SS- ONE NIGHT WITH THE ENEMY last chap pt-2 + epil - Page 29

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice chappy ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
bt 2222 many MUs
hope all gets cleared soon
bt wat is it about the messges ? 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: captainplus

nice chappy ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

bt 2222 many MUs
hope all gets cleared soon
bt wat is it about the messges ? 😕
tnx 4r the pm 😊

Yup i know tiooo many, bt wld try to clear them in nxt update😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
ouch that was sad but really a nice ud!!⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ifians

ouch that was sad but really a nice ud!!⭐️

waiting for next!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry for late commenting but i was busy in my examzzz
fantastic update
shit now both were drown in more misunderstandings
now what will abhay do to make piya miserable?
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bellaaa

sorry for late commenting but i was busy in my examzzz
fantastic update
shit now both were drown in more misunderstandings
now what will abhay do to make piya miserable?
cont soon

no problem, hope ur exams went well
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi guys, here again with yet another update. This is the longest update i've ever typed. Please ignore the mistakes as i typed through mobile:P


I'm not happy with the response, so I'm not sure whether or not to continue. When I'm working hard to write and type i expect the readers to at least hit the like button. Anyways i can't and won't force anybody.
This part is very badly written so if u have any doubts do ask me:D


CHAPTER 9


Abhay's mind was stuck in a trance. All he could think about was, what he could do with Piya. After so much of debating, he concluded that he would just try to taint her image in front of her husband. And this one time alone with him would be sufficient for it. But that question that followed in his mind was- could he really do this to her?

He had always seen her as a fragile porcelain doll, and he hated to admit, but even now he felt the same, even after her betrayal. There had been moments- the memory of which burnt him now for his naivety - when he's seen her hiding behind her mother, looking uncomfortable, meeting new people.


That was 1st time he'd seen her, Piya Jaiswal. Her father was working under his dad and hence the entire Jaiswal family was invited for the party at his mansion. They were a part of the family and Piya was dad's favourite- he would call her his daughter.


Abhay and Piya had always met formally at the beginning, but as time passed, the formality paved the steps for friendship which passed onto to liking and blossomed as love. But none of them had the courage to own up.

They met everyday, but only as friends. Abhay spoke to her of things he'd never told another soul. He shared with her the experiences of emotional isolations which he felt of never getting the live of his mother. Each day Abhay became more and more consumed by Piya Jaiswal. More and more entranced with her delicate beauty which was driving him senseless with growing desire. Yet he always maintained his distance, even when she would hug him to comfort him.

The depth of the sensual and sexual tension building between them tipped over on that day- the day his dad died.

When Abhay arrived at the party to find Piya waiting, he didn't speak, nor did she. In a trance they had started walking towards the beautifully lights-lit lawns of the mansion. The air quivered and vibrated with the awareness around them, and she was in his arms before he'd streched them out to pull her into them.

His mouth was on hers and she was clutching him as if she was drowning. They had finally shared their 1st kiss. But it did not last long as they were soon interrupted by Madhu Jaiswal. And then she was taken away...

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The evening had finally arrived and as promised, Abhay had sent a car to pick Piya up. She was dressed in a white long gown. Though being inappropriate in size, it still made no hindrance in making her look heavenly.

Entering his living room, Piya tried not to let Abhay Raichand see how affected she was by watching him walk towards her. He still had some spell over her, which was constantly trying to push her toward him. He smiled, playfully, as if ensuring her that he would not eat her up. But she didn't trust his urban charm, even for a second. Or perhaps she did.

His eyes were like shards of ice and she shivered imperceptibly." Why did you invite me here?" She asked as he stepped closer to her.

Quick as a shot he spoke. "You look...beautiful."

Piya flushed. Of all the things he could have said, he uttered this. She was sure he was up to something, seeing his pleasant side. But what?

Ignoring the fear she felt and Abhay's constant glaring, she started walking towards a silent, dimly lit living room, full of luxuriously stuffed couched and rosewood furniture, making her way to get seated on one of them.

Suddenly she felt hot breath on her nape and a hand sliding through her waist. Her breast thumped hard in her chest as she realized his touch and presence behind her. Seeing Abhay up so close, like this had affected her more deeply than she liked to admit. Her legs suddenly felt weak, and she found herself loosing her balance.

Abhay sensed this change in a body and held her more tightly. He did not want to admit, but holding her up so close was madding, it was making him forget his real motive. He called up every shred of self- control and smiled. But it was brittle.

Not leaving Piya's waist, Abhay guided her towards the garden, which was beautifully lit by lights and at the centre a round table and two chairs were placed, with candles flickering and leading to a seductive atmosphere. He made her sit on one of the chair and spoke in best fake-caring way he could. "You should take care of yourself, specially in such condition." His jaw was gritted of being reminded of her pregnancy.

Piya looked up at him confusingly. Firstly she was irritated with her heart and body responding in a total opposite way she wanted it to- boiling hot at his touch. Secondly, his out-of-subject comments which were driving her mad.


The food and the wine was served and the two started eating, stealing secret glances of eachother. Abhay watched as candlelight played over Piya's skin, casting her skin into mysterious shadows. Her cheekbones stood out. Her lips looked ripe and full. The white cloth on her chest, made her assets look beautiful. He was transfixed by her natural beauty and innate earthly sexiness. But all of a sudden those thoughts broke as the image of her with Kabeer in the same bed crossed his mind.

Abhay's mouth quickered." So what have you told your husband, whom are you meeting?" he smiled, mischievously. " I'm sure you've not told him that you're meeting me." he asked playfully, feeling confident about what she would answer.

But much upto his suprise, she looked up at him, with an expression Abhay couldn't understand. "Is this some kind of joke?"

Abhay was innocence personified. " Why would it be a joke?"

Piya was vibrating with tension now. " You're saying I'm married? Who told you that? You are testing my patience Abhay." She put down her spoon and stood up.

Abhay's hand snaked out and caught her wrist. " Sit down. Please." She looked at him and tried to pull her wrist out of his grip. He smiled ruefully. " I think i have the wrong information?"

Piya pulled her wrist free finally but didn't sit down. She looked at Abhay with the most haughty expression. " Of course you do."


Abhay frowned. This information changed everything. " So you're not married to Kabeer." He spoke, but mostly to himself. A smile crossed his face. This time it was a genuine one. He felt happy and relaxed.

"No." Snapped Piya. " Kabeer is my good friend." Seeing his facial expression which looked calm, she added. " I think the one who gave you the information, did not do his homework properly and provided you with the wrong name. Kabeer is married to Misha and they are soon expecting their 1st child." Speaking about the couple brought a smile to her face.

Then Abhay's comment, ' You should take care of yourself, specially in such condition' played through her mind and she sat down abruptly and started laughing.

Abhay's eyes were focused on her face. He was horror struck by this new development. He felt guilty about his earlier thoughts to destroy her image, but seeing her laugh, he couldn't help himself from smiling and asking. " What happened?"

"You thought i was pregnant." It was more of a statement than a question. " Do i even look like one." And she again bursted out laughing. Abhay nodded a no weakly but soon started laughing with her. It was after a very long time the two were laughing together. They were so lost into eachother that for some time they forget the bitter memories.

Abhay inclined his head and thought of asking her about those messages. "So what did you do these years and why are you here now?" Probably this was the best way to start a serious conversation, Abhay thought.

Piya smiled. " After working for you, i had to leave abruptly for some urgent work." She was in no way going to admit that she was broken when T had reveilled Abhay's cruel intensions.

"I went to Pune and there met Kabeer and Misha. I don't know whether or not you remember Misha. She was my school friend, but due to her father's transfer they shifted to Pune." She looked at Abhay, trying to get through his emmotions, cause it was after a very ling time they were discussing past, and that too without any complications. He was busy thinking something, but she couldn't deciphers what.

The name Misha triggered some images in Abhay's mind of a young gorl, crop- short hai, slim and beautiful in her own way. She was a tom-boy then. And this was something unexpected that she was married now. Abhay smiled.

Getting a green signell by Abhay's smile Piya continued. " There i worked in an orphanage which Kabeer is running and i also helped him in his business in the finance department, untill..." she stopped. Suddenly it struck her that according yo Kabeer, Abhay was responsible for that game plot which led to his business downfall. But now, sitting here she did not want to believe it. Whatever he wanted to do with her was out of revenge. Revenge for a big loss in his life. He might hate her, but could never do wrong with otjers. This much she knew about him. He was always the kind-caring-helping one.

Carefully Abhay asked. "Until?"

Piya wanted to refuse, to tell him its nothing, but she herself wanted to know if Abhay was anyhow responsible for it. "Until you payed money to the union leader of his company to go on strike. The strike took a violent turn and the infrastructure, the machines were all badly damaged." Her mouth tighten. She did not want to elaborate the scene cause she knew, being in business he would understand such things prerty well.

Abhay's face was expressionless. He knew he was not a part of any of such things. Of couse he was interested in that land, but never intended to get hold of it in such a manner. It was against his principles. " What about those messages?" He asked, not caring about what Piya thought at the moment.

His sudden question about those messages was enough for Piya to confirm that Abhay had no clue about the entire thing. She smiled. It was an assurance to her tgat it was the same old Abhay. No matter how ruthless and heartless people called him, he was none of those. " Due to the damage Kabeer suffered a huge loss. And at the same time pressure was put on him from your side to sell off his land to your company. He was reluctant, and then those messages stating that if he doesn't, things would turn out fatal." She spoke.

Abhay's hands tighten into a fist. " Piya you've got to believe me, i never sent those." He uttered the same in low pleading voice. For dome reason dod not want to taint his image in her eyes. " I think i know who it is, but would confirm it for myself." He was very furious now, over T. How could she take such a drastic step, without informing him. He had to look into that matter soon.

"I know."

Abhay looked at Piya's face, not believing what he'd just heard. Her face had a smile on it. It was a relief to know that she believed him, inspite of the not)-so-good things going on between them. " But since it was done by somebody from my company, I'm equally responsible." His principles mattered a lot to him. " Tell me, what can i do to help you guys?"

Piya felt greatfull but shook her head. " I don't think Kabeer would take your help. He's a self-made man Abhay and for him his pride is the top most priority."

Abhay was furious at Kabeer's name. He was jealous of him cause she spoke so high about Kabeer. Friend or not, Abhay did not like that guy, specially since he'd touched Piya. They didn't seem like friends the way he'd toughed her with such authority. Ok, he was Misha's husband, but that did not give him the license to touch Piya. And the way he was trusting her with his business, Piya being here with him, when Misha was not, all this way no way normal. Right? What if their relationship was more than just friends? Even Kabeer had said in the party that Piya was important to him. These questions and thought and thoughts flooded Abhay's mind.

Somebody had rightly said ' Jealousy is the biggest evil in human life.'

" Its good we have sorted out many things. I think i should leave now, its getting late. Thank you so much for the lovely dinner." Piya wanted to leave as soon as possible. The confirmation about Abhay not being involved in the entire incident had made Piya's heart flutter with happiness. Her heart was going somer-salts in her chest. The entire time she was fighting not to let Abhay see how he was affecting her. Without thinking much, Piya got up from the chair and started moving, only to be stopped by a hand on her wrist. Her heart jumped at his touch. Oh not again! She thought.

Abhay flushed as he pulled her towards him, facing her, their bodies almost touching. Uncomfortably, looking into her eyes he spoke, " Why is Kabeer so generous with you Piya? Its more to you two that you're reveilling, right? You like him?" he said bitterly. He went cold for a second before he spoke." Or perhaps you seduced your way to let your living and his generosity?" He had never behaved with a woman like this. But no other woman pushed his buttons like this one did. The problem was that Kabeer and Piya sharing some secret relationship was turning the senses in his mind up side down.

For a moment it looked like Piya wouldn't answer. But then she did. Her voice was syiff. She shook with impotent rage. " That's right Abhay. I seduced him into giving me a living. I'm that good in bed, that he's so generous to me." Shr crossed her hands over her chest.

His eyes narrowed on her. Driven by the wave of ambiguous anger, Abhay spoke." You did not." It was only a statement to himself.

Piya just stood silent. So this was how he rated her. He thought her to be so cheap. " YES I DID." She spoke again, but with more force this time, making her each word herd correctly. If this was what Abhay thought about her and wanted to hear, then this was what she was going to say. And saying so she turned to leave, feeling rage and humiliation.

"Not so soon, Jaiswal. We have unfinished business-" Abhay pulled her back, harshly. He smiled, and it was the smile of a predator. Before Piya could have even registered his act and properly taken his words, his head descended and his hard mouth pressed against her. For a second Piya had no reaction except numb shock. And then the sensation exploded in her body- hot and urgent.

Desperately she tried to cling onto reality and not let that hot urgency take over her need to stay immobile and unresponsive. But the overpowering urge took away her rationale thinking. Her hands clung onto his biceps, her whole body arched into his...

Their tongues dwelled needly, in a hoy swirl. And then abruptly Abhay put her away from him with both hands. " I got my answer. You were right." He spoke bitterly. " Get out of here, Piya." He shouted.

Piya looked up, shocked, hurt and bewildered. She saw blood on his lips. She had bitten him. He was just trying yo satisfy his need and thinking and that's why he'd kissed her. She turned and without looking back, ran out of the mansion, with heavy eyes.

Edited by jack-12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update but abhay seriously has some trust issues.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Abhay really has some talking to do with Piya now. I'm waiting to see him confront T :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
God tat was awesome...
How could he think of her like tat... But cant say anything cos tat is wat he thinks of her...
But it seems she knows more abt abhay better than him...
Nice part

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