Virika OS: Today was a Fairytale BONUS CHP-pg11 - Page 9

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Amazing...Awesome ..Super awesome..

Lovely update..

I'am Taekwondo Pink belt!😆😆😆 Where did u get this from ??

Laughing like mad over this line..

Continue pls ji..

Originally posted by: ElmWizard5015

no resing ...

already read it from iPod and now came online from laptop just to comment ...

Can i just say that u made me fall in love with and this beautiful OS!!

Well if i start writing adjectives i wont be able to stop ...

Awesome, Superb, Fantastic, Wonderful, Marvellous, Amazing and the list goes on and on ... but to tell u the truth this OS is way beyond all this ...

Still there is one word that automatically came out of my mouth just as i finished reading it ..

BEAUTIFUL !! BEAUTIFUL !! BEAUTIFUL !!

Well Hats Off to ur amazing mind 👏

U started it all with a fight ... this was something new and how beautifully did u sum it up!!

From Viren and Jeevika getting angry at each other to they realising their mistake ...

From them trying not to think about each other to ending up in missing each other ...

and atlast realising their importance in each others life infact that they are each others life ...

Hayeee 😳

Then coming to Viren kidnapping Jeevika to Jeevika hitting viren and then both of them apologizing each other!! 😊

Then coming to the proposal ... who wouldnt say yes to such an amazing proposal ???

who wouldnt have tears in her eyes when her dream comes true and her dream boy proposes her??

Each and everything was written soo sooo sooo Beautifully ❤️

well as much as i love jeevika u guys make me envy her cuz of ur stories ... lol 😆

i really loved the ending bit ... the most adorable convo ...

Viren and Jeevika are truly made for each other!! n this OS proves the fact!! 👏

Not forgetting the name ... "Today was a Fairytale" ... i simply love the title and whats more awesome is that how u smoothly merged it with the story !! 👏

A FAIRYTALE INDEED! 😳

By this u took me to my Fairytale land where Viren and Jeevika became Virika as soon as Jeevika said yess!!

But yammie u made a mistake ... u already wrote in the story that they have a daughter and the fourth member is gonna come soon ... nd u didnt even tell much about them and made me all excited here ... so m not gonna spare u for that 😉

Mm gonna bug u until u update the next chap or i have a better idea ... y dun u just change it into an SS ... 😃

After reading ur update i am now sure that even i want someone like Viren to complete my fairytale ... Hayeee ❤️ or maybe Viren ... but jeevika is gonna kill me just like she wanted to do with that secetary plus i dun want anymore fights between my Virika 😉

A BIG BIG BIG THANKYOU for this Bonus Chapter !!

U deserve a hug!! 🤗

M sorry!! i might have used the word "Beautiful" a lottt but what to do ... it was just so

B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L ... 😉

I LOVED IT TO THE ORE N CORE ❤️

U r a wonderful writer and u must know it!! 😊

U nailed it Yammieee!! BINGO! 👏

Lots of Love!

Mirah!