Virika OS: Today was a Fairytale BONUS CHP-pg11

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ashna1406

@ashna1406

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

it was indeed a fairytale reading this <3 <3

omg fights <e

consolations <3

everything is just so perfect with virika around :D

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Ayesha

@--Ayesha--

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Awww such an cute n sweet update yaar❤️
Awesome update Yamz
luvd it 4m d starting to end just like an fairly tail
let it b d fight or dem missing each other badly or d surprise n d proposal.
Everyting was depicted sooo well
Awww virika were missing each other badly😒
monster,egg-head🤣
omg viren surprise was tooo die for first he kidnapped n thn he proposed her awww how adorable he is yaar❤️
ahem ahem viren ne kiss k baare main nahi bola😆
waise i was also waiting for d kiss😉
wow 4th member cumming awww😃
awesome update
thanx 4 d pm

Edited by --Ayesha-- - 12 years ago

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Charu

@-Charu-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

OMG! BF Jiii I can't tell you what I'm feeling after reading the update! This is sooo beautiful! I don't have time as I need to rush or else I would have give u big, bigger, biggest comment... Please don't be angry my love.. Love you and you write superb ❤️

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Aaliya

@-Aaliya.KryAn-

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Go to pg 11 😃

Edited by krystu05 - 12 years ago

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Roses Khushi

@Roses-khushi

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Update soon...waiting 😊

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madurifan

@madurifan

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

RES😃

Unres

Amazing...Awesome ..Super awesome..

Lovely update..

I'am Taekwondo Pink belt!😆😆😆 Where did u get this from ??

Laughing like mad over this line..

Continue pls ji..

Edited by madurifan - 12 years ago

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Kays94

@Kays94

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Yammie hands down you give the best bonuses and best surprises ever!!!

I love you so much for giving such a fabulous bonus to us on this as well

I don't know what everyone's problem is by not commenting on your awesome work,

but they are crazy 😆

I love you and I love everything you write!

Keep going and keep giving us more bonuses

Love you ❤️

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Aaliya

@-Aaliya.KryAn-

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: ElmWizard5015
no resing ...

already read it from iPod and now came online from laptop just to comment ...

Can i just say that u made me fall in love with and this beautiful OS!!

Well if i start writing adjectives i wont be able to stop ...
Awesome, Superb, Fantastic, Wonderful, Marvellous, Amazing and the list goes on and on ... but to tell u the truth this OS is way beyond all this ...

Still there is one word that automatically came out of my mouth just as i finished reading it ..

BEAUTIFUL !! BEAUTIFUL !! BEAUTIFUL !!

Well Hats Off to ur amazing mind 👏

U started it all with a fight ... this was something new and how beautifully did u sum it up!!

From Viren and Jeevika getting angry at each other to they realising their mistake ...
From them trying not to think about each other to ending up in missing each other ...
and atlast realising their importance in each others life infact that they are each others life ...

Hayeee 😳

Then coming to Viren kidnapping Jeevika to Jeevika hitting viren and then both of them apologizing each other!! 😊

Then coming to the proposal ... who wouldnt say yes to such an amazing proposal ???
who wouldnt have tears in her eyes when her dream comes true and her dream boy proposes her??
Each and everything was written soo sooo sooo Beautifully ❤️

well as much as i love jeevika u guys make me envy her cuz of ur stories ... lol 😆

i really loved the ending bit ... the most adorable convo ...

Viren and Jeevika are truly made for each other!! n this OS proves the fact!! 👏

Not forgetting the name ... "Today was a Fairytale" ... i simply love the title and whats more awesome is that how u smoothly merged it with the story !! 👏
A FAIRYTALE INDEED! 😳

By this u took me to my Fairytale land where Viren and Jeevika became Virika as soon as Jeevika said yess!!

But yammie u made a mistake ... u already wrote in the story that they have a daughter and the fourth member is gonna come soon ... nd u didnt even tell much about them and made me all excited here ... so m not gonna spare u for that 😉

Mm gonna bug u until u update the next chap or i have a better idea ... y dun u just change it into an SS ... 😃

After reading ur update i am now sure that even i want someone like Viren to complete my fairytale ... Hayeee ❤️ or maybe Viren ... but jeevika is gonna kill me just like she wanted to do with that secetary plus i dun want anymore fights between my Virika 😉

A BIG BIG BIG THANKYOU for this Bonus Chapter !!
U deserve a hug!! 🤗

M sorry!! i might have used the word "Beautiful" a lottt but what to do ... it was just so
B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L ... 😉

I LOVED IT TO THE ORE N CORE ❤️

U r a wonderful writer and u must know it!! 😊
U nailed it Yammieee!! BINGO! 👏

Lots of Love!
Mirah!