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SS88

@SS88

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#891

oh God, I do believe we got a sneak peak into a fangirl's hubby/boyfriend/fiance's mind. Good riddance? Haha. Oh I love this Payal. Angsty love is what has us hooked, even now, more than 6 months after the show ended. Lovely writing, Semanti.

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Itu

@simi58

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#892

aye hayeee adorable it was... *big wide grin*😃
poor payal.. and the cunning captains with their pressing appointments..😆 but she got her rabbaves too.. 😊
hehe arnav's jealousy turned relief was the cherry on the top in the update..😉
ok i am going to make a request here..😳 can we hv a part between payal and khushi where payal cud realize khushi is not actually a bride-zilla after all.. may b told by aman as i'd love to see some aman-khushi and of crs payal-khushi bonding.. just a thought though.. no pressure..😊

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#893

This, Sem, was marvellous!!!! The view that Payal had on Khushi was LOL!!!! And Vikram is cho chweet!!!!!

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Fau Zi

@lazylad8-FauZi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#894

Another great OS...did I read correctly that you were ending the Captain and wife series?????????

PLEASE DONT!!!!!!!!!

I want you to write more about their daugher Kaseerah!!!!!!!!

Her POV and all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please, please, PRETTY PLEASE!!!!!!!!😛

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#895

Hahaha Arnav is still jealous at the fact that his wifey loves Vikram Kapoor

awww Vikram and Payal are cute too

love everyones individual stories in this

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#896

Humph .

Edit:

Oh I just loved loved loved this one!

I loved the one gazillion digs at the show, and you know who.😆

The background score , indeed!

Also loved that you chose Ooty as the backdrop here, made things romantic in a way.

So Payal had her rabba ve moments on a phone, and ended up married to him!

My favorite part has to be the lines in the phone conversation where she reassures him that it's okay to be a soap star. LOL, S!

And finally, the Captain's insecurity comes to the fore, good riddance?!

Even after all this time?

Aur ab kya, just one more?

Edited by EXPELLIARMUS - 12 years ago

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#897

OMG, that was so adorable!

Especially the ending! I'm shamelessly biased when it comes to anav and Khushi so their bit was hilariously adorable and Payal and Vikram were plain cute. Bas.

Wonderfully written!

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GirlOfFire

@GirlOfFire

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#898

Loved it, Semanti. Love the weaving in of real and reel and fictional life all together. You know I'm a phangurl so there u go!

Sorry that its gonna be the penultimate one... but I'm still here!

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#899

res

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Another couple!🥳

It was adorable indeed of Payal to do a mental jig upon knowing that Vikram wasn'r getting married 😆 And then the way she 'consoled' him about not being embarrassed...hilarious!

He quit Tere Ishq mein?😲 And the show didn't end? *wink wink*

arnav's reaction to the wedding invite takes the cake...the sigh of relief must have been huge😆

Edited by Eccentrica - 12 years ago

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tabzz

@tabzz

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#900

Awesome 👏
Liked how Payal felt for Khushi and her family 😆

Vikram's warning to Payal to kiss her was just Awww 😳
Last scene of Arnav and Khushi was epic 👏

Edited by tabzz - 12 years ago