AN ASYA SS:confession due after marraigePART7 pg15

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navyay

@navyay

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey story begins after nikaah...they are a perfectly married couple to the worldd

asad and zoya..even after living happliy after 6 months of marraige together there is some unhappiness in zoyaa..though zoya knew asad loved her so much but never confessed..she is awaiting for that bright day of her life

other side asad loves her so takes good care of her but feels she is staying away from him beacause she needs time for physical relationship but unaware of the fact that she is waiting for him to confess :(

i m a newbie should i continue or not...if encoureaged it ll be a romantic updateee

PART 1 :PG 3

part 2:pg 5

part 3:page 7

part 4:page 9

part 5:page 11

part 6:page 13

part 7:pg 15

Edited by navyay - 12 years ago

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navyay

@navyay

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Posted: 12 years ago

just now noticed that there are many views for my story but no comments i m very disappointed...sorry for wasting ur time😭

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y.c.yetikaroxx

@y.c.yetikaroxx

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Posted: 12 years ago

Do cont. And do write SS or FF before ur tittle coz ryt now it looks as iff u r predicting or just posting ur views 😊. May be dats y less ppl hv commented.

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey its seems nice do continue it start ur story & then see u will get good response & plz pm me if possible

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Fimmy

@Fimmy

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey dear! Don't be disappointed... The concept is superb! Plzz cont soon... Eagerly waiting for next part! 😃

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sweetone

@sweetone

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Posted: 12 years ago

it sounds really interesting. please continue and write SS in the title, i assure you, you'll get more comments then. because the title sounds like a piece of news and not a story.

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ALISHA ZEN

@LuvUAsYa

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Posted: 12 years ago

continue n please PM me!!!

its intrstng!!!

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navyay

@navyay

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Posted: 12 years ago

part 1:

it was one pleasent morning and asad was getting ready for office just then zoya walked in wearing a beatiful pink saree with a coffee..seeing her like that asad thanked god foe bringing such a angel into his life

asad: gd mng zoeee...u luk so beautiful in this saree

zoya: she blushed at the fact that her husband was admiring her.but soon her smile was replaced by a sad expression that asad didnt confess her(when she was thinking these)..asad pulled her into a hug and he was njoying her frangrance..he started kissing her on the forehead then the nose but wen he was to kiss her on the lips...he could feel a drop on his face and soon he realised that it was zoya s tearrr

then realisation struck asad this was not the first time zoya escaped or somehow left when he was romancing with her..but he never understood the reason behind it..(poor asad).

then asad immediately left her and told soory zoya if i had hurt you i am sorry and left the room with lot of sadness :(

theh dilshad was caliing hin when he reached hall but asad was in no mood to reply and dilshad as always guessed something was wrong and thought to find it out from zoya.

dil:wat happened zoya???asad left very sadly?

zoya: she started weeping continously...

then dilshad comforted zoya and found out what happened...she was shocked to hear all this that asad has not confessed all this whilee

precap:dilshad taking to asad and asya confession :)

should i continue or not????ur comments matter a lot to me