OS: Unconditionally Yours

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Posted: 12 years ago
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*PROLOGUE*
She looked beautifully breath-taking in the white lehnga I gifted her... I "voluntarily" lit up by just feeling her aura. The chaos in my surroundings suddenly got hushed up as if even the soft breeze which I felt, or maybe I thought I felt, was also ensnared by the innocence and purity she embodied-ZOYA ASAD AHMED KHAN!!
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As I entered the hall I suddenly started feeling a pleasantly overwhelming sense of security, which my life had deprived me of. I started looking for the source of this security... there he was. Looking at me with all that I could ask for from my man. He made me feel like a princess- delicate, loved and protected. I smiled seeing my Greek God smile, despite of himself- ASAD AHMED KHAN!!
______________________________________________________________________________ Hi guys.. I am new to the forum this was the mehndi scene... and my first OS. Please comment and reply so that I may continue. I am not going to create a story out of it just wanting to shre the most lovely emotion we humans are gifted with- THE FEELING OF LOVE. 🥱
Flashback: Pg. 1
Asad's & Zoya's POV: Pg. 2
Last Part: Pg. 2
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Posted: 12 years ago
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luvd it...continue 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great start😊
update soon
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*FLASHBACK*
DILSHAD: I am sooo happy for the two of you!!! Assaaad!!! Do din mein tumhara nikah hai!! (AsYa blushing).

NAJMA: Par ammi main do din tak wait nahi karne waali... main to abhi se Zoya ko bhabhi bulana shuru kar rahi hoon!!!

ZOYA: Aur main phoopi ko AMMI!!

ASAD: (without thinking much, totally impromptu and almost jumping) Aur main Ms. Farouqi ko Mrs. Khan!!!

Three pairs of female eyes were trying to hide their amusement seeing the MAN of their house behaving like... WELL!!! And one set of male eyes were trying hard to bring back the "sher" in him but only could only manage being a "bheegi billi"!! 😛

DILSHAD: (finally breaking the ice) Allah miyan what's wrong with my son!!! (seeing Asad blush all the more and get slightly annoyed she continued blabbering) He's making me all the more enthusiastic about the wedding!! Btw sorry for being the spoil sport but Zoya aur Asad ( eyeing them with admiration and pride) ab nikah hone tak tum dono nahin mil sakte--

ZOYA: WHAT??!! NO!!! (On realising her faux pas suddenly she became the "one-with-the-emotionally-challenged-dictionary") Woh-main-acc-actually

Asad seemed quite pleased now and was totally over his embarrassment... NOW THEY ARE EVEN!!!

NAJMA: (with a wink) Bhabhi don't worry... I'll cover up for you if you ever need me!!
Making Zoya turn crimson and Asad end up with a "Tamatar"

DILSHAD: well... well.. I don't know about the others (smiling mischeviously at AsYa) but I sure am totally exhausted with today's festivities!! So please excuse me.. I am off to bed. Aur ek bara yaad dila deti hoon... do din tak tum dono nahin miloge!! (a bit sternly)

Asad and Zoya had embarrassed themselves enough by now to actually over react once more. But their faces visibly fell as they retired to their bed rooms!! 😆
*FLASHBACK ENDS*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Do continue and please add update details to the thread title It will be easy for us to find it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OS: Unconditionally Yours

ASAD"S POV:
She smiled beautiful, she felt beautiful... her touch so soft, so comforting, so appealing, so sincere, so lovable, her presence so soothing... TWO DAYS!!!! I ran my fingers through my hair out of impatience... to say that i was getting restless would be an understatement.. no a FELONY!! Aadat si lag gayi hai mujhe uski, adhoorapan poora sa lagne laga hai mujhe... zindagi zinda si lagne lagi hai, hawaon se kuch alag si mehek aati hai- Zoya jaisi mehek aati hai unse- pani kuch aur behne laga hai aur nazare kuch aur khoobsurat ho gaye hain- JEENE SA LAGA HOON MAIN!! Par yeh do din ki pabandi!!?? Ya Allah... I have never behaved like a 17-year-old even when I was seventeen... Feel like breaking some rules Asad?? Allah Miyan what's wrong with you Mr. Khan!! Tehzeeb aapki copyright hai aur rules break karna Zoya ki... count on her to break Ammi's rules.. tum chinta mat karo wohi aaegi yahaan!! Par agar wo nahi aayi to!! Common Asad be a man.. you can climb out of the window into her bedroom's window...

ZOYA"S POV:
Mrs. Khan... MRS. KHAN??!! Mrs. & Mr. Khan??! Oh God Zoya... kya soche jaa rahi hain aap. ASAD!!!! There...sukun mila aapko?? Pata nahin kya hai unme jo mujhe apne aapko sawaarne ka man karta hai... unse judi har cheez ko apna banane ka man karta hai... un par haq jatana mujhe apna haq lagta hai... aur jab woh mujhe ye haq jatane dete hain to kyoon mujhe apni zindagi mukammal lagti hai?!!! Why do I fall in love in with him all over again every time i see him, every time i feel his touch, every time he smiles? Why do i feel so special these days?!!! Aur mujhe unse milne ka man kyoon kar raha hai???!!! Dekho Zoya... ammi ne mana kiya hai do din tak nahin mil sakte... par main do din tak unki shirt pe outline banane waale unke six-pack-abs ko dekhe bina kaise rahoongi??! "FACE PALM" 11 baj rahe hain I guess Mr. Disciplined Ahmed Khan ab tak so gaye honge.. mein chupke se jaa kar unhe sote hue daekh aa jaungi kisi ko pata nahi chalega...
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OS: Unconditionally Yours

IN ASAD's ROOM:
Zoya got in stealthily from the door (out of habit she was going to knock but cross-checked herself and prevented herself from doing so) she was careful not to make any noise. She froze. He was not there.. but she was. Seeing his room it felt like she had taken over and resided in his room way before the nikah. She walked to his bed where he was supposed to be asleep. But what she found there was something else. She saw a whole bunch of photos... her photos. One was focusing on her dimples, one showed her unlocking her iPad's password in her comic manner, there was one in which she was working on the "controversial" alarm system, and then one showed her stealthily getting into her Jahapannah's room through the window (maybe she was up to some detective work), in one she was eating a stale piece of pizza (the moment, with contentment on her face, at which he had captured it was lovely) and there was one in which she was pouting childishly (maybe they had fought) and one in which she was sitting at the bench facing his window with a soulful look on her face. He may not be verbal about his feeling but he clearly had proof for his passion, his love. He had caught all those moments which had made him fall in love with her. Worthy tears spilled from Zoya's eyes... and then she saw something... HER EARRING!! She picked it up a bit flustered and irritated at him for not having returned it to her earlier. But she immediately put it down as she realised there is no turning back... it rightly and unconditionally belonged to him.

IN ZOYA"S ROOM:
Asad first knocked on the window and then mentally whacked himself for doing so... rules are not to be broken with tehzeeb!! He pushed the window open and and what he saw inside scared him for a moment... she was not there!! But the fear lasted only for a second. Playing on her iPad was his video asking her not to leave India. He then saw the dresses he had gifted her with their respective boxes and notes on them, the notes were carefully cello-taped on their sides so that they may not tear. Just the way he filed important office documents. They had a possessive aura about them almost like these were hers without saying. His eyes fell on a withered rose carefully kept between a book. The rose he had given given her so that she would shut up about their engagement at his cousin's waleema. She had preserved it with utmost devotion. He opened the book which held her prized rose and what he saw and read there elated his being to a different level. A sentence. A sentence with a beautiful sketch of his etched right beside it: Mohobbat shauq se hoti hai, Iraadon se nahi. She had sketched every single feature of his face meticulously to perfection. And of course as he flipped though the book he saw many other sketches of his, and in most of them he was shirtless (no guesses here, all thanks to Zoya's imagination!!). But the most surprising part about them was that in all those sketches he was SMILING. He was a happy man. He liked this feeling. This feeling of being someone else's legacy... Zoya's legacy... he belonged to Zoya... he was unconditionally hers.
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There now it is complete... hope u guys liked my first OS. Please reply!! 😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awweee, that was super cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing !!!!! beautifully narrated their feelings 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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GUYS PLEASE TELL ME HOW IT WAS SO THAT I CAN WRITE MORE OFTEN!!! 🥱

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