Spoiler OS..mehendi burns upd part 2

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Hey guys here I am writing my first os based on the spoilers and pics..

Thinking or reading something related to track in positive way will make urself away from spoilers...so is my OS...






Ajmer track in a positive way...


After the mehendi when dilshaad sees zoya hands for color...she couldn't she the burns as the hands r shadowed by window sun.

Later they fallow into the living room where everyone is present..

Asad stares at zoya...thinks zoya is breathless...how can I have such a beauty in all ways..she is specials and different from everyone but will be mine in few days..

Dilshaad makes zoya sit on the big diwan..Najma the cute girl will pull his bhai Jaan to zoya side and makes him sit which makes asya collide by shoulders..we can see mitwa moment and shyness ..

Najma asks to find asad name on zoya hands.

Grabbing the opportunity asad grabs zoya hand from ankle and slide down to palm which makes zoya shiver.

Asad takes zoya hands in his hands gently and feels her najhuk haath. Zoya opens her hands witha shiver and a heavy breaths..asad closeness and he holding her hands is bringing her intensity.

Asad tries to find out but after watching deeply he finds burns all over.he was about to find his name intact saw his name but he gets diverted seeing zoya burns..he gets flashback of zoya having mehendi and having pain and her different expression at that time..he thinks this why she was having pain..

Najma asks what happened Bhai Jaan coudn't find ur name..he says that's not it I am looking at the burns..zoya fearing asad seeing her burns hearing asad mention her burns turns out teary ...dilsaad come there how this happen why didn't you say something zoya says how can I stop your happiness phuphi..
Asad hears and gets emotional and feels bad for zoya taking the pain for him.

Asad asks how this happen taking zoysia hands caresses and says ammi did everyone also have the same burns.

Dilsaad says no one has any burns only zoya does..and that I mixed the saughaat mehendi how can this happen..zoya do you know anything..what happened..zoya looks at tannu..the mehendi lady says tannu was the one who applied mehendi..asad ask what happened tannu..why this happend.

Tannu jammy wo.woh..

Appi comes and says she was mixing something in the mehendi bowl when I came in from airport...as I was going for fresh up I asked her what was that she mixing she said for color fullness I am adding this liquid..later she put the empty bottle in trash too...maybe it's still in there lets check.

Asad and Najma goes there and check the trash and finds the bottle...it says diluted acid down below.

Asad gets shock he goes to tanveer and slaps her and says what kind of play is this..

Tannu jammy I didn't see the bottle..I thought it was mehendi color enhancing oil..I am sorry..

Asad gets angry at tannu says ...tannu u r extremely being difficult in always..hiding things,and doing things which r idiotic..what kind of behaviour is this..next time don't do this and try to be careful if not I can't help it.

Tannu gets furious..zoya smiles.

Najma and dilsaad takes zoya inside to put some ointment.

Zoya says its ok phuphi mehendi will ruin.. It's not painting anymore like earlier.

Asad at the door hearing gets flashback of her bearing the pain for him.

Najma and dilsaad says take rest will see u later and pass asad putting hands on him with a question mark face..asad slowly walking to her gets lglimpses of tannu behaviour how she is telling lies and how tannu was covering up that zoya was hurt by the door when asad went to call them the other day..

Zoya giving asad the burn skin..zoya saying about the eye..is tanveer doing something will find out later..walks to zoya and says sorry for my sake u have burns on you hand...zoya says its ok mr.khan..

Asad taking the opportunity says miss.frarro...stops and says zoya I have to tell you a secret...tannu hearing this for side gets furious and says I have to separate them...

Tannu goes to dilsaad and says I am sorry this much happend by my sake..I should have been careful
Dilsaad furious will not answer and will be arranging the table..

Tannu gets furious seeing dilsaad not saying its ok..says to dilsaad ..it's very bad for a bride and bridegroom tobe together before marriage so only so many happenings..the should not be facing each other all the time..

Dilsaad thinks maybe , Nikah is two days after better to say asad and zoya to stay away from each other and not look at each other if not bad things happen..she thinks of asad in zoyas room goes there and says sad u can't see zoya anymore.asad dumbstruck says what ammi why can't I see her what happened now she is going to be my biwi in two days then why the dikhat...dilsaad laughs at asad and sees zoyas expression being sad she can't see mr.khan.

Dilsaad says not like seeing other forever but until the Nikah u can't see each other as it is bad luck..so only bad things r happening...

Asads and zoya makes an expression. Oh only two days but again. Feels bad even tow dys is torture..

Dilsaad pulls asad away..asad saying ammi. I have to talk to zoya...dilsaad says later and pulls him out and closes the door of zoyas room.

She put a divider in between the rooms and the backyard too.


Am skipping the backyard scene and asad calling zoya to tell his intentions..

Asad getting frustrated not expressing hi love to zoya will think of writing a letter with the gift of her mothers earring.

He says I love u zoya fro the first time I felt attracted to you..at magalpur I felt what u r for me when I almost Lost you, but couldn't say anything bcoz of my past and hid my feelings innerly..I was getting attracted to you and was falling in love which I didn't want so only I used to get raged when u were not agreeing with me or anything mattered you..

But love mohabaat once starts will never stop..I couldn't see u leave..I didn't want u to go..so I did the Engagement it was not nakili..it was real and a beautiful moment for me.

Ammi with rasams and evrything I was feeling happy innerly but was scared to ask your and what u r thinking..

When u gave me a nakili Nikah idea I refused to have it but innerly wanted it to turn it into real..once knowing my feelings and love I try to confess but always distractions..

But today after u accepeting my dress and wore it in front of everyone I feel u feel for me too.

Zoya I love you..before,now and forever...

Will contd of Nikah and tannu tricks and Ajmer track if people interested only.




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Sorry earlier posted only half of it but had the full first part up..
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Its a nice part plz conti son n pm me.. n plz end the tanu track in ausucha way that asad should repect zoya 10 times moree than he s now.. I so wish he will slap her twice for her harkatein..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's very good. Please continue!
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itz very nice yaar. Do continue it...
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interesting…please do continue and pm me when u do!
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CONTD...

U r the best thing happened in my life.

I don't know your answer but somewhere deep feeling have a taught u r ready to join me in my journey..

Wating for you in the backyard...wear your ear rings and the dress along with it..

Aap ki asad..not mr.khan.

Asad, calls najma and hand this box to ms.farook...I mean zoya...
Najma, are Bhai Jaan zoya...mmm smiles and makes asad shy..
Asad, najma now,
Najma, ok Bhai Jaan will give to zoya sorry sorry Babhi...tik hai smiles and leaves.
Asad, Babhi..what should I call her after marriage,begum,zoya,mrs. Khan what mrs. Khan asad u must be kidding..and remembers zoya calling him baby...he calling her sweety..sweety bachi name..naa...zoya is fine..yeah zoya my other half.

Najma, on the way collides with tannu and says sorry didn't see. In between the packet falls down and the letter falls out.
Tannu..why so hurry najma..
Najma, have To go and give this to zoya..
Tannu sees the letter and hides it..
Najma, not knowing of the letter goes to zoya and gives the packet..
Tannu.. Reads the letter gets furious lets see how u will meet zoya..

Zoya,in room looks at package and sees a light yellow color transparent saree with sleeveless gold color blouse..she sees a small packet opens it and has tears seeing her mother earring. Thinks why did mr,khan hide it so long and give right now what does it mean..Allah Miyazaki he hid it and was telling lies all the while when I taught I lost it..

Zoya, I should ask mr.khan right now..thinks of going his room but thinks about not meeting curfew picks up cellphone and rings asad..

Asad, hello, zoya very seducingly romantic voice.
Zoya, gulps mr khan what did u do, how dare u did this, why did u hide all the while. I was all around u for this.
Asad, feeling happy, all around for my love, thinks she is talking about letter says..woh actually, I wanted to woh.

Zoya, leave it mr khan, u will never complete..what is with this saree now.
Asad,.gives a confusing look..ms.farook...zoya meet me in backyard in 5 mins.
Zoya mr khan ok I will meet you , music starts upstairs asad is not able to hear the net words of zoya...but not in 5 mins..I will take 20 mins..as I have to give my measurements.ok mr.khan
Asad,what I can't hear you.
Zoya, yells ok mr. Khan.
Asad thinks she said ok and leaves to backyard to make arrangements.

Asad reaches backyard and sees tannu and gets irritate what is she doing here.
Tannu..looks at asad and smiles not having a smile back..curses herself for falling after asad.

Asad..tannu what r u doing here.
Tannu..woh jammy bcoz of music I was having headache so came out..will go in a while.
Le the putJammy what ru doing here.
Asad woh zoya..hesitating to say.
Tannu what jammy u forgot u guys cannot meet.
Asad remembers and thinks how I forgot about not seeing each other until Nikah. Sees the gazebo and curtains and think of talking to her from behind the curtains without seeing her..
Tannu..u go in..I won't see zoya ok...
Tannu..about pretend going stops and says jammy u need help to set up table.
Asad hesitantly agrees and thinks why need of table when we r here to tal looks at time and thinks almost time may be help tannu and make her leave.

Asad and tannu set the table and drinks..
Asad is sweating due to tense.
Tannu hands him over the drink..in which she mixed toxicated medicine.
Asad takes that and ask her to leave.

Tannu..leaves and when asad is not looking she hides behind the gazebo.
Asad imagines zoya comming in the yellow saree with a sleeveless blouse.
Hair drawn to side,red lipstick smiling cutely..later drinking drinks..in his imagination he drinks the drink which was mixed..still in dream world looks at time an thinks why zoya is not out yet..she is always late,have to teach her punctuality once married. Smiles himself as he is thinking about zoya as a wife...no no. I can't say nothing to her directly,she is a sherni...again smiles thinking him as sher and zoya as sherni perfect match...I will hand the time sense thing in her manner..I will be late when she gets furious I will say about today and she will learn to never be late.

Asad again looks at time and where is zoy...aa. He started to feel dizzy..what is happening to me..saying this he collapses on chair..
Tannu comes from behind pulls asad with utmost strongest but not able to move him an inch..thinks asad six packs r not helping me to move him into the gazebo diwan sitter..the setting was done for qawwali all the diwans r placed in a square pattern in between a small mattress type for the singing person.

Tannu, sees here and there , finds a wheel barrel(used to move dirt gravel and other garden things form one place to another place which r heavy. She brings it there and with most difficulty pushes asad onto wheel barrel..

MY NOTE???felt real bad to write this..billi pushing asad and touching him is unbearable but what to do some part has to be for the story..

She pushes the wheel barrel into the gazebo with all of tannu energy..

Tannu sees zoya comming pushes asad on the diwan and make him in a sleep position and she sleeps besides him.

Asad fully toxicated thinks all the while thinks zoya and try's to say lovely words...like zoya u r beautiful..ur hair is is no nice..I can't live without you.i loved u all the while from beginning...don't leave me..will u marry me...lets runaway to...he knocks off..he wants to say lets runaway to paradise after our nikah.

Zoya reaches there when asad was saying ur hair is so nice etc,. She thinks asad likes tannu and want to run away with furious tries to run away...but stops and thinks then why did mr,khan call me and said he wanted to say something...this morning also he said he wants to talk and said we can talk on our Nikah night..asad replied am wating for our Nikah night..what does that mean..is this some tannu trick.wait a minute asad never drinks and hates drinks..he looks he is drunk..and says this is defiantly tannu plan like she said she did it but made asad drink to do her chal..

She goes to the gazebo to check again this time secretly..

Asad calling zoya...seeing this zoya gets tears...takes the pitcher of water and pours on asad ..tannu gets stunned seeing zoya back..she was actually trying to make a call to take asad away from there and hide...but before completing zoya comes there throws water on asad face and says wake up mr.khan look what is happening here.

Asad ...drowsily says zoya u ..why did u put water on my face.

Tannu..jammy u where sleeping very deeply..u need rest but look what zoya did.

Asad..looks at tannu and starts to recollect how he got dizzy after the drink given by tannu.asad says tannu what's In.The drink..
Tannu thinks this asad bi na alawys to the point can't he wait.

Zoya furious goes to tannu and slaps tannu and says what a badly woman r u.. I have never seen a woman doing something about her izzat and pretending something happened about her izzat..u should feel shy and disgusted to be a woman..I hate to see you.

Asad,zoya what r u saying,what happened...where were u I told u to come at 7:30in the letter.

Zoya,what letter mr khan..I didn't receive any letter.
Tannu smirks..
Zoya seeing this says this must be tannu plan again.goes to asad and says what tannu did..
Tannu jammy u where in Nasha u thought me as zoya and made me sleep with u.

Zoya comes and slaps again tannu..zoya says no matter how toxicated mr,khan won't do anything like that I myself am proof for that.and remembers their toxicated night after going for a search for zoyas dad.

Asad hearing this get shock and feels speechless but zoya defending him gets conscious and goes to tannu..and says why did u do this?.why r lying..I taught u r a good person and my best friend..calling you best friend is a insult to a friend..whom did I believe uptil now..

Asad looks at zoya and says sorry for not trusting you...

Tannu..no jammy it was zoya who said and challenged me to see if I can sleep with u..

Asad looks at zoya.

Zoya says mr.khan that's not it..tannu was assaulting me and gave a treat to leave you if not she will kill me..I said I have trust in mr khan and my love.but tannu challenges me let's see ur love..u be yourself I will plan myself to sleep with asad..she did it too.

Asad zoya u should have told me..see what happened ..god knows if so with greatly happened means.zoya u bet on me..how ridiculous..he shouts for this

Zoya, mr khan now also u r suspecting me...and runs away from there..goes out feeling frustrated gets on a bus feeling never ever wanted to see asad again..

Asad thinks she wends inside and question tannu why u did it.

Tannu say bcoz I love you and wanted to marry you.
Asad so u wanted to marry me and choose this way how disgusting woman u r for being a woman oh Allah why did I trust you..breaks down and yells go away for here...never show your face to me,

Tannu seeing asad anger runs inside gets rage and goes to zoya room to kill her..

But zoya is no where to be seen.

Tannu..asks najma..says I don't kow let me call her..
Zoya answers her and says she is going and will never come back..
Tannu hears this and says zoya I will not leave you.
Asad comes there and asks what is going on...
Najma,cryingly says about zoya leaving the house..
Asad with tears looks sad.

Tannu smiles and says good thing happened she left.
Asad comes there and slaps tannu and says get out.
Najma,dilsaad get stunned and confused and r in tears too hearing zoya leaving.
Tannu gets out and find out from watchman that zoya is on Ajmer bus.

Asad explains tannu evils intentions and what she did to hima nd zoya.
Asad calls zoya but zoya doesn't lift the calls.
Even najma and dishaad calls r left unanswered.

Asad comes out to get in his car ask watchman about which way zoya went..he says she climbed Ajmer bus..I tried to stop her and said it is Ajmer bus but she didn't listen to me.

Asad says Ajmer..zoya I am comming I am getting u ..without u there is no asad.


Will update seeing responses..hit like and comment what u like and what didn't like?..what u were looking for..







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superb update...waiting for the next part continue it soon...
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Wow.. great.. zoya s so sensible.. plz conti soon n l. Me..
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Thank you for liking my os.

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