OS Series:The Life of Capt. & Mrs. Raizada#1

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InkyCupid

@InkyCupid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#901

Awesome update.

Love the theme of new love stories in every chapters. Payal and Vikram are so cute together, him stalking her is was downright adorable..and Khushi's tyranny is hilarious... and Arnav finally God rid of Vikram.. this story is like the picture of happiness, where every couple get's their happily ever after.Cant believe this is the second last chapter of this one shot series:(

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Anupama

@Anupama.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#902

The best part is the totally new couples you formed in this series who infact turn interesting coz you write it.
I loved this one too.. Payal and Vikram..band baaja baraat and rabba vey..
And ofcourse you are a pro at writing conversation and I cant seem to get enough of it. Very delightful and entertaining.

But nobody can take the cake away from Captain and his wife. Even with a special appearance..they got me amused. Khushi got so excited..lol..ofcourse..the hero has got his own love story..getting married and no 6 mahine contract..and now she and Anjali would be interested in revelling in his real love story.
For Arnav,good riddance really.. I loled at his expression while glancing at the wedding invite. :D he thought Khushi would be upset. Crazy,really.. :D

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

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Posted: 12 years ago

#903

I'm sure Arnav is happy now the threat of his wife drooling over and leaving him for Vikram is gone :-)

Loved Payal and Vikram's romance! I will be sad to see these end, but I'll be going back to reread, rest assured!

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Anukriti

@psychofool

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Posted: 12 years ago

#904

Vikram and Payal get married and Arnav finally takes a breath of relief looking at the wedding card. Another great update

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#905

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Can i just tell you here semanti that you create such awesome men...Wow

Capt Raizada, Aman Mathur, Neerav Kapoor and now Vikram Kapoor. Hai **i am dead**

So another couple gets their share of happy everlasting..

The capt and his mrs set for life, La and her aman also moving along, Vikram and Payal also take the plunge, i guess that leaves us with our dear anjali and Neerav also getting their share of the rainbow at the next one.

I loved this OS...the ever perfect hottie hero Vikram kapoor and the spirited Payal..

Perfectly written story...

But maybe you can leave this thread also open like 'Tales' and come back to this whenever something strikes...What say you?

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fraser

@fraser

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#906

Damn awsome chapter
payal n vikram
i love their convo on phone
waiting for nxt one

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-HEAVEN-

@-HEAVEN-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#907

Sob sob ... NAHIII!!!! captain k luv story khatam nahi ho sakta...yea prem kahani amar hae!!:(
Lol...varun n payal.. awsome couple...luved it. Lol...arnav asking khushi if she is upset!! That part was hilarious ;)

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rvas

@rvas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#908

so awesome...love all the love stories different and unique for each character and really brings to life how distinctly different each character and story s

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Uthra

@Viji79

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Posted: 12 years ago

#909

Good riddance? Insecure much captain?

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#910

Oh That was nice Semanti!

Yes it get to a closure of sorts!

I am quite happy to have been a part of the this journey though i boarded during the last few chaps! :) Nevertheless i am glad i did join at some point!

Thanks for a wonderful update! That was really a good one!