~Good Girl And Bad Boy~thread 2 added

Aliya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#511

Superb superb superb
RK and Ranveer r just too smart 😆
They "kidnapped" their girls 😆 loved the "roadside romeo" part at the beginning 🤣 aii thank u so much for using it 🤗
Aww I love this cute rishab.. Poor guy wants to kiss her.. But Madhu's reaction was so funny 🤣
How can u say its bad? 😲 it isn't bad at all.. It's awesome 😳
Plss update ASAP 😊
And plss add me to your pm list 😳 sometimes I forget checking your ff 😳

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Trishna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#512

wow they are couples now... but their never ending fight...nice update

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roop2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#513

lovely update, Loved it😃

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princessradhika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#514

Okay, first of all I am really sorry for commenting so late.. i know that I haven't commented on the latest three updates but I have read them in my phone..so sorry that I couldn't comment earlier, actually I was so tensed about my result and all that..but finally I am free now..

Lets start from part-20: well it the funniest part, madhu was really hilarious, I mean who does this kind of behaviour..she was checking her face for any change cause of one kiss..such a kid she is

Aww..i just love ranveer- madhu bond, both are cute…ranveer thought that she won't want to be his friend after what he did..really how stupid they can be..in one hand madhu has locked herself in the room and here he is thinking that she is faking illness cause of him…

And now my fav part in this update..rishabh is one smart boy..no way he was gonna buy the excuse madhu was giving..seriously pretending to sleep just to avoid rishabh..rishabh's letter to madhu was the best..only they can handle each other..both are mad..

Finally, some girl's time..i am loving this new friendly bond between madhu & ishu..so ranveer & ishita made up and omg rishabh and madhu kissed in the kiss room, though I guessed it before..so rishabh's earlier words came true and he did steal madhu's first kiss…

Part-21: its starts from ranveer's pov…quiet interesting and the mirror part is indeed the truth..then came the brotherly moments..aah I love these scenes, clearly ranveer was so possessive about madhu..i mean he knows his brother all his life..but he doesn't want to take any risk in madhu's case, even if its his own brother..just loved him in this scene..

The part where we got know of rishabh's excuse about not kissing anyone was hilarious..what an idea sirjii..clearly it was best..so the boys are planning to get their girls and other side girls are trying to avoid them…

Madhu and Ishita scenes were good..they really need girls time..at the end what was that?..someone kidnapped madhu..though we know the kidnapper well enough..once again amazing update

Part-22: in this part we gor rishabh's pov and it clears to us what is in his mind, madhu belongs to him..loved this part specially, his irritation about ranveer not finding him worth madhu was cute, he definately isn't a roadside romeo..he is so funny..

Rishabh has gone mad, was that a way to propose a girl..damn funny, at first he brings her in a haunted house, which it isn't and then proposed to her in that weird way..ranveer needs to give him some dating tips but I don't think he would be any good too..these kumdra brothers has some serious head problems..no worries about that too cause their partners will fix them well..and rishabh & madhu already got into their first couple fight, wow…awesome just full entertainment package, we got everything in this ff..

DO UPDATE SOON ..THANX FOR THE PM..

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pkanchan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#515

nice update...

loved it...😊

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take_a_hint

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Posted: 12 years ago

#516

( Banner credits Goes To aakriti18)

PART 23

*Rishab's POV*

I can't believe this. I cursed myself for coming with my problems to him. He is being such an a** to me. I glanced at Ranveer from where i was sitting he was wasting his time in facebook as if whatever i am telling was insignificant. Remember me to hack his account and embarrass him. My phone buzzed and i checked the notification from facebook.

' Ranveer Khundra has changed his relationship status to in relationship with Ishita kapoor '

Now i guess why he is all happy mood today and ignoring my issues. I immediately logged in to my account and commented on his photo, a recent one with Ishita where she was hugging his waist and both were grinning. From the background i guess its the very lake from where i kidnapped barbie doll.

" Turn around and talk to me " i wrote and clicked comment

Ranveer turned to look at me with 'can-you-just f_off look'. I stared at him pointedly.

"take care of yourself" He said

" 'ome on For god's sake i am your brother " i cribbed.

"you were being a jerk" he said

" thanks brother thats helping " i said

" Poor girl may be already regretting accepting to be your girlfriend " Ranveer said turning to his PC.

" It was not as a big issue as she reacted" i said

" of course she was right. No fool will try to do that. You should understand girls " he said

" so you understand? " i asked

" No that is why i quit trying to understand them" he said with a smirk
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I really think Ranveer will be the first person to be happy if i break up with Madhu. Did he just find out that Madhu is his long lost sister or something that he is always being protective and possessive? oh Hell no i don't want to think about it then she will be my sister as well.

" should i go talk to her? " i asked

" wait till tomorrow evening if she didn't come then you should take the first step" he said.

For the first time today he spoke something useful. Now i should learn patience.

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*Madhu's POV*

" I don't know" i answered Ishita in phone.

We have been talking in phone for past two hours. She was telling how cute Ranveer apologized and gifted her favorite perfume. And i was elaborating my fight with Rishab.

" Are you regretting saying yes? " she asked

" nope " i said instantly

" Then what is the problem? Does his touch give you any creepy feeling? " she asked

" No. I kinda like it" i said

" so then? "

" It was so sudden. I mean all these days i have considered him as my biggest enemy he being a moron and all but suddenly he is my boyfriend its too much for me to handle. And when he tried to kiss it was well i wasn't feeling the moment " i confessed

" Are you scared? " ishitha asked after a pause

" Maybe " i replied genuinely.

" listen Madhu if you really like him just erase all your insecurities and live the moment. Later in your life you don't have to sit and wonder what interesting things you had in your life" she said

I am being a fool. Ishtha is right i am over reacting. I like Rishab and that is the ultimate truth of my life at this point. I should forget everything and live my life which i failed in the past. Even if things didn't work in future i want some happy memories to cherish. With a clear head i slept awaiting the morning eagerly.

I dressed in my best. I was wearing a blue jean and white shirt that fit perfectly. I wish Rishab likes white. I tied my hair in a pony tail and applied baby pink lip gloss and khol to add effect to my eyes. I carried big brown hand bag that my mom gifted for my 16th birthday. I hopped to Ranveer's room. He was facing his back to me. I think he guessed my presence because he stopped with whatever he was doing.

" so now you have decided to tell me" Ranveer turned to look at me with his eyebrows raised accusingly.

" I am sorry i was really messed up yesterday " i said walking towards him and standing by his side. I suddenly realized how tall he is considering i reach only to his shoulders. I should run to get my heels.

" i know " he said nodding

" now i am not running a company to give any free relationship advice here you both better understand that " he said crossing his arms.

" No. I just wanted a favor. As far as advise is concerned i got it from your partner " i winked

" seriously Madhu!! Do you understand how crazy she is? " he said with an amused look

" well not crazier than your brother " i said

" agreed " he said raising his hands in acceptance.

" so can you just ask Rishab to take me in his bike to a certain place " i asked making pleading puppy face

" i will tell you what Ishita thinks about your date " i added

" do you really think i want to discuss with you about my date ? " he raised his eyebrows

" come on you are my best friend " i said

" fine" he said hiding a smile

I jumped in joy. I was about to leave his room when Ranveer called me.

" by the way what Ishita thinks about our date? " he asked rather uncomfortably

" ow Ranveer how can you discuss with me about your date " i said in fake horror.

Ranveer rolled his eyes making me giggle.

" she thought you were cute " i said. He made wired expression at the word cute.

Rishab was already on his bike when i went there. He was wearing his helmet so i couldn't read his expressions. I climbed behind him. I didn't know what to do so i silently held the handle and tried to balance how much ever i was desperate to hold him.

We reached at the cafe far away from the town. It was almost abandoned except a couple of passers by having coffee.

" what did you want here? ' Rishab asked looking around confused

" i ... umm... well ... yeah i wanted bread butter jam... it tastes good " i said

He gave me 'are-you-mad-look i just ignored and collected some bread butter jam for both of us.

" can we sit there? " i asked pointing at the rock long away under a tree

Rishab nodded and we walked there. Helping me sit on the rock Rishab climbed beside me. We began to chew in silence.

" I am sorry " he was the first to speak.

I pouted. I have planned all this to apologize and he just like that said sorry. I turned to look at him when our gaze met.

" i know you want to say the same " he said.

" i... i am sorry. I was over reacting " i apologized.

" i shouldn't have snapped at you " i said after a pause

" i was being an a** i ll not try to kiss you again" he said

" Why? " i asked in horror

God i would have sounded very obvious and desperate. Sh*t. Rishab laughed seeing my expression.

" god you are so cute " he said pulling me into a side hug and placed a peck on my forehead.

" listen barbie doll i know i am stupid and so i want you to be the reasonable one in the relationship. Never forget that i am still your moron Khundra and i don't mean half of the things i say " he said. It felt important at this point.

" i know" i said understandingly. I didn't know what else to reply.

" so it was your plan to come here? I was wondering what happened to my dearest brother that he asked me to take to this cafe' Rishab said stretching out his hand.

" i thought we need an isolated place to talk" i said

" now that we are already late we can bunk the college " he said grinning

" Rishab i have already missed too much " i complained " thanks to you Khundras"

" come on barbie doll don't sound like a geek. Blame me if you don't pass " he said

I couldn't have argued. Alone time with your boyfriend is always tempting than lectures. Rishab bought us ice cream. Rishab leaned on the tree and i was sitting between his legs leaning on him. It wasn't very sunny so we were enjoying.

" you know that your shirt is lifted up slightly when you are sitting like this right? " Rishab asked biting the wafer of the ice cream.

Umm. Yeah i know it. The shirt is unusually small that reach exactly to cover my waist so i am aware that when i lift my arms or sit it will reveal some flesh. But what to do i wanted to impress Rishab. I wagged my eyebrows at Rishab suggestively.

" so you don't mind if i take advantage, right? " he asked curiously

" maybe" i shrugged.

Rishab beamed before his hands sneaked to my exposed waist. I can't believe i am actually letting him touch me. But it felt so right. And i have promised myself not to over think anything when it comes to Rishab and just live the moment. Rishab's hands were on my bare waist and his thumb was caressing the space around my belly button. I closed my eyes and leaned my head on him. He nuzzled my neck but the collar of my shirt was making it impossible to touch my skin. I giggled seeing him sigh.

" Its not funny" he said

I tilted my head sideways to look at him. He didn't look as annoyed as his voice sounded in fact he was smiling.

" Barbie doll i want you to know that when i touch you its not about lust. Its just that i like being with you umm you know like having you around, touching you " he looked everywhere trying to get words to explain.

" i understand "i said. He looked into my eyes. " Because i know how it feels " i leaned to place a quick peck on his lips.

" you realize you are inviting trouble, right? " he raised his one eyebrow.

"well i want to be troubled, by you " i said poking the tip of his nose.

"Barbie doll i think we should go on a date. Like actual movie/books type date " he said excitement beaming in his eyes.

" like normal couples" i asked

" yup" he said stressing the 'p'.

" oh" i shrugged.

"Don't forget barbie doll this time i need a proper kiss after the date" he winked.

I giggled. I already have something to give me a sleepless night.

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Thanks for waiting. I am kind of free for now. So will try to update the next part soon so make sure to like and comment ASAP.

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Edited by NANDY_BRU - 12 years ago

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revti21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#517

Lovly update...that wass raelly beautifull dat dey undestand each other so well...bt pls pls dont leave small cute fights btn...bt nt a big one...i dont want dat...

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