE TOOK A TULL ND TRY TO GET IT...
SHE WAS TRYING ND SUDDENLY MAAN COME CALL HER

MAAN: GEET...
HIS SUDDEN SOUND MAKE GEET SCARED ND SHE WAS ABOUT TO FELL THN
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{OUR HERO SAVE HER}
MAAN CATCHES GEET
so geet was in maan's arm

mahiii ve mahi mahi ve...😳😳😳
AFTER SOMETIME MAAN PUT GEET DOWN...😳

MAAN : GEET tum thik to ho na??? tumhe kahi lage toh nahi... doctor ko bulau??? kya kar rahe tum upar? mujhe bula nahi sakhte thi?? kuch to jawab do...

geet: { she was only drooling maan😉😳} : woh
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main thik hu... app firar maat kifiye... mujhe chot nahi lage...😊

maan: tum sach main thik ho na???

geet: sachiii!!!
thn"" MAAN HUGS GEET"'

GEET WAS SHOCKED😲
THN MAAN BROKE THE HUG AS SHE DIDN'T RESPOND HIM😕

MAAN: SORRY WOH... TUM KAM KARO MUJHE KUCH CALLS KARNE HAIN
THN HE LEFT THE KITCHEN.
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GEET THOUGHT:KYUN mujhe inke baahoo main itna acha lag raha THA?? kyun main chahte hu baas unke baho main rahu humesa??? inke dil ke pass?? kyun mein chahte hu yeh sirf mujhe apne sath rakhe kyun inke muu se apna naam sunna itna acha lagta hai?? kyun meine dad aur meri baat in se share ki??? kyun main inko apna mante hu... kyun main chahte hu se humesa mera sath de?? kya main ine.
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pyar karne lage??? par kese?? do din main kise se pyar kese kar sakte hu?? LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT??? NO NO MAIN inke bare main KUCH BHI jane bina... NAHI GEET YEH PYAR NAHI HAIN... PYAR NAHI HAI... MUJHE DAD KI ZIMEDARI UTHANI HAIN MAIN KISI SE PYAR NAHI KAR SAKTE...

geet: mujhe inse dur rehna hoga... but main yeh job nahi chor sakte...
lekin main jald se jald iss kam ko khatam karunge...
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MAAN THOUGHT: KYA GEET HE MERE DREAM GIRL HAIN??? JISKA MAIN INTEZAR KAR RAHA THA?? jisee main apna sara pyar dena chahta tha??? pehle mulakat se he kyun main uske fikar karta hu??? kyun uske sath rehne ke bahane dhunta hu??.
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.yes!!! woh mere DREAM GIRL HAIN"" main Use apna bana chahta hu ... uske sath zindagi bitana chahta hu... sare umar apne pass, sath usse rakhna chahta hu... uske zindagi se sare dukh hatana chahta hu... apne aankho main usko sajana chahta hu... uske aankho se har aanshu apne aankho main lena chahta hu... uske saree khushi-paresane batna chahta hu.. geet ka humdam ban na chahta hu... main GEET SE SHADI KARNA CHAHTA HU"... usse dadima ki bahu bana chahta hu... annie ki bhabi bana chahta hu...
par yeh sab kuch GEET KI MARZI SE HOGA... SAB KUCH JESA WOH CHAHE GE WESA HOGE... MAIN AONE DREAM GIRL KE HAR SAPNA PURA KARUNGA...😊😊

MAAN: SO MISS GEET HANDA READY HO JAO MRS.MAAN SINGH KHURANA BANNE KO...😳😳 LOVE U GEET...😃

thn geet come nd knock his room

geet: can i come in sir??

maan: yes geet!! betho...

geet: no sir i;m fine... just to give u ur coffee...

thn she pass the coffee mug to geet
geet was about to leave thn maan call her

maan: geet...

geet: jii sir..

maan: mere sath beth ke apne chai pe o ge??? if u want..
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geet: but sir mujhe kaam hai...

maan: that why i say... if u want...
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.geet: { itne ache se puch rahe hain kese mana kar du?? ek cup chai pene se thore na kuch hoge... hain na??}
OK SIR ...

THN BOTH SIT IN MAAN'S BED...

MAAN: GEET KYA MAIN TUMSE KUCH PERSONAL BAAT PUCHU??

GEET: PERSONAL???
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MAAN: GEET TUMHARE GHAR MAIN AUR KON KON HAIN??

GEET: DAD AUR MAIN HE HU AUR KOI NAHI HAI... jab main 12 saal ki thi tab mom ki death ho gaye... nd some relatives lives in amritsar

maan: u knw geet jab main bhi 12 saal ka tha tab mere momdad ki death ho gaye the... i was so alone... BUT my dadi is best... she help us 2 forget everything...
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geet: us????
.maan: main aur annie... my sister nd my jaan😊

geet smiles

maan: geet tumhare best frnds kon hain??

geet: rajji {my clg frnd} & sanaya{ scl frnd}
apka??

maan: mera joi frnd nahi hain... but adi is like my frnd

PRECAP: talk continues nd MISSION TO MAKE GEET FALL IN LOVE...😳

PLEASE GUYSS LIKE & BIG COMMENTSS

"""" PLEASE GUYSS SUPPORT ME"""

Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago

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aditimaan

@aditimaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

lovely ud nelu.Maan sharing his lyf with Geet.our hero saves his dream girl .now waiting 4 Mission Mrs.MSK

Edited by aditimaan - 12 years ago

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lizzy84

@lizzy84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

awesome update (waise what should i call u do let me know??)

aww maan was forcing geet for her own good(thank u for clearing our doubts😃)

and love u for "the great maaneet fall😳' geet no😃 fear when maan is here😆

hmm so geet finally retrospect about her feelingstowards maan😳 hope she realises soon

that she loves maan .maan finally accepted geet as his dream girl😳

interesting precap looking forward to see how will maan woo geet😉

waiting waiting and waiting😃

thank u for the pm😃

love aanya😊

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Nice update
both knew about their feelings

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dhakdhak22

@dhakdhak22

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

nice dear😊

maan realize hs feelings fr geet👏

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nelufar

@NelufarAazmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: aanya84
awesome update (waise what should i call u do let me know??)
aww maan was forcing geet for her own good(thank u for clearing our doubts😃)
and love u for "the great maaneet fall😳' geet no😃 fear when maan is here😆
hmm so geet finally retrospect about her feelingstowards maan😳 hope she realises soon
that she loves maan .maan finally accepted geet as his dream girl😳
interesting precap looking forward to see how will maan woo geet😉
waiting waiting and waiting😃
thank u for the pm😃
love aanya😊

hey dear u can call me nelu...😊
thnk u so much for ur big & lovely comments dear aanya...😛😃