Swaron Os:- Blessed to have you last part pg6 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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veryyy cute update...[BR][BR][BR]the diva prposed lover boy



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Edited by swaronlove001 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@all- Guys i am overwhelmed with the comments .. Thank you so much for such lovely encouragement.. keep doing that to me... ek aur bakwaas part leke aayi hi.. this is the last part of the OS jo maine ab likha hai... sowieee bahut bada waala for getting late... 😳.. Plz do read it and tell me how is it???


so last part


Part 3


Whole gang somehow came to know about what was bothering her.. Everybody was hell shocked hearing Sharon's asthma and her being away from dance... Now she dint need to paste a plastic smile on her face to show everyone that she is happy because she was not. She was upset and it was visible to everyone... All her friends could see she being getting away from life and happiness.. Although Swayam was there but something was incomplete. None of the 11 could bear it.. So they decided to cheer her up.. They made a plan to cheer her up...

Next morning whole gang went to her place... she opened the door looking all dull and weak. Swayam could sense the spark out of her eyes and she was standing there all shocked.

All- Hey Sharon !!!

Sharon- Hey Guys.. you people here??? Have we got another assignment.. i don't know about it...

Rinni- Oh Sharon... work work work.. we are here to have some fun..

Nil:- now can we get in???

Vicky- Ya shar bahut bhukh lagi hai..

Sharon (letting them in)- Arggghhh don't tell me guys ki tumne mere hi ghar pe khud ko breakfast ke liye invite kar liya...

Rey –Common Shar ye sab yo yo talks band karo and get ready..

Sharon- get ready for what???

Rey- Oh Sharon... kitne questions... Girls over to you...

All girls dragged her to her room ...

Sharon- guys plz i dun wanna go anywhere... plz let me be.. you ppl continue..

Simmi- Shar we have to follow orders and according to Rey.. we need to get you ready and we are going.. thats not a question its an instruction rather... girls select outfit for her... you go to washroom lazy brat.. go fast...

Sharon was left with no choice so she turned to leave to washroom but turned around to see all girls checking out her wardrobe to select a dress for her and arguing over it.. she smiled to have a bunch of friends like them.. she left to washroom...

After almost one hour all the girls came downstairs and guys who were tired of waiting were on the verge of outburst..

Bharat- bey tum log kya paka rahe the upar...

Amar- mujhe to laga ti hum tal jaayenge...

Nil- seriously man you girls will never change...

Vicky- ab tak to hum kahan pahunch gaye hote???

Rey and Swayam were quiet and were smiling.. coz if they would speak they could face the consequences from their respective girls...

Girls- Shut up guys... Are you guys coming with us or should we leave on our notice...

Sharon- but hum jaa kahan rahe hain?? Koi batayega????

Taani- surprise hai !!!

Neha- Hmm humare liye bhi boys surprising hume...

Sharon- (sighed) cool... let's go then... But wait let me take my SUVlll we all wont get fit into rey's car...

Swayam:- umm no need for that... tum bahar to chalo...

Sharon:- ohkkayy???

They all went outside her home...

Rey:- Here comes our sawaari...

All looked into the direction and saw a mini bus coming their way...

All got a smile on their faces and Taani jumped to Rey and held his arm and said jovially...

Taani:- Rey you are best...

Seeing so Swayam cleared his throat and Rey looked at him and said..

Rey:- Taani control... ye best of the best idea mera nahi tumhaare bhai ka tha... har baar kaam woh karta hai aur credit koi aur le jaata hai.. so praise him not me...

Taani :- mere bhai to hain hi best...

Sharon looked at Swayam who was not liking the convo as he is conserved types and smiled to see the love of her life looking so adorable...

Sharon:- guys chuck it... cant you see Swayam who is pissed...

All looked at Swayam and giggled..Swayam looked at Sharon who was smiling and got lost...

Vicky:- Yaar humari to koi importance naam ki cheez hi nahi hai...

Neha:- nahi babu aisa nahi hai...

Rey:- uhu uhu uhu.. Guys baaki ki glances on the way steal kar lena ab chalein???

Swaron smiled and went into the bus and they left...

Sharon:- but guys hum jaa kahan rahe hain?? Koi mujhe batayega???Rey???

Rey:- no..

Sharon:- Swayam batao na...

Swayam:- (how could he deny to her) Goa ja rahe hain hum..

Sharon:- whattt???

All boys slapped their heads and gave a deadly look to Swayam and girls got exited...

Swayam looked at them apologetically as they all were ghoorying him..

Seeing all happy singing and dancing in the bus Sharon reminded her sorrow.. her smiling face turned into an upset one not going unnoticed by her lover boy who was continuously looking at her... He understood that only going to Goa would not ease her pain but he'll have to make sure she resumes her dancing which is the only way to get her out of the turmoil she is going through.. The bus stopped at the midway resort for some rest and Swayam took Rey to a side and told him his plan and told him to make sure everyone else except Sharon is well aware of the plan they are going to execute.

Vicky:- yaar lagi hai..

Amar:- bey to ja na lagi hai to...

Nil:- kaunsi waali lagi hai

Bharat:- haan bey 1 ya 2..

Vicky:- nahi 1 ya 2 nahi poori 12..

All boys :- 12???

Vicky:- haa lagi hai na wahan???

Nil:- cheee!!! Kahan

Vicky:- wahan corner me dekh 12 sitter table ...

All boys:- table???

Vicky:- haan table yaar.. chalo stop talking nonsense yaar

Nil:- tu table ke bare me bol raha tha?? Hattt

Girls were pissed with their usual nonsense talks so they chucked it and were indulged in their gossips..

Rey and Swayam indicated Gang to include Sharon with them as she was upset..

Simmi:- Sharon u dint say anything about my dress...

Sharon just smiled merely and nodded..

Rinni:- Sharon tum mujhe to bhul hi gayi ho.. after all mai bhi tumhari bff hoon..

Bharat:- bey ye khud ko hi gaali de rahi hai..

Amar:- ae woh gaali nahi hai.. tuccch bhi...

Bharat:- tujhe mirchi q lag rahi hai bey??Rinni ka deewana...

Sharon just smiled to Rinni and nodded in a yes..

they started their whispering

Neha:- neha not knowing Sharon maun vrat keeping...

Girls:- what??

Vicky:- she means to say silence oath or something like that...

Girls:- ohhh !!!

Still they weren't getting any response from her... Even her order was decided by Simmi. Seeing Sharon so upset none of them was feeling nice. She was an integral part of them and they loved the Sharon who shouts at them not the one who sits quietly playing with the fork and not even reacting to the rubbish acts of them... Everyone was restless..

Swayam later ensure them that he'll talk to her...

It was night when they reached their farmhouse on one of the beaches of Goa.. Everybody was excited to see the site of the place.. Even Sharon was mesmerized by the look.. only she knew how much she loves beaches.. The calm the composure the comfort the relief if she feels elsewhere than Swayam's arms was a beach only…

Everyone slept in their respective rooms when Sharon noticed everyone in their dream world she sneaked out of the house just to be alone for sometime coz she knows her friends would be worried for her and they won't let her alone at all...

She went to the beach and stood there staring at coming and leaving waves... Due to wind it seems that the waves were dancing.. She smiled at the word Dance.. The sole reason for her existence.. her life her passion her obsession even sometimes.. She smiled at how she use to find out tactics to hide their routine from their rivals i.e. Swayam's team... Swayam... a rival... she giggled.. he has always been there for her..his one thought refreshes her mood and brings a smile on her lips... she never was able to find how does he manage to rule her.. she was with him now forever and the reason she is with him is dance anyways... but the fact was she isn't allowed to dance... by the doctor or by the destiny she didn't know but she couldn't dance anymore... And this thought was eating her up from inside... She couldn't see her friends tensed for her but couldn't help out.. Coz it was a feeling for her that somebody is taking her own body part away from her without even allowing her to stop...She sighed and looked upwards... there was a cloudy sky.. no stars... She kept looking at the clouds moving... she thought "Look even clouds are dancing"... She again sighed and kept looking at the endless sea when she felt a pair of arms covering her waist.. his touch was well known for her so she didn't turn just smiled and moved colser.. He kept his chin on her shoulder and looked her.. her smile wasn't reaching her eyes.. he knew it so he decided to talk..

Swayam:- Someone is looking so Khubsurat in this moonlight...

She smiled but after a second her smile turned into a frown...

Sharon:- what do you mean?? Baaki saare times me ugly dikhti hoon...

She distant herself from him and started walking...

Swayam:- are nahi Siren.. i meant more beautiful...

Saron:- rehne do tum to...mai samajh gayi.. you find me ugly... Sharon Rai Prakash tumhe ugly dikhti hai.. how dare you?? Jaao i am not talking to you...

Swayam:- i just love this Sharon...

Sharon:- this Sharon?? What do you mean by this Sharon??

Swayam:- my siren Sharon... who doesn't care in which direction earth is rotating.. she would do whatever her heart asks her to follow... chaahe sari duniya bhaad me jaaye...

His words forced her to think.. Was she living her life on the tunes of others.. wasn't she following her heart?? Off course she was coz she is with her love.. but dance.. it is also her love.. and she wasn't following it.. that means she isn't following her heart completely... Has she changed???

Seeing her lost in thoughts he smiled.. he knew her.. he knew what was she thinking.. he went upto her and held her hand...

She looked at him with questioning eyes and he said..

Swayam:- you are Sharon my love.. and Sharon is not any random girl but an inspiration...

She kept her head on his shoulder and they kept on walking on the beach side...

Sharon:- ek minute... agar mai change ho jaaungi to tum mujhse pyar nahi karoge???

Swayam smiled and acted as if he is thinking.. Sharon hit him with her foot and ran away shouting

Sharon:- tumhe mujhse pyar karna hoga Swayam... hamesha.. warna aise hi maar khaoge...

Swayam smiled and shouted

Swayam:- Sharonnn ruko mai batata hu tumhe abhi

He ran behind her and she ran... her giggles were a melody to his ears.. After their run and catch game they both sat as Sharon couldnt afford much running... Swayam circled his arm around her and Sharon kept her head on his shoulder...

Sharon:- Swayam... i feel complete in your arms...but still something is pinching my heart...i don't know but something is missing

Swayam:- you know love what is missing...

Sharon looked at his eyes and he nodded.. she again got lost in her thoughts of being away from dance... her second life... but his words had laid an mark on her thoughts of brain to follow her heart ...

Continued Below

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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Next Morning

At that moment she was confused and when Sharon is confused no one could help to take her out of her thoughts..

They all decided to go to an orphanage first so that may be with the children she could get normal coz the motto to coming to goa was Sharon's happiness.. After reaching orphanage they gotta know that they all are taking kids for a picnic so they asked the authorities to accompany them... they agreed...

At the beach a spot for picnic all the kids were around with colourful balloons toys candies and everything colourful around her.. but she was still a lil upset...

Gang was unable to think what to do to cheer her up... Swayam and Rey looked at each other and smiled

Reyam:- mil gaya idea...

They all go into a group hug position aur ideaaa...

Music

Sharon was sitting on a rock alone lost in thought when at some distance she saw her gang coming towards her running.. she was startled..

Then from left enters our majnu

Swayam:- Chak De Chak De Chak De
Chak De Saare Gam

From right..


Rey:- Chak De Chak De Chak De
Tere Sang Hai Hum


She looked at them and frowned and got up and started to move in opposite direction when again they came to shock her

Rey shuddered her shoulders


Rey:- Haske To Dekh Tu Ek Baar
Khudh Hi Aa Jaayegi Phir Bahaar

Swayam kept his arm around her...


Swayam:- Haske To Dekh Tu Ek Baar
Khudh Hi Aa Jaayegi Phir Bahaar
Gaa Le Nayi Sargam
Geet Ek Naya Gaa


Rey:- Aaya Naya Mausam
Aaya Din Naya


Whole gang and kids started dancing with the pompoms

Gang:- Chak De Chak De Chak De
Chak De Saare Gam
Chak De Chak De Chak De
Tere Sang Hai Hum

She saw them with utter shock...

Gang:- Chak De Chak De Chak De
Chak De Saare Gam
Chak De Chak De Chak De
Tere Sang Hai Hum


Sharon rolled her eyes and started to move again when Nil and Vicky came from behind held her both arms and carried her where in front amar and bharat were sitting like horses and Nil Vicky made Sharon stand on them.. she was about to fall when Neha and Simmi held her from behind...

Standing on Amar and bharat she saw her best friend coming forward and swaying while singing…

Rey:- Chehd De Dhun Woh Aaj Cha Jaaye Mastiya
Chod De Khulke Aaj Lehron Mein Khashtiya

Swayam was standing folding his arms and looking at his friends and Sharon's expressions…


Rey:Chehd De Dhun Woh Aaj Cha Jaaye Mastiya
Chod De Khulke Aaj Lehron Mein Khashtiya

He moved towards her, gets her down from amar and bharat and they acted as if they were loaded with a heavy sack and Sharon hit them.. Rey stop her to spare both of them and then held her hand for dance and started moving her with him…

Rey: Thokhar Mein Masti Ho
Dangar Bhi Joomein
Mann Bhi Thirakh Jaaye
Badal Ko Chumein

She freed herself and was about to walk again when the whole gang came forward and started to sing and dance again…


Gang:- Chak De Chak De Chak De
Chak De Saare Gam
Chak De Chak De Chak De
Tere Sang Hai Hum
Chak De Chak De Chak De
Chak De Saare Gam
Chak De Chak De Chak De
Tere Sang Hai Hum


She couldn't control her tears now.. she couldn't find Swayam as well. Her eyes started brimming with tears and she started walking in another direction.. gang was upset seeing her like that..

Swayam couldn't see this so he moved forward and circled his arms around her… As soon as she found him she hugged him and burst into tears… Swayam caressed her back…

When she stopped crying and let out all her pain he wiped her tears and cupped her face and nodded for a No…

He held he both hands and started to move in circles…


Swayam:- Yeh Hawa Tere Paas Aake Hai Beh Rahi
Jhum Le Mere Sang Khaano Mein Keh Rahi
Yeh Hawa Tere Paas Aake Hai Beh Rahi
Jhum Le Mere Sang Kaano Mein Keh Rahi


She looked at him in aww… And then she looked at her friends who were trying to make sure she is okay or not…

Swayam picked her in his arms and twirls her around..

Swayam:- Lehrake Balkhake Muskarake Jee Le
Peele Hawaon Ko Ghunganake Dheele


He kept her down and she again started to walk away…


Gang:-
Chak De Chak De Chak De
Chak De Saare Gam

Chak De Chak De Chak De
Tere Sang Hai Hum
Chak De Chak De Chak De
Chak De Saare Gam
Chak De Chak De Chak De
Tere Sang Hai Hum


She now shouted..

Sharon;- Guys stoppp!!!!

Everyone got more upset and turned around to leave.. She looked at their leaving figures.. She looked at all of them upset and realized her rejoining dance is the key of happiness to all of them and even to her.. Swayam's words were ringing in her ears…

"Listen to you heart"

She smiled to herself and looked up to thank god for giving her such a caring boyfriend such a cute bunch of friends..

She started to sing opening her arms wide…
Sharon:- Sach Hai Yeh Bas Ek Baar Milti Hai Zindagi
Karwatein Badal Ti Hai Pal Pal Yeh Zindagi

All of them stopped in their tracks and turned around to find her looking at the sky singing and smiling…


Sharon:- Sach Hai Yeh Bas Ek Baar Milti Hai Zindagi
Karwatein Badal Ti Hai Pal Pal Yeh Zindagi

The smile on all of their faces returned… Sharon while singing went to them..

She hugged Rinni Simmi Neha Vishaka .. She cupped Taani's face and knuckled Amar Bharat Vicky and Nil and hugged Rey and finally hid herself in Swayam's chest..


Sharon:- Har Pal Ko Ghale Se Haske Laga Le
Pal Pal Mein Chupi Jo Khushiya Chura Le

All of them jumped with joy and started running here and there with happiness….

All of them including Sharon started to dance while singing..

All:-
Chak De Chak De Chak De
Chak De Saare Gam
Chak De Chak De Chak De
Tere Sang Hai Hum
Chak De Chak De Chak De
Chak De Saare Gam
Chak De Chak De Chak De
Tere Sang Hai Hum


Rey came and make a smiling figure from his fingers and sang

Rey:- Haske To Dekh Tu Ek Baar

Swayam spread his arms to show her the coming spring as she was smiling now..


Swayam:- Khudh Hi Aa Jayegi Phir Bahaar

She smiled full heartedly.. this time her smile reaching her eyes and she had got true happiness…


Rey:- Gaa Le Nayi Sar Gam
Geet Ek Naya Gaa

Swayam:- Aaya Naya Mausam
Aaya Din Naya

All-
Chak De Chak De Chak De
Chak De Saare Gam
Chak De Chak De Chak De
Tere Sang Hai Hum
Chak De Chak De Chak De
Chak De Saare Gam
Chak De Chak De Chak De
Tere Sang Hai Hum
Chak De Chak De Chak De
Chak De Saare Gam
Chak De Chak De Chak De
Tere Sang Hai Hum
Chak De

Although she was still a lil worried about rejoining dance but to her dismay his suggestion of joining and restarting dance all over again became a ray of hope for her to live... Again yet again he was the one who gave her what she wanted.. She realized how much he knows her.. And he was more concerned for her then she herself was. She was feeling alive.. She was feeling contented. And she was feeling blessed.

Blessed to have him...

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Guys plz do tell me how was it?? crticsm is more than welcome as well... plz do press like and do comment...


Sakshi 😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Lovely update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Awesome update... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
lovely updatešŸ˜› WOW...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Such a cute end to this adorable OS,...

Loved the way Swayam..Rey and gang cared about her..

The beach portion was magical...i could visualize Swaron...

Loved the song sequence ...well written...

Cute..adorable..simple and it made me smile šŸ˜ŠšŸ˜³šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘

Do write more swthrt
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Sakshi...tht was the most beautiful update which can b given to such nicely thought nd written story...sharon's pain, her insecurities, her heart missing dance...everything can b felt by the reader...luv hw whole gng wants to bring their sharon back...swayam's idea f goa knwing sharon feel comfortable near beach was wonderful...swayam making sharon realise her abt her passion fr dance, to follow her heart was so beautifully penned down...finally last song was cherry n cake...

So thnk u fr so wonderful os nd keep writing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Sakshi thats was lovely OS dear luv it...

Last update was very cute one cheering up mission...

synchronisation of song with cute gang active was really amazing.. 🄳
thnx for pm

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