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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys i'm going to make a OS on Tanveer, Zoya and Asad. Hope you guys like it.




Party Accident



Asad and Zoya have been married for one year, and they love each other and are willing to do anything for each other. Asad was getting ready to go to one of his friend's party. During the party, Asad gets over drunk and this girl named Tanveer comes up to Asad and says hey "babe", are you enjoying the party, here have some more drink. Asad starts to think that it's Zoya. Tanveer was wearing a short dress and Asad is shocked seeing her in the dress and he says "why are you wearing this short dress?" and Tanveer says "babe I think you are over drunk" and he says "No I'm not drunk, and go to the room right now and change." Tanveer says "no, I'm not going to change, I'm comfortable in this dress." Asad says "Go change right now or else I will change it for you." Tanveer says "Ok I will change but you will have to come with me." Asad says "ok" and he goes with her. In the room, seeing Tanveer change turns Asad up and he starts to bang her. When they are about to reach the climax, a call comes and Asad is shocked seeing the name. Asad gets up and says if Zoya's calling my then who are you? and Tanveer says i'm Zoya my phone got stolen and Asad believes her (Asad is still really drunk) and they go to sleep. The next morning, Asad realizes that it wasn't Zoya but it was Tanveer his childhood friend. Asad is really angry and says that why didn't you stop me? and she says that Jammy nothing happened. 2 or 3 days later a call comes and Asad is shocked. The call was from Tanveer saying that she is pregnant. Asad says who's baby is that and Tanveer says that it's you baby. Believe me Jammy it's you baby. And Zoya hears it all. Zoya takes the phone and starts talking to her and says that it can't be Asad's baby because my Asad would never do this especially to her childhood friend. Tanveer says no this is Asad's baby. Zoya say's come over to my house right now. And then they go for DNA testing and the DNA doesn't match and Asad kicks Taveer out and that it Zoya and Asad live happily ever after.









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Posted: 12 years ago
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umm...can u tweak the situation or something coz if u write it in any more detail ppl are not exactly gonna like it. No harm meant.
Edited by stereohearts200 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sure but wht did u want me to change about the situation
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: masaf57

Sure but wht did u want me to change about the situation


U know, abt the asad tanveer in the same rook thing. I did find ur os quite harmless but still u know we all hate tanveer on this forum and we really dont want the jaanu thing happening and all that. So what I'm trying to say is that ppl might misunderstand ur os for a bashing post if u know what I mean. Until now I didn't find anything offending in ur os but all the same if u were to continue plz dont make a jammy tannu scene, instead do something like asad strangling her for taking advantage of him. Now that is something worth reading. Oh how I wish for a scene where asad will strangle tanveer๐Ÿ˜†. Ok before I get too violent I'm gonna stop. So plz do something like that coz we all wud love to read something like that. Dont know if u like jaanu better then asya coz the title says jaanu but if u do like asya write something on them. Sorry if I hurt u, not my intention. Peace.๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
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not much of a jaanu fan! i might've joined the AT but i'mma true Asyaian
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Posted: 12 years ago
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m curious...whos call was that๐Ÿ˜†

Edited by nupsie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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the call must be from zoya... ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pieryrose

the call must be from zoya...
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Everyones conclusion was that he was drunk and he thought it was Zoya. ๐Ÿ˜†

Gosh! I can't believe i just commented on this filthy OS.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cup-Of-Chai



Everyones conclusion was that he was drunk and he thought it was Zoya. ๐Ÿ˜†

Gosh! I can't believe i just commented on this filthy OS.
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dun say that Sadia...its a JaaNu OS afterall๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cup-Of-Chai



Everyones conclusion was that he was drunk and he thought it was Zoya. ๐Ÿ˜†

Gosh! I can't believe i just commented on this filthy OS.
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really.. i think thats what actually happend... are u guys mind readers ๐Ÿ˜†

congratulations CNN , cox u comeented on such a dirty OS...
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