OS Series:The Life of Capt. & Mrs. Raizada#1 - Page 88

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Posted: 12 years ago
nani and naniji were so romantic - loved it semanti expel and semanti, u girls rock as always
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi. i ve read all the stories in this universe quite recently. n i have to say that i m in love with your writing style, your characterisation and most importantly your lavanya kashyap. she is a friend who.is not just a show piece like in many stories. she meddles, pushes n even gives khushi n arnav a kick in the butt when they are acting too stubborn or too foolish.
n its good to read a story in which arnav is not the broody silent hero. you've proved that a broody khushi n an optimistic arnav can work too. n we still have a glimpse of the serious, protective n dangerous asr who we all adore just as much when he deals with the creepy shyam manohar jha. who is still the same.
love ur works n keep the oneshots coming please.
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Posted: 12 years ago
so nice i loved it.. i am hiding between a rock and high water... IF is supporting me and keeping me sane.
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG what did i just read...Fabulous

Everytime i am simply left amazed and dazzled by the magic that you spin with all your tales and this one even though you say you are not completely satisfied, i can't help but fall in love with this.
I loved it and it was simply awesome.

I can't tell you what fun i had reading our beloved nani's love story, wow what a strong confident women she was and continues to be even today.
Noreen/ Devyani/Nani what ever you may call her she just makes you fall in love with her always without fail.

Loved it seemanti, sorry for putting an appearance so late but life got in way i tell you. So Sorry. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was beautiful! One of the best in this OS series!
I have always loved Nani's character in the show. She was an exceptionally strong, intelligent, grounded, loving and accomodating woman. I'm glad you gave her such a beautiful past. Given that past, I can let my imagination run wild and imagine her to have matured into the smart lady that she was in the show.
But the most beautiful part was the ending! I absolutely loved it! Although I'm not sure why you aren't happy about it because I think its just PERFECT!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Absolutely loved these they were amazing. Everyone was brilliant in its own way. Nani's love story was intriguing
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Posted: 12 years ago
UPDEX DAY? NEW THREAD DAY FTW.

Calling all spammers, trollers and stalkers.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jiska hai mujko intezaar (captain)...woh kaha hai?
Dekhu jidhar bhi (is thread pe)..woh milte nahi hai!

Khamosh kyu ho?
Jo bhi likhna hai likho!
Dil chaahe jitni comments utni maang lo!
Tumko milegi utni comments, Main Hu Na...



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Posted: 12 years ago
omg funny story, so I was checking through the IPKKND tag, and I saw your asrkkgftw blog, and I saw your story and I went batshit cray cray cause I thought someone was plagiarizing and I didnt know it was you, and I even wrote a strongly worded reblog reply, but just before I said anything I wanted to check out the blog and then *facepalm* I found out it was you all along... I would have looked like an idiot if I reblogged that. Also why am I never on time. It annoys me very much. Coming to the latest OS *sigh* No wonder Captain ji turned out so perfect, jaise dada ji waisa pota. This was such a beautiful story, about Nani. It broke my heart how she had to let go of her identity for her love, but I am not surprised at doing it, knowing that she had such a wonderful man who loved her. Nani ji is the best. Bas. I swear, if I were in her place, I wouldnt mind doing anything for someone who loved me so much. Semanti, girl how do you even write. You are the best.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: manjha

omg funny story, so I was checking through the IPKKND tag, and I saw your asrkkgftw blog, and I saw your story and I went batshit cray cray cause I thought someone was plagiarizing and I didnt know it was you, and I even wrote a strongly worded reblog reply, but just before I said anything I wanted to check out the blog and then *facepalm* I found out it was you all along... I would have looked like an idiot if I reblogged that. Also why am I never on time. It annoys me very much. Coming to the latest OS *sigh* No wonder Captain ji turned out so perfect, jaise dada ji waisa pota. This was such a beautiful story, about Nani. It broke my heart how she had to let go of her identity for her love, but I am not surprised at doing it, knowing that she had such a wonderful man who loved her. Nani ji is the best. Bas. I swear, if I were in her place, I wouldnt mind doing anything for someone who loved me so much. Semanti, girl how do you even write. You are the best.


Haha JenSen, I lau your vigilantism. Very Batman. And I'm proud.
It would have been HILARIOUS if you'd done it. I woulda reblogged you back with an awkward "Umm..Jen...it's me."

Thank you! 🤗
Edited by Semanti - 12 years ago

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