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Posted: 12 years ago
No nupur today but still it was lovely
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nively written Fiza 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey api 😊
wonderful update⭐️
u know i read 3 time than i understand🤣
such api u r intellectual princess😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u sooo Soo mucch for Each and evry update amazing lvd my Jhasi ki rani
And Super cop Mayank :) AMazing Updatess fizz u r jst amazing and CSI my fav :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
plz update this ff dear
eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
I m really sorry ..though i thought this ff will end last week of may as only 3 chpaters are left more... but me being to irregular has cost a big delay...plus i m suffering from wirters block..speically at Once upon... i havent been able to wrtie anything... so my trying to get back.. hope i get back soon...
its a short ..non checked upadate... as the attack i donot want to spoil adding here... will update soon the next..if sumhow i forget..pls remind me any one of u...pls


Chapter: 14

Benji: I have finalized 30 ..commandos for the action… and a van will b there in parking area ..jaha mein honga

Samrat: per yeah waha tak pochy ga kasay

Mayank: simple waha bht saray media vans hain… ek aur sahi.. parking area mein koi allowed nhi hai .. but army and commandos k ek force parking area se charo taraf airport per hai… aur waha army k communication van bhi hai…

Benji simply army uniform mein waha tak pochaya jay ga

Benji: mein diya ko bhi lay jaraha hoon sath

Mayank?samrat: WHT… are u nuts

Benji: aram se she is programmer akelay hum do log handle nhi ker pay ga… quick access k liyan ek programmer aur chaiy

Mayank: thik hai are u sure she will handle the pressure…

Benji; han she will plus us ko hum bahar nikly gay hi nhi k usko koi training chaiy ho

Samrat: thik hai..but for safety ek gun tu us k pass hona chaiy….

Mayank: thik force ko ready kero and u guys also get ready … hum teen com aur major ko mein brief kerta hoon plane… us k within 4 mins humain us sewerage line k andar hona hai… to over cum any chances of information leaking

Benji u will go with major with diya..

Benji: oky…

Mayank: guys be very careful… we cant shot..unnecessarily … and we have to be very careful n quite until we get a hold on all terrorist… samrat yeah baaat jis team ko tu handle keray ga us ki bhi samjhy ga….

Samrat: so we are done here…lets get ready and we have go to the hotel…

Mayank: best of luck guys… go rock

Benji: n donot worry bhabi ko tu aj hum sahi salmat ghar aay gi..

Mayank: he smile…. Yup…

Dressing themselves in bullet proofs… putting arms all around them… making themselves fully equipped…connecting eachother ..they move towards the hotel with those commandos who were not informed anything about the mission ..just asked to be highly equipped and ready…

Reaching the hotel they moved near the room whos sewerage lines were already digged to make It open… it was the main line… a huge main line ..tht it can easily be used as the way to airport…

Designing the airport this line was specially and purposefully made so ..so tht any miss hap in airport this can be a secret passage to it…. Nupur's idea at very early stage of her career today made things very easy to reach there….

Mayank: hello all…. We are here to attack the airport to safe all people out from there..according to our plan..

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We will use this sewerage line to reach the airport center lounge washroom and from there we will attack ….

There five wings … and we are gonna divided at once to all five wings… so tht they dono get any chance to react…

The major area is this center lounge wch has hostages and most of the terriost and head.. first wing ki taraf hum sirf do commandos jay ga( as 5 person are there) , seoond wing will have 3… u 4 … third per just one of u…. and fourth per 10 of u.. as waha we think kafi zayda loog hongay .. terrorist kafi well equipped… so u 10 who are highly equipped and well trained u will go.. me samrat and u 8 left will enter the center area as soon as the first 2 wings we hear will get cleared…

But before there …we will very quietly without taking any actions will surround center lounge… aur wha ja ker hi hum dekh sakty hain k how we will react to it… as hum fire open nhi kerskaty…

The only thing we can do is tht we will spread gases to make them un conscious… yes it will effect hostages too but tht is the only thing we can do… but this will also make them hyper and alert ..and they will run towards us or may open fire.. do not fire back until ur sure tht u will kill the terrorist not the hostage.. thn shout ..b very sure..oky

Yes sir..

Mayank: major u have to make sure tht a aircraft will be surveillance the airport to stop any plane to fly off..

Major: u donot worry abt tht.. we have two planes doing so and we are fully ready to take any actions on ur call…

Mayank: its almost 15 mins walk to tht place but we have to b quick as quick we can.. evry thing clear

Yes sir…

Mayank: benji go n take ur position… benji hugged him and left to take his position…

COM: best of luck mayank .. I have full trust on u…

Mayank for second closed his eyes and prayed tht he will get success in this mission and as benji said he will get to see Nupur now…. He cant take it anymore…

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Nupur on the other hand was now resting but she was feeling abit weird…freak her health was now really going done.. slight back pain and now nausea.. she look at the time it was 5 am already mayank should be on his way.. he must be.. just she hope everything went good.. her hand was slightly paining has it was tied now.. she want to be free as she needs a gun when they will cum inside … hope she will get tht too…

She can see they have start organizing there thing and from the center lounge two of the man start transferring the things out near a private plane..

She was now getting more restless.. mayank pls cum soon warna yaha se nikal gay loog tu sary baat tum per aay gi…

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Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Api plzz jaldi update kardo
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rimshazeb

Api plzz jaldi update kardo



kerdiya update u can read😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
itna chota update :O
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am really excited...
looking forward to it:)

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